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Error Observer

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"If you score 100%, the System finds you. If you score 0%, it deletes you." Kang-Dae Kim lives his life at exactly 90.0%. While the people of Gangnam scroll their phones, Kang-Dae tracks the world’s rendering delays: shadows that lag by 1.8 milliseconds, streetlights flickering at 7Hz, and faces that aren't fully rendered. He is an Apex Observer, a sentient glitch in a reality built from the decaying neurons of a primordial consciousness. For three semesters, Kang-Dae’s 90% average was the perfect radar evasion. But when a Physics midterm score is rounded up, the simulation’s "Core Guardians" are triggered to delete the error. Now, he must navigate Void Junction at Track 44—a temporal rift where logic breaks down—to collect 103 data fragments before reality flatlines. "I am the error the system never intended to compile."
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Chapter 1 - (01)The Gray Pixels of Gangnam

HOOK START: Gangnam ki neon lights raat ke sannate mein chamak rahi thin, par Kang-Dae ke liye wo chamak ek halki si lag ki tarah thi. Uski hyper-vigilance ne detect kiya—ek ladki street cross kar rahi thi, uska shadow uske sharir se 1.8 milliseconds peeche...

Gangnam station ke bahar, raat ke 10:32 par, neon lights ki chamak hawa mein thandi si lag rahi thi. Kang-Dae Seoul National University ke main gate par khada tha, left hand jeans pocket mein daale, right hand backpack ka single strap pakde hue. Uske black hoodie ka hood peeche gira tha, dark hair perfectly center-parted. Niche Olympic-rohi road par bheed chal rahi thi—office workers apne phones scroll karte, college couples hand-in-hand, rickshaw wale apne horns bajate hue traffic mein ghusne ki koshish karte.

Ek ladki white sneakers aur denim jacket mein zebra crossing cross kar rahi thi. Uska right foot shadow exactly 1.8 milliseconds uske actual step se peeche tha—rendering delay. 15 feet aage, middle-aged salaryman ka black leather briefcase uske left knee movement se 0.4mm offset par swing kar raha tha. Do bacche red cycles par daud rahe the—handle grips tunnel lights mein 2 frames late jud rahe the, visible seams. Normal insaan ye sab dekh kar beparwah nikal jaata. Kang-Dae ne mentally log kiya—Visual anomaly #1, #2, #3—par chehra completely neutral rakha, aankhein 15° right ki cigarette stall ki taraf seedhi.

Phone nikala right pocket se—Samsung Galaxy Z Fold 6, matte black. Screen unlock hua face scan se. Physics II midterm results glow kar rahe the: 89.7/100 (rounded to 90). Professor Kim Soo-Hyun ki awaaz Wednesday 3PM lecture se yaad aayi: "Kang-Dae-ssi, teen consecutive semesters consistent 90%. Aapka potential waste ho raha hai." Usne tab sirf 2mm corner-of-mouth smile diya tha, perfect social camouflage. 100% laata to department head notice karta, academic scholarship committee track karta, system flags karta. 90% perfect radar evasion tha. Phone screen off kiya, power button 2 seconds hold, pocket mein wapas. Backpack adjust kiya left shoulder par, Gangnam station main entrance ki taraf normal 1.2 meters/second pace se chal pada.

Hawa mein faint static electricity mehsoos hua—exactly 50 meters ahead left side streetlight pole ka circular base 3 pixels mein micro-flicker kar raha tha, 7Hz frequency par. Normal pedestrian traffic flow completely unaffected—ek ajussi apna poodle leke usi pole ke paas se guzar gayi, zero reaction.

Ticket counter ki line mein 7 log the—3 office workers, 2 high school girls, 1 drunk ajusshi, 1 college ladka samne. Samne wale ladke ka right hand contactless card tap karte hue machine par 0.2 seconds zyada hover kiya. Left pupil dilation 15% above baseline, forehead par 6 sweat beads 0.1mm diameter ke. Nervous system spike clear tha. Kang-Dae exactly 3 feet peeche distance maintain karke observe karta raha, breathing rate steady 14 breaths/minute, shoulders relaxed 5° forward lean. Ladka ticket beep sunke platform direction gaya—har 4th step mein left shoulder blade 1.2° zyada rotate ho raha tha, concealed weight carry pattern.

Kang-Dae ne apna T-money card tap kiya—clean single beep, balance display ₩18,420, zero processing delay. Platform 4 par khada hua, yellow safety line se exactly 2 feet peeche. Line 2 train 10:37 par aayi, silver exterior normal reflective. Darwaze slide open, moderate crowd—peak hour khatam ho chuka tha. Corner window seat left side mili. Baitha, backpack knees par rakha, right elbow window ledge par rest. Tunnel walls guzarne lage—smooth metal panels, par exactly 237-meter mark par emergency light reflection 3 frames slow tha, visible stutter. Pattern #1 logged: Environmental rendering lag.

Namsan Arts Center station par darwaze khule. Char ladke group enter hua—early 20s, identical black hoodies, matching white Nike Air Force 1s. Leader type (188cm, buzzcut) ne iPhone 15 Pro Max nikala, KakaoTalk message type kiya. Right thumb pressure uneven—same 5-letter word "파티" (party) ko delete button 4 consecutive times dabaya tha. Right gaal zygomatic muscle 0.001mm twitch jab "party" retype kiya. Jhoot encode clear. Kang-Dae ka internal processing matrix activate: 15% probability family emergency cover story, 25% underground fight club invite, 40% prescription drug deal, 20% basic boredom. Last line protocol: Trust boundary cross = immediate distance enforcement.

Train Hongik University station par 10:49 par ruk gayi. Short ladka (165cm) group se ne black JanSport backpack se blue plastic water bottle nikali—Evian label edges 0.1mm blur, counterfeit confirmed. Cap screw karte hue 3rd attempt par tight hua. Kang-Dae ne casually window ki taraf aankhein hata li, no direct engagement. Risk assessment complete: Zero immediate threat vector.

11:02 PM university campus main entrance wapas pahuncha. Central Library 24/7 finals week mein khuli thi. Biometric palm scanner normal green light, "Welcome, Kang-Dae Kim" display. Third floor northwest corner isolated table choose ki—wall-backed, single entry point visible. Asus ROG Zephyrus G16 khola, three-layer VPN tunnel activate (Seoul → Tokyo → Amsterdam). Target file pull kiya—47-hour firewall breach wala ancient computational physics treatise, 1824 pages. Screen load hua 23 seconds mein, cursor line 847 par freeze ho gaya:

"Decaying neurons fire terminal sparks as primordial consciousness fragments. Observed stellar phenomena = rotting synaptic memories. Galactic clusters = fragmented thought residuals. Observer detection threshold exceeded.

"Lattice structure diagram center page par—bio-mechanical neural web, 10^12 nodes visible at 400% zoom. Har node decaying spark pattern emit kar raha tha, identical to Cepheid variable stars. Bottom margin red pulse warning: "Glitch observer confirmed. Subject ID: Kang-Dae Kim. Pattern recognition depth 14 layers. Threat level: Critical. Containment protocol initiating.

"Screen violently freeze, RGB fans 20% louder spin-up detect. Kang-Dae calmly power button 7 seconds long-press—hard shutdown complete. Laptop 3 minutes cool-down, then backpack mein pack. Zero panic indicators, heart rate steady 72 BPM.

Raat 1:12 AM Oakwood Premier Coex Suite 1207 pahuncha. Double deadbolt lock + biometric palm scanner + 6-digit PIN sequence. Adjacent room 1208 mein younger brother So-Min so raha tha—even breathing 16 breaths/minute, no distress micro-movements. Samsung tablet par KakaoTalk notification: "Hyung, kal school trip Jeju Island. 8AM bus pickup from gym. Late aaunga, 10PM return." Kang-Dae ne reply type kiya: "Raho safe. Extra water bottle leja, hydration critical." Send. Internal risk matrix simultaneous calculation: 40% scheduled transport safe, 20% adverse weather variables, 15% mechanical failure probability, 10% group dynamics friction, 15% unknown exogenous factors.

Bed par supine position, room lights full off. White ceiling paint initially uniform, par 47 seconds continuous observation ke baad 2.3mm diameter spot mein micro-flicker detect—exactly 8.3 seconds interval, 4 pixels flipping. Pattern amplitude +0.01% per minute incremental. Perfect darkness establish karne ke liye main lights + emergency exit signage simultaneously off. Flicker exponentially pronounced—data stream fracture jaise crack propagation.

Corridor se approaching footsteps detect—cadence irregular, 1.1 seconds/stride. Heartbeat rhythm completely absent, flatline biometric silence. Non-human process inbound.

Kang-Dae silent combat roll bed se right side, socks remove kiye bare feet silent placement. Door knob 3 inches approach par pause. Corridor emergency lighting flicker initiate—tall silhouette doorway threshold par materialize. Charcoal gray tailored suit, face 70% rendered only (cheekbones, jawline incomplete). Right hand pants pocket mein rectangular device outline. Second observer profile? Par silhouette edges jagged instability, decay pattern analysis maximum 2 layers penetration. Kang-Dae internal scan 14 layers clean depth.

Silhouette 8 feet halt, pupils unnaturally dilated 9mm. Static-corrupted vocalization: "Tu bhi dekh sakta hai? Lattice decay? Neural spark patterns? Dead thought core access imminent?"

Kang-Dae door 4.2 inches ajar, direct eye contact maintain. Silhouette right hand pocket extraction initiate—fingers edges 1.1mm transparent, material phase instability. "Mat aage badh, Kang-Dae Kim. Tera 90% camouflage protocol Void Junction mein fail. System recalculation trigger hoga.

"Single step forward executed. Silhouette violently destabilized—complete entity gray particulate disintegration, floor deposit single translucent object. Data fragment, non-metallic, center engraving luminescent: "Track 44 - Void Junction Access. System Integrity: 88.5%. Observer Class: Apex.