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Mind’s Echo

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A man wakes up for his normal commute but discovers he can read the thoughts and memories of everyone he sees, plunging him into a day of jarring revelation, only to wake up again and find the nightmare might not be over.
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Chapter 1 - The Familiar Him

Dev's alarm clock was a tyrant with a specific, unforgiving agenda. 6:30 AM. The illuminated digits were a small, red burn against the beige predictability of his bedroom. He hit the snooze button with the practiced accuracy of a man who believed in the absolute sanctity of a schedule. Every day for the past six years, the routine had been a shield: shower, strong black coffee, the precise knot of a Windsor tie, and the same subway line to the same cubicle at Consolidated Data Services.

He was Dev—short for Devan name too long for polite society and far too lively for the man who wore it. He was quiet, meticulous, and entirely unremarkable. And he liked it that way. Unremarkable was safe.

THE FIRST STATIC :

The subway car was the usual morning sardine can: humid, rattling, and silent with the practiced courtesy of strangers avoiding eye contact. Dev gripped the polished silver pole, a silent anchor in the swaying crowd.

Across the aisle, a woman in a rumpled suit looked utterly exhausted. Her eyes were shadowed, fixed on a point just beyond the window. Dev glanced at her, registering only a flicker of detached pity.

Then, it happened.

It wasn't a voice. It was a breach.

A chaotic, pressurized rush of data flooded his mind, bypassing his ears and eyes, slamming directly into his consciousness.

...stressful fight with her boss, the humiliating dressing-down over the quarterly report... the faint, fierce, and cherished memory of a small hand gripping her finger, her daughter's first steps on the hospital linoleum... worry about next month's rent, the desperate calculation of hours versus bills...

Dev gasped, the sound a ragged, sudden thing in the subway's drone. The woman didn't move. No one noticed. The sheer, vibrant reality of her inner life—the raw, beautiful, terrifying mess of it—had been poured into his brain like molten lead.

He gripped the pole, his knuckles white, sweat immediately beading on his forehead.

What was that? A migraine? A dizzy spell?

He risked a look at the man next to him. A tall, clean-cut fellow engrossed in his phone. Dev tried to focus on the man's jacket, on the stitching, on anything mundane.

Too late.

The deluge began again.

He knew the man's name: Jay. He knew him Jay's utterly predictable secret crush on the Accounts Payable clerk, Priya. He knew about the pathetic, petty theft of a video game from a college roommate ten years ago, a secret Jay still woke up in a cold sweat over.

Dev's heart hammered a frantic rhythm against his ribs. This wasn't a dizzy spell. This was a walking, talking receiver of every hidden thought and memory within range. He was overwhelmed, terrified. He had become an unintentional, unwilling voyeur, suddenly knowing too much about these strangers. He'd lost the essential, insulating privacy of his own mind.