The bitter chill of winter gripped the land, its icy fingers clawing through the streets as the north wind howled like a chorus of restless spirits. Snow danced in the air, swirling and twirling before settling softly on the rooftops, only to be brutally swept away by the wind's merciless gusts. Yet, in defiance of the gloomy sky, a shaft of sunlight broke through the clouds, casting a pale glow over the frozen landscape. But despite its radiant beam, the sunlight brought no warmth, and the air remained biting and bitter.
In stark contrast to the frozen world outside, Yongning Pavilion was an oasis of warmth and tranquility. The crunch of snow beneath the footsteps of a maidservant echoed through the stillness as she carried a steaming medicinal meal into the pavilion. As she entered, the door swung open, releasing a warm, golden light that momentarily illuminated the snow-covered courtyard.
Inside, the pavilion was a haven of springtime warmth. The air was thick with the scent of burning charcoal, and the incense burner emitted a gentle, curling mist that carried the promise of comfort. Soft couches were strewn with plush, inviting cushions, and the atmosphere was heavy with the promise of relaxation. On one such couch, a young woman lay half-reclined, her slender fingers wrapped loosely around a worn leather-bound book. Her eyes were closed, and her chest rose and fell with a gentle, soothing rhythm, as if the warmth of the pavilion had lulled her into a peaceful reverie. The storybook, forgotten in her hand, seemed to be a mere prop to her tranquil slumber, a testament to the serene ambiance that enveloped her.
She was draped in a delicate, gauze-like dress that seemed to whisper against her skin, its light, airy fabric barely hinting at the curves beneath. Her long, silky hair cascaded down her back like a waterfall of night, its smooth, dark tresses spread out around her like a luxurious cloak. Her eyebrows, delicately arched like the wings of a bird in flight, framed her face, accentuating her otherworldly beauty. She was a vision, a goddess stepped out of an ancient mural, radiant and untouchable, as if her very presence commanded reverence and admiration from afar.
The maid's hands trembled as she carefully placed the medicinal food on the table, her movements hesitant, as if she feared disturbing the tranquil atmosphere. Despite her efforts, a faint sound escaped her lips, a soft clink that shattered the silence like a stone cast into a still pond.
The woman on the soft couch stirred, her eyes slowly opening like the petals of a flower unfolding to greet the sun. Her long, curled eyelashes cast a faint shadow on her fair skin, adding depth to her already captivating features.
The maid's eyes dropped, and she knelt down with a thud, her body folding into a submissive pose. Her voice trembled as she spoke, the words spilling out like a confession: "Miss, please forgive me, I know I was wrong, I know I was wrong."
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Qiao Wanyan frowned slightly, her delicate features etched with discomfort, as the maid Ziyuan stepped forward, her voice laced with venom. "You clumsy fool, disturbing Miss's afternoon rest! I'll give you a good thrashing today!"
Zi Yuan grabbed the little maid by the collar, her hand raised to strike, but just as her palm was about to land on the girl's face, a melodious voice like a clear spring rang out behind her. "Ziyuan, that's enough. Just tell her to leave. You're a sweet girl, why do you always want to hurt someone?"
Qiao Wanyan rubbed her temples, her beautiful eyes half-closed, her mood not too good. Who would be in a good mood, after all, if they suddenly found themselves transported into a book they'd only read out of boredom? And of all the characters to become, why did she have to become the one she liked the least?
As a girl who had been taught to be polite and kind by her family since birth, she couldn't understand why the body she was now possessing belonged to the heroine of this story - a character known for her ruthless and cunning nature. Qiao Wanyan's own personality was a stark contrast to the original owner's, and she struggled to reconcile the two.
To make matters worse, the winter weather was bitterly cold, and the original owner had caught a cold after attending a banquet at the Grand Tutor's Mansion half a month ago. Now, Qiao Wanyan was suffering from a pounding headache, and this fragile body seemed to be doing its best to make her miserable. She sighed inwardly, wondering what lay ahead in this strange new world, and how she would survive in this place.
Spending her days recuperating in her bedroom, bored out of her mind, she asked Ziyuan to buy some captivating storybooks to pass the time and spark her imagination. In the story, the original owner is the most beloved daughter in her family, adored by all who know her. Her extraordinary talent and breathtaking beauty are unmatched among the noble ladies in the capital, making her a true gem of the imperial court. Her childhood sweetheart is the son of the Emperor's favorite concubine, a young man of great charm and promise. Even if she doesn't become the Empress, she'll still be a noble and esteemed princess, living a life of luxury and privilege. But she's actually a vicious female lead who abandoned and used her childhood sweetheart, coveted power and wealth, and loved vanity above all else. Her sole purpose is to defeat her elder sister Qiao Yihuan, the previous female lead, and claim the throne for herself. She'll snatch everything away from her and drive her to dark thoughts, leaving destruction and despair in her wake.