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[Scene: Open Sea – Day] The waters within a hundred meters vanish instantly, evaporated by the sheer force of a collision. A wide, hollow, waterless space emerges, eerily calm yet brimming with tension. El-Mond is rocketed back by the colossal beast, plummeting toward the ocean floor. The impact shatters the seabed beneath him. The waterless void collapses back into the sea, swallowing the space he momentarily occupied. El-Mond coughs blood, his body trembling from the collision, but his eyes burn with unyielding determination. Inner monologue (text floating near him in jagged font for intensity): "This… this is beyond anything I've faced… both in my past life and now. If I hold back even a little… I WILL DIE! And I refuse!. Not now! Not ever!" He catapults himself upward with Tremendous force, shattering the seabed further. His hands stretch toward the beast. Void blood forms instantly, a dark, pulsating orb the size of a bowling ball, shooting straight at the colossal creature. The beast retaliates with a barrage of tentacle strikes, each moving at nanosecond speed, slicing the air toward El-Mond. El-Mond's body moves like liquid up, down, left, right, weaving through the enormous tentacles while hundreds of void blood strikes erupt from his hands, vaporizing chunks of the beast's skin. Sound FX floating around the strikes: CRASH! SHATTER! WHOOSH! He bursts above the beast again, letting out a blood-curdling scream, raining myriads of void blood strikes, like a hailstorm of destruction. Even as dust and smoke blind him, the strikes continue. A minute passes. El-Mond finally stops, breathing heavily, pale, drained… yet ignoring his pain. He peers down. His eyes widen in shock: The beast's countless wounds are healing, at an alarming rate, the holes closing by the Second!. As if time itself conspires against him. "What is this!? How… is it… healing!? Eldred… how did the emperor powerhouses kill the other one?!" Eldred, hovering beside him, solemnly replies: "Master… according to the scrolls and legends… after the beasts took a fatal strike, it sank into the sea. The emperor powerhouses, exhausted and wary of each other, assumed it dead, as its energy vanished." El-Mond grits his teeth, fury written across his face: "Cowardly bastards! DAMMIT!" His eyes narrow, focus sharpening: "It either dies… or I do. and like hell!. I'm not planning to." He stretches his hand toward the beast, summoning every ounce of energy, but Visual cue: El-Mond is engulfed in black, starry energy, his body like the night, filled with the brilliance of the stars, his hair turning cloudywhite, eyes blue like the ocean. The beast lunges again. Tentacles appear behind him in a blink, but El-Mond vanishes and reappears directly before the beast. The colossal beast recoils, fear creeping into its monstrous form for the first time. "Fear of erasure… fear of being wiped from all realms…" El-Mond raises a hand, voice commanding: "BE GONE!" The sea splits in three massive strokes of energy, ripping the beast into three sections. But El-Mond's night form collapses, unconscious. He plummets. "Master!? Master! Wake up! It's still alive!!" Eldred screams frantically. The beast begins reassembling itself, jaw opening wide to swallow El-Mond whole End of scene – tension at its peak, Think its good?. Start from chapter 1.
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Chapter 1 - Chapter 1. Treachery

Blood soaked into the ancient stone

as El-Mond collapsed to one knee,

his breath ragged, each inhale burning

through the stab wound in his chest.

"Why… kill me…?" he gasped,

crimson spilling from the corner of his lips.

"Brork… we grew up together. We were like brothers."

His vision trembled, yet he forced his eyes

open, glaring at the man before him.

"What did I do to you…? Why join hands

with her to kill me…? What for…?"

The final words dissolved into a wet cough.

Brork stood calmly, sword lowered,

a mocking smile carved across his face.

"El-Mond… my dear brother," he said softly,

almost tenderly. "You really never understood anything."

El-Mond's eyes narrowed.

"I was already sharing your wife's bed

long before you ever married her."

The world seemed to freeze.

El-Mond's pupils shrank, disbelief

flooding his face.

Beside Brork, Luna leaned against him,

her fingers resting comfortably on his chest.

She laughed light, cruel, intimate.

Brork pulled her closer, his arm

possessively around her waist,

their closeness speaking louder than

words ever could.

"And that wedding night you treasure so

much?" Brork continued, voice dripping

with amusement.

"We celebrated it together… while you slept."

El-Mond's mind reeled.

"Impossible… That night…

only she and I were there.

We drank the ceremonial wine and"

His voice faltered.

Realization struck like a thunderbolt.

"T-The wine…"

Brork snapped his fingers. "Bingo."

Luna's smile deepened, eyes glittering

as she leaned further into Brork's embrace.

"You were unconscious the entire time,"

Brork said casually.

"Completely helpless."

El-Mond's sword trembled in his grasp.

His hatred twisted into confusion then

shattered.

Brork stepped closer, lowering his voice.

"You know…

I always wanted to say something."

For a fleeting moment, El-Mond thought

an apology?

But Brork's grin widened.

"Sorry you had to witness how easily

everything you cherished was taken."

Luna laughed softly, resting her head on

Brork's shoulder.

El-Mond coughed violently,

blood splattering the ground.

The sword slipped from his fingers and

clattered uselessly beside him.

"You took my position as Sect Leader,"

Brork continued calmly.

"So I took your woman. Fair trade,

don't you think?"

He reached down and pulled a golden

plaque from El-Mond's belt.

The words "Storm Blade Sect Leader"

gleamed mockingly in the moonlight.

"And now," Brork said, holding it up,

"I reclaim what should have been mine

from the start."

El-Mond no longer resisted.

He simply sat there,

head lowered, blood dripping steadily.

"Don't look so miserable, brother,"

Brork said, wiping his hand against

El-Mond's shoulder as if cleaning dirt.

"Think of it as a sacrifice."

"The Phoenix Sect promised friendship

true alliance if I replaced you."

He smiled.

"They even gifted me a Heaven-Tier Stone."

Brork's eyes burned with ambition.

"I've been stuck at Seventh-Level

Marquess for twenty years.

If I don't break through to Duke Realm…

I'll die within a century."

He shrugged.

"So it was you… or me."

His laughter echoed against the cliffs.

"If you want someone to blame,"

Brork said as he turned away,

"Blame yourself for having strength but

no brains."

"Oh," he added casually,

"That old fool of a mentor? He'll be joining

you soon."

El-Mond's eyes snapped open.

"DON'T YOU TOUCH HIM!"

Summoning the last of his strength,

El-Mond grabbed his fallen sword

and charged.

But weakened, poisoned, drained of core energy

he was no longer a match.

Brork pivoted calmly and struck with a

single kick.

El-Mond's body flew backward

over the edge of the cliff.

As he fell, Brork's voice drifted down

like a curse.

"You should thank the Ascenders Sect

for the drug.

it drained your core beautifully."

The wind roared past El-Mond's ears.

"The Ascenders…?" he thought bitterly.

"I never even knew them…"

The sky darkened.

"What does it matter now…"

"Born an orphan… and dying like one."

A broken chuckle escaped his lips,

filled with sorrow.

"I guess… I was never meant to be loved."

As the abyss swallowed him,

his thoughts turned gentle.

"I'm sorry you were dragged into this…

Old Lu…"

His eyes closed.

Darkness claimed everything.

To Be Continued.