this is my first fanfic so I will be happy to take criticism and advice
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Rachi: I bet 100 bucks you wont do it
Rex: that's ez money
(Rex's pov)
As I get up to do Rachi's bet I start walking towards the side walk.
I take a deep breath and yell, TRUCK-KUN HIT ME IF YOU HAVE THE BALLS.
{turns out he in fact did have the balls}
Rex's pov end
As a truck comes out of nowhere
Rex: FUCK YOU RACHI
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no I will not be doing that wish thing it's just stupid to me.
pls leave advice