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TITLE: THE SHADOW'S EDGE (SAAYE KA KINARA)

GENRE: Cinematic Dark Fantasy / Psychological Horror

TONE: Somber, Tense, Atmospheric

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SCENE 1: THE IRON RAILING - NIGHT (FOGGY)

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VISUALS:

Ek purana bridge. Charon taraf gehri dhund (fog) hai. Ek YOUNG MAN (black puffer jacket pehne hue) railing ke paas khada hai. Uska sar thoda jhuka hua hai, expression bilkul calm aur introspective hai.

SOUND:

Halki thandi hawa ki sarsarahat. Background mein ek bohot hi dheemi, eerie violin ki dhun.

NARRATOR (V.O.):

"Hum sab apne gunaho ko andhere mein chupate hain... par tab kya ho, jab wo andhera hi humein dhundne lage?"

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SCENE 2: THE MANIFESTATION - NIGHT

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VISUALS:

Young man ke theek peeche, hawa mein swirling black smoke jama hone lagti hai. Ek MASSIVE SHADOW ENTITY (ek towering humanoid shape) dheere-dheere form leti hai. Uski aankhein GLOWING WHITE hain jo andhere mein chamak rahi hain.

Shadow ke haath (smoke tendrils) young man ke kaandhon ki taraf badhte hain, lekin wo bilkul nahi hilta.

YOUNG MAN:

(Dheere se, bina mudey)

"Tum fir aa gaye."

SHADOW ENTITY:

(Goonjti hui bhari awaaz)

"Main gaya kab tha? Main toh tumhari har saans mein hoon... tumhare har dukh ka hissa."

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SCENE 3: THE CONFRONTATION - NIGHT

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VISUALS:

Young man dheere se apni nigahein uthata hai. Uska chehra bilkul photorealistic aur calm hai, lekin uski aankhon mein thakan hai.

YOUNG MAN:

"Log kehte hain saaya roshni mein banta hai. Par tum toh andhere mein bhi saath nahi chhodte."

SHADOW ENTITY:

"Kyunki main tumhara saaya nahi... main tumhara sach hoon. Jitna tum mujhse bhagoge, main utna hi ghana hota jaunga."

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SCENE 4: THE FADE OUT - NIGHT

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VISUALS:

Camera wide shot

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