First of all, thank you very much for giving my story a chance.
When I'm writing this, I've published chap. 3 (Outsider), so it will be useful for the future.
One thing I would like to add: I aim to publish one chapter per day, as I am extremely slow and my English is not very good. I hope there are not too many mistakes, and if there are, I hope you will forgive me.
From time to time, I could fail to meet my quota.
Now, I'm not an avid reader of webnovels (maybe it's a turn-off for many, but I want to be honest before everything else.), so there will be a few different things.
The first, and the most evident, is how I manage thoughts and dialogues.
- I use <<>> for dialogues between two characters.
- I use "" for MC's thoughts.
- I also use (<<>>)-("") when the MC is recalling some phrases someone said or thoughts he made before.
The second one is that there will be swearing. I don't think I will put a "F**k" every two dialogues, and I'll try to be as friendly as possible. But, to be as "realistic" as possible, there will be time where this words are a must.
Now, if this is a huge problem for webnovel and you guys, I will simply stop using them.
I don't have a strict hierarchy/ranks in the world I've created. So, power scaling and other related stuff will be more difficult to understand in the beginning.
I don't have much else to say about the ranks, but if you have any questions, I'd be more than happy to answer them.
As for the System, it won't be a game-changer for the MC and will not be as central as in other stories. Maybe it's not even a System in the full sense of the word.
I can't say anything more, you'll discover it in the first chapters.
Moving on to the MC.
I don't want to say if he's a Hero or an Anti-hero, or even a Villain. He's difficult to categorise because he has many layers (or at least that's the idea :3).
He will not be overpowered.
He's an underdog. So he has to work hard. I think many readers are going to say that in the beginning, he will be more of a sidekick than an MC in his own story.
I'm not sure if I will maintain the Romance Tag. Characters are the most unpredictable variables in the story. I can't say if love will bloom in the protagonist's heart.
I will try to keep the story as I've imagined.
No harem. -_-
Finally, I'll talk about the story.
It won't be action-packed. My characters need time to rest and time to know each other well.
The beginning won't be like the others, where they throw their MCs into the action right away to grab your attention.
Mine will be more relaxed, setting the tone of the story, introducing you to the world, to the various characters, and then there will be action.
I don't plan on putting it too far away, for anyone who wants it, the chapter will be called: (The expedition)
That's all.
Again, thank you for reading this, and I hope you gave my story a chance. If you want to support me, you could use your free power stone on this story, comment on it, or write a review, unless it's spam, I won't delete anything. I'm open to criticism.
Since I don't know what to say to make an effective conclusion, I'll leave you with this:
<3