Hey TinyStitch here again!
I've reflected on how I've been writing this story so far and feel like I'm going too fast. The chapters are too short as they are right now, and that makes it so that I'm missing a lot in terms of quality. I'm going to try to start making chapters longer, about 1.5k instead of the previous 1k.
Also, I noticed that I kind of dropped off the system stuff after a couple of chapters. I will be starting that back up again. The system won't be omnipotent and is purely an analytical system.
Ill start trying to implement these changes starting from the next chapter. Please let me know what you guys think.
Also, if you guys have time, please leave a review and toss me some powerstones. It would be much appreciated!