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Chapter 17 - RETALIATION IN THE RAIN

Rain fell in sheets, turning streets into rivers of reflection. Neon signs fractured across puddles, casting the city in jagged light. Every corner hid a shadow, every shadow a threat. And tonight, the streets themselves seemed to wait—silent, judging, patient.

Jaylen "Jax" Carter walked those streets with a weight in his chest heavier than any backpack of bullets or cash.

Last night had been a warning. Dre had survived, yes but barely. The laughing kid had made one thing clear: he could strike anywhere, anytime, and make Jaylen's decisions cost dearly.

But Jaylen was done reacting.

Tonight, he retaliated.

The safehouse smelled of damp and fatigue. Marcus sat slumped on the stairs, still recovering from the bullet wound. Trey leaned over a table, repairing a blade. Dre sat quietly in a corner, silent, uneasy but alive.

Jaylen entered, boots clicking against the concrete floor. He didn't speak. Not yet. He laid a map on the table, a sprawling blueprint of the city, marked with routes, alleys, and known enemy positions.

"This is the next phase," Jaylen said, voice low but firm. "The laughing kid has control over fear. Over people. Over movement. That ends tonight."

Trey raised an eyebrow. "You talking full-scale war?"

"Full-scale strategy," Jaylen corrected. "We hit him where it hurts not just his crew, but the faith in him."

Marcus rubbed his temples. "That's risky. We're still bruised, bleeding, and he's expecting us to retaliate."

Jaylen didn't flinch. "Good. That's exactly why we'll win."

The Plan

The plan was surgical.

Step 1: Intercept the laughing kid's reinforcements at the northern docks.

Step 2: Disrupt the communication lines to his crew and allies.

Step 3: Extract or neutralize high-value targets without collateral damage.

Step 4: Leave a message that this city answers only to those who adapt.

Jaylen assigned roles:

Dre: eyes, legs, and instinct. His redemption tested here.

Trey: suppression and tactical maneuvers.

Marcus: fallback and extraction.

Jaylen himself would be on the front line, but not rushing in blindly. Strategy over aggression. Every move counted.

The northern docks smelled of oil, salt, and metal. Containers stacked like towers of a city of shadows. Rain slicked the steel walkways, making every step treacherous.

Jaylen crouched behind a container, eyes scanning the area.

Three trucks. Armed guards. Two gunmen on watchtower platforms.

Not overwhelming. Just enough to make one mistake deadly.

"Eyes open," Jaylen whispered to Dre. "Stick to the shadows. Watch the exits. Move when I move."

Dre nodded.

The First Strike

Jaylen advanced.

It was almost elegant—the way the crew moved, shadows sliding across puddles, blades glinting briefly, silent takedowns executed with precision.

Two guards eliminated before they could shout. The third froze as Jaylen's blade reflected the neon red from a nearby crane.

"Move," Jaylen commanded.

Inside the first truck, crates were switched, tagged, rerouted. The laughing kid's logistics were already fragile—Jaylen made them fragile-er.

Then Trey hit the communication hub. Sparks, wires, and silence.

The guards' radios went dead. Their advantage? Gone.

But nothing went unnoticed.

The laughing kid was always three steps ahead.

From above, a shadow moved along the crane—he was watching, calculating. He didn't engage yet. He was letting Jaylen make the first move.

Then a single shot rang out.

Trey dropped.

Dre dove to cover him, firing blind into the darkness.

Jaylen felt the city itself shift beneath him. The game had changed: the laughing kid wasn't just a rival. He was now an urban predator in its natural habitat.

Dre's Test

Dre had to act.

He moved quickly, intercepting a sniper's line of sight, dragging Trey to safety. Jaylen watched, impressed but wary—this was the moment that proved loyalty, courage, and instinct could outweigh fear.

"Keep moving!" Jaylen yelled.

The crew adjusted, improvising as streets and docks became a maze of bullets, rain, and shadows.

Jaylen triggered a secondary plan: flares and smoke bombs.

The docks erupted into confusion. Guards couldn't see, shots misfired. Trucks stalled. Paths cleared.

But in the chaos, Jaylen realized: the laughing kid had anticipated a flanking maneuver. Another group of armed men appeared, cutting off the crew's exit.

"We're trapped," Marcus growled, gripping his arm.

Jaylen's eyes narrowed. "No. We're choosing the battlefield."

Jaylen directed the crew through crates, puddles, and shipping containers like chess pieces. Each step was a calculation, each pause a feint.

Dre moved to flank.

Trey held suppression points.

Marcus secured extraction zones.

Jaylen confronted the leader of the laughing kid's reinforcements directly—a silent, brutal duel of knives and instinct.

Every second felt stretched. Every movement could mean survival or death.

Amid the chaos, Jaylen caught sight of a rival crew member, young, terrified, barely trained.

He hesitated.

A second's pause in a city like this could kill you.

He made the choice: spare him.

This wasn't mercy. It was a message: Jaylen fought to control fear, not to become the monster the laughing kid wanted him to be.

The confrontation reached a tipping point.

The laughing kid stepped out from shadows, guns pointed, grinning.

"You've learned to strike," he said. "But you haven't learned the cost."

Jaylen didn't flinch. "I don't need to. I've already paid some of it. You'll pay more."

Gunfire and chaos erupted.

Dre disarmed two men with precise moves.

Trey held the line as reinforcements approached.

Jaylen advanced, using crates and containers as cover, closing the gap to the laughing kid.

Then, a crane above groaned ominously. A chain snapped. The massive container above tilted dangerously.

Jaylen reached the laughing kid, blades nearly touching.

The container crashed behind them, splitting the ground in a shower of sparks and debris.

They froze—two predators facing off in a city that was bleeding around them.

A single question remained: who would move first—and at what cost?

Rain soaked their faces, mixing with sweat and blood. The streets waited, patient and unforgiving.

And somewhere in the shadows, a new player was watching, waiting, ready to tip the balance.

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