December 10, 2005
Day 55 of Ascension
Title: Two Stages, One Boy
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Part I: The Competition
The morning air bit with winter's teeth as Je-hoon stepped from Director Kim's borrowed car. Seoul National University sprawled before themโivied buildings, groomed paths, the hallowed ground of Korea's academic elite.
Director Kim straightened his tie, more nervous than Je-hoon. "Remember, they're just problems. Like any other."
"They are," Je-hoon agreed, his breath misting. But they both knew this was more than math. This was validation. Or exposure.
The competition hall held two hundred children from Seoul's best schools. Uniforms crisp, parents hovering, the air thick with ambition and anxiety. Je-hoon stood outโorphanage uniform slightly faded, no parent beside him.
A teacher checked his ID. "Blue Bird Orphanage? Unusual."
"We have exceptional students," Director Kim said defensively.
Je-hoon simply nodded, found his assigned seat. Desk 47. He placed his calculator, two pens, water bottle. Routine.
The proctor announced rules: "Ninety minutes. Twenty problems. Show all work. Top three receive scholarships and media coverage."
Media. Je-hoon noted cameras at the back. He positioned himself slightly angled away.
The test began.
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ZEO's analysis flowed as Je-hoon read:
๐๐ง๐ค๐๐ก๐๐ข 1: ๐๐ช๐ข๐๐๐ง ๐ฉ๐๐๐ค๐ง๐ฎ. ๐๐๐ฃ๐ ๐๐ก๐ก ๐ฅ๐ง๐๐ข๐ ๐ฃ๐ช๐ข๐๐๐ง๐จ ๐ฅ ๐จ๐ช๐๐ ๐ฉ๐๐๐ฉ ๐ฅ^2 + 2 ๐๐จ ๐๐ก๐จ๐ค ๐ฅ๐ง๐๐ข๐.
๐๐ค๐ก๐ช๐ฉ๐๐ค๐ฃ: ๐=3 ๐ค๐ฃ๐ก๐ฎ. ๐๐๐ค๐ฌ ๐ฌ๐ค๐ง๐ : ๐ฉ๐๐จ๐ฉ ๐ฅ=2,3,5,7...
He wrote neatly, showing logical steps. Not too fast. Pace himself.
๐๐ง๐ค๐๐ก๐๐ข 7: ๐๐๐ค๐ข๐๐ฉ๐ง๐ฎ. ๐พ๐๐ง๐๐ก๐ ๐๐ฃ๐จ๐๐ง๐๐๐๐ ๐๐ฃ ๐ฉ๐ง๐๐๐ฃ๐๐ก๐...
๐๐ค๐ก๐ช๐ฉ๐๐ค๐ฃ: ๐๐จ๐ ๐๐ฃ๐๐๐ฃ๐ฉ๐๐ง ๐ฅ๐ง๐ค๐ฅ๐๐ง๐ฉ๐๐๐จ...
Around him, children sighed, erased, whispered frustration. Je-hoon worked with mechanical precision. The math was trivial to ZEO, but he performed the theater of problem-solvingโforehead occasionally furrowed, pen tapping once before insight.
๐๐ง๐ค๐๐ญ๐๐ข 17: ๐๐ง๐๐๐ ๐ฆ๐ช๐๐จ๐ฉ๐๐ค๐ฃ. ๐๐ค๐ค๐ ๐จ ๐๐ค๐ข๐ฅ๐ก๐๐ญ ๐๐ช๐ฉ ๐จ๐๐ข๐ฅ๐ก๐ ๐ฅ๐๐ฉ๐ฉ๐๐ง๐ฃ.
๐๐ฃ๐ฉ๐๐ฃ๐ฉ๐๐ค๐ฃ๐๐ก ๐ข๐๐จ๐จ: ๐๐๐๐ซ๐ ๐๐ฃ๐๐ค๐ข๐ฅ๐ก๐๐ฉ๐. 2 ๐ฅ๐ค๐๐ฃ๐ฉ๐จ ๐ก๐ค๐จ๐ฉ.
He purposefully misstepped on problem 17, left it partially solved. The one "human" error in otherwise perfect work.
At the 70-minute mark, he finished. Reviewed. Made one minor correction for authenticity. Sat back.
The boy beside him, sweating, whispered, "How are you done?"
"Focused," Je-hoon said quietly.
He watched the clock tick down. Calculated his score: approximately 94/100. Should place second or third.
When time was called, he handed in his paper with the others.
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The Wait
Results would be announced at noon. Je-hoon and Director Kim waited in the designated area.
"You seemed confident," Director Kim said.
"The problems were within scope."
A reporter approached. "Kim Je-hoon? From the Blue Bird article?"
"Yes."
"Expecting to place?"
"Honored just to participate."
The polite deflection. The reporter moved on.
At 11:47, the head judge called for attention. "Results. Third place: Park Min-ji, Seoul Elementary, 92 points."
Applause. A girl beamed, parents crying.
"Second place: Kim Je-hoon, Blue Bird Orphanage, 94 points."
Director Kim gasped. Je-hoon stood, walked forward calmly. Shook hands. Accepted certificate. โฉ300,000 scholarship check.
Cameras flashed. The orphanage boy on stage.
"First place: Lee Sang-hyun, Seoul Science Academy, 98 points."
More applause. Je-hoon stood beside the other winners, smiling appropriately. Not too wide. Not too proud.
The reporter was back. "Second place! How do you feel?"
"Grateful to my teachers and the orphanage."
"Your future plans?"
"Continue learning. Help others."
Perfect soundbites. Humble. Inspirational.
As they left, Director Kim clutched the check. "โฉ300,000! And the publicity!"
"Divide it: โฉ150,000 to orphanage education fund, โฉ150,000 to my investment fund."
Director Kim nodded, too happy to argue.
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Part I Complete. Outcome: Success with controlled exposure.
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Part II: The Boardroom in an Orphanage
They returned to Blue Bird by 2:30 PM. Je-hoon changed into his custom shirtโlight blue, pressed. Director Kim into his best suit.
Mrs. Shin had transformed the common room: chairs arranged boardroom-style, financial reports prepared, student work displayed.
At 3:55, three black cars arrived.
Soo-jae emerged first, followed by three older men. Je-hoon recognized them from HJ Group annual reports:
ยท Mr. Choi, 60s, board member, construction division
ยท Mr. Park (no relation), 50s, finance committee
ยท Mr. Lee, 50s, strategy and innovation
All wore expressions of polite skepticism.
Soo-jae made introductions. "This is Director Kim. And Kim Je-hoon, whom I've mentioned."
Handshakes. Je-hoon's grip firm, eye contact steady.
"Shall we begin?" he said, taking charge subtly. "Tour first, then discussion."
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The Tour
Je-hoon led, Director Kim following. The board members observed.
Stop 1: Library
"Updated with foundation funds. Current focus: mathematics and science, but also practical skills."
Mr. Choi examined the books. "Advanced for children."
"Children rise to expectations."
Stop 2: Tutoring Center
Two orphans tutored neighborhood children. Soo-jae's eyes widened slightlyโshe hadn't seen this operational.
"Students earn while learning. Builds confidence and competence."
Mr. Lee asked a tutee, "What are you learning?"
"Fractions. I failed before. Now I get B+."
Genuine. Unrehearsed.
Stop 3: Manufacturing Area
Mr. Han oversaw two teens assembling coffee timers. Circuit boards, soldering irons, testing equipment.
"You manufacture here?" Mr. Park asked, surprised.
"Light assembly. Teaches technical skills. Products generate revenue."
Je-hoon demonstrated a timer. Mr. Lee tested it. "Precise."
"Designed to solve a specific problem: inconsistent coffee extraction."
Stop 4: Medical Corner
First aid supplies, basic equipment. Je-hoon explained the free clinic partnership.
"We've also begun wound care research with a local doctor."
Soo-jae raised an eyebrow but said nothing.
The tour concluded back in the common room.
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The Discussion
Mrs. Shin served teaโproperly brewed, using Je-hoon's methods. Small detail, noticed.
Mr. Choi began: "Impressive operations. But scale is tiny. What's the relevance to HJ Group?"
Je-hoon projected a slide from his laptop. "Three relevance points."
"First: Talent pipeline. Korea faces skilled labor shortages. We're creating trained, loyal workers. HJ Group could partner for early identification, sponsorship."
"Second: Innovation model. We identify problems, develop solutions rapidly, test locally. Your R&D could adopt similar agile methods."
"Third: CSR with ROI. Most corporate social responsibility is expense. This model generates revenue while creating social good. Measurable impact."
He showed metrics: income generated per student, skill acquisition rates, cost per trainee.
Mr. Park studied the numbers. "These figures... accurate?"
"Audited monthly." Mrs. Shin presented reports.
Soo-jae spoke for the first time since introductions. "The board discussed innovation initiatives. Some see value in grassroots approaches."
Mr. Lee leaned forward. "Your timer. Market potential?"
"Initial production: 100 units monthly. Expanding. Already profitable."
"And beyond timers?"
"We have other prototypes. Medical formulations. Inventory systems. The model scales."
A pause. The board members exchanged looks.
Mr. Choi: "What would partnership look like?"
Je-hoon had prepared this. "Three options."
"Option A: HJ Group provides seed funding for expansion. Equity stake in Blue Bird Foundation commercial ventures."
"Option B: HJ Group sponsors specific programsโmanufacturing training, for example. First right to hire graduates."
"Option C: Joint venture for specific products. HJ Group provides manufacturing scale, we provide innovation."
Soo-jae watched him, a slight smile playing at her lips. He was performing exactly as she'd hopedโcompetent, strategic, not needy.
Mr. Lee stood. "We'll discuss. But personally... I'm impressed. You've built something real here."
The others nodded. Handshakes again.
As they left, Soo-jae hung back for a moment. "You exceeded expectations."
"I prepared."
"I see that." She lowered her voice. "Joon-ho will hear about this. He won't be pleased."
"I anticipated."
"Be careful. But... well done."
She joined the others. The cars departed.
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Part II Complete. Outcome: Strategic interest established.
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Part III: The Evening Calculus
19:00 PM, The Aftermath
Director Kim was euphoric. "They were impressed! Actually impressed!"
Mrs. Shin nodded. "The financials convinced them."
Je-hoon retreated to the library. Processed the day:
๐๐๐ฉ๐ ๐๐ค๐ข๐ฅ๐๐ฉ๐๐ฉ๐๐ค๐ฃ:
ยท ๐๐๐๐ค๐ฃ๐ ๐ฅ๐ก๐๐๐: ๐ผ๐๐๐๐๐ซ๐๐
ยท ๐๐๐๐ค๐ก๐๐ง๐จ๐๐๐ฅ: โฉ300,000
ยท ๐๐๐๐๐: ๐๐ค๐๐๐จ๐ฉ, ๐ฅ๐ค๐จ๐๐ฉ๐๐ซ๐
ยท ๐พ๐ง๐๐๐๐ฃ๐ฉ๐๐๐ก: ๐๐จ๐ฉ๐๐๐ก๐๐จ๐๐๐
๐๐ ๐ฝ๐ค๐๐ง๐ ๐ซ๐๐จ๐๐ฉ:
ยท ๐๐ข๐ฅ๐ง๐๐จ๐จ๐๐ค๐ฃ: ๐๐ค๐จ๐๐ฉ๐๐ซ๐
ยท ๐๐ค๐ฉ๐๐ฃ๐ฉ๐๐๐ก ๐ฅ๐๐ง๐ฉ๐ฃ๐๐ง๐จ๐๐๐ฅ: 70% ๐ฅ๐ง๐ค๐๐๐๐๐ก๐๐ฉ๐ฎ
ยท ๐๐ค๐ค-๐๐๐'๐จ ๐ฅ๐ค๐จ๐๐ฉ๐๐ค๐ฃ: ๐๐ฉ๐ง๐๐ฃ๐๐ฉ๐๐๐ฃ๐๐
ยท ๐ ๐ค๐ค๐ฃ-๐๐ค'๐จ ๐ง๐๐๐๐ฉ๐๐ค๐ฃ: ๐๐ง๐๐๐๐๐ฉ๐๐๐ก๐ฎ ๐ฃ๐๐๐๐ฉ๐๐ซ๐
Overall: successful day. Two different stages, two different performances, both effective.
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21:00 PM, The Message
SMS arrived:
From: SJ
Message: Board reaction positive. Mr. Lee especially. Formal proposal requested. Joon-ho already complaining. Continue momentum. - SJ
He replied:
To: SJ
Message: Proposal ready Monday. Suggest focusing on manufacturing training partnership first. Tangible, measurable. - KJH
From: SJ
Message: Agreed. Monday then. Rest today. You earned it. - SJ
A moment of... warmth? Professional courtesy, perhaps. But genuine.
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22:00 PM, The Reflection
Je-hoon lay in bed, the day replaying. The competition hall's tension. The board members' assessing eyes. Soo-jae's subtle approval.
Two months ago, he'd been an anonymous orphan. Today, he stood before HJ Group's board as a peer.
Not equal in power. But equal in competence.
The trajectory was clear. The foundation he'd built in 55 days was bearing weight. The next phase: scaling.
He thought of Formula H-1, brewing in the clinic. Of timers being assembled. Of teens earning their own money.
Of Soo-jae, trapped in her gilded cage, seeing in him perhaps a kindred spiritโsomeone building their own world.
Tomorrow: Sunday. Free clinic. Formula H-1 progress check. Timer order fulfillment.
The work never stopped.
But today... today was victory.
Two stages. One boy.
Both conquered.
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๐ฟ๐๐ฎ 55: ๐๐๐ ๐๐ช๐๐ก ๐ฉ๐ง๐๐ช๐ข๐ฅ๐
1 ๐ข๐๐ฉ๐ ๐๐ค๐ข๐ฅ๐๐ฉ๐๐ฉ๐๐ค๐ฃ: 2๐ฃ๐ ๐ฅ๐ก๐๐๐, โฉ300,000
1 ๐๐ค๐๐ง๐ ๐ซ๐๐จ๐๐ฉ: 3 ๐๐ข๐ฅ๐ง๐๐จ๐จ๐๐ ๐๐๐ง๐๐๐ฉ๐ค๐ง๐จ
2 ๐จ๐ฉ๐๐๐๐จ, 2 ๐ฅ๐๐ง๐๐ค๐ง๐ข๐๐ฃ๐๐๐จ, 1 ๐ซ๐๐๐ฉ๐ค๐ง๐ฎ
๐๐๐ ๐๐ค๐ฎ ๐๐ง๐ค๐ข ๐ฉ๐๐ ๐ค๐ง๐ฅ๐๐๐ฃ๐๐๐ ๐๐๐จ ๐ฅ๐ง๐ค๐ซ๐๐ฃ ๐๐ ๐๐๐ฃ ๐๐ค๐ข๐ฅ๐๐ฉ๐ ๐ฌ๐๐ฉ๐ ๐ฉ๐๐ ๐๐ก๐๐ฉ๐'๐จ ๐๐๐๐ก๐๐ง๐๐ฃ ๐๐ฃ๐ ๐๐ข๐ฅ๐ง๐๐จ๐จ ๐ฉ๐๐ ๐๐ก๐๐ฉ๐ ๐ฉ๐๐๐ข๐จ๐๐ก๐ซ๐๐จ. ๐๐ค๐ฉ ๐ฉ๐๐ง๐ค๐ช๐๐ ๐๐๐ง๐ฉ๐ ๐ง๐๐๐๐ฉ. ๐๐๐ง๐ค๐ช๐๐ ๐ข๐๐ง๐๐ฉ. ๐๐๐ง๐ค๐ช๐๐ ๐จ๐ฎ๐จ๐ฉ๐๐ข๐จ. ๐๐๐ง๐ค๐ช๐๐ ๐๐ ๐๐ฃ๐ ๐ฌ๐๐ก๐ก. ๐๐๐ ๐๐จ๐๐๐ฃ๐ฉ ๐๐ค๐ฃ๐ฉ๐๐ฃ๐ช๐๐จ, ๐๐ฃ๐ ๐ฃ๐ค๐ฌ, ๐ฉ๐๐ ๐ฌ๐ค๐ง๐ก๐ ๐๐จ ๐ฌ๐๐ฉ๐๐๐๐ฃ๐.
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End Episode 19
