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SHADOWBREATH

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Chapter 1 - Days Without Chains

📄 Page 1 (3 Panels)

Panel 1: A wide shot of an old stone city. Simple houses, smoke rising from chimneys, the sound of morning.

Panel 2: Sunlight streams through a house window.

Panel 3 (Text): "Some days… freedom feels so natural that you don't even realize its value."

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📄 Page 2 (4 Panels)

Panel 1: Inside the house. The mother is preparing food.

Panel 2: The father is putting on his work clothes.

Panel 3: Syro's sister is sitting by the table, swinging her legs.

Panel 4: Syro (14 years old) sleepily enters. Messy hair, calm face.

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📄 Page 3 (5 Panels)

Panel 1: The sister smiles: "You woke up late again."

Panel 2: Syro laughs: "Freedom means waking up late."

Panel 3: The mother makes a mock frown.

Panel 4: The father chuckles quietly.

Panel 5 (Text): "A house that has noise... is still alive."

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📄 Page 4 (3 Panels)

Panel 1: Everyone is around the dinner table.

Panel 2: Syro steals a bite from his sister's plate.

Panel 3: The sister slams her hand on the table: "Thief!"

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📄 Page 5 (4 Panels)

Panel 1: Close-up of Syro's face. His eyes are happy, carefree.

Panel 2: The father: "Are you going out today?"

Panel 3: Syro: "Yeah… I just want to run."

Panel 4 (Text): "Running, for no reason. Without permission."

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📄 Page 6 (3 Panels)

Panel 1: Syro puts on his shoes.

Panel 2: The sister blocks his way.

Panel 3: "Come back soon."

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📄 Page 7 (5 Panels)

Panel 1: Syro's hand on his sister's head.

Panel 2: "Promise."

Panel 3: The mother from behind: "Don't make promises you can't keep."

Panel 4: Smiles all around.

Panel 5: The door closes.

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📄 Page 8 (3 Panels)

Panel 1: Syro outside the house. Full daylight.

Panel 2: He takes a deep breath.

Panel 3 (Text): "I didn't know then… it would be my last breath of freedom."

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📄 Page 9 (4 Panels)

Panel 1: Syro runs through the streets.

Panel 2: Jumps over a short wall.

Panel 3: Loud laughter.

Panel 4: The wind blows through his hair.

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📄 Page 10 (3 Panels)

Panel 1: A shot of Syro's feet on the cobblestones.

Panel 2: The heartbeat.

Panel 3: A carefree smile.

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📄 Page 11 (5 Panels)

Panel 1: Syro stops, out of breath.

Panel 2: He looks up at the sky.

Panel 3: Ordinary clouds, calm.

Panel 4: No sign of danger.

Panel 5 (Text): "The world was normal… and that was the most dangerous part."

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📄 Page 12 (3 Panels)

Panel 1: Syro turns back toward the house.

Panel 2: The sound of children laughing in the distance.

Panel 3: Perfect tranquility.

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📄 Page 13 (4 Panels)

Panel 1: Syro stops in front of the house.

Panel 2: His hand on the door.

Panel 3: A short pause (for no reason).

Panel 4: A very subtle frown.

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📄 Page 14 (3 Panels)

Panel 1: The door opens.

Panel 2: Sounds of the family from inside.

Panel 3: The peace returns.

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📄 Page 15 (5 Panels)

Panel 1: The mother: "You came back quickly."

Panel 2: Syro: "I felt like it."

Panel 3: The sister smiles.

Panel 4: The father pours tea.

Panel 5 (Text): "Everything was in its place."

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📄 Page 16 (3 Panels)

Panel 1: Close-up of Syro's face.

Panel 2: A brief glance at his family.

Panel 3: A faint smile.

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📄 Page 17 (4 Panels)

Panel 1: Exterior shot of the house at sunset.

Panel 2: Orange light.

Panel 3: Birds on the roof.

Panel 4 (Text): "Freedom… was in these moments."

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📄 Page 18 (Splash – Full Page)

Image: Syro in the middle of the house, family around him. A warm, complete, alive frame.

Final Text of Chapter 1:

"When something is taken from you… you realize it was freedom all along."