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Quick rant

A.I. will have no influence in the creation of this fanfic.

1.

Fuck, I hate A.I.

IK That's a hypocritical statement, given I've done my fair share of experimenting, but it's just so repetitive. It might not be super bad for everyone, but because I did "experimenting" for a long time, I can usually tell when something has heavy A.I. influence, which sucks because if you can tell, then the story is already shit. No human has, like, 7 metaphors in the span of 4 sentences. Stuff like that ruins the story for me, you know; it takes away from the storytelling with how annoying it can become.

2. 

This story will not have a harem, nor do I intend for it to have any romance.

I originally thought that harems made the books trash, to be honest, but the longer I've been on the platform, the more I understand that it was never the harems (I've read some good harem stuff). It was the romance. A lot of guys write romance like they've never talked to a woman before, and these same individuals will turn around and instantly start writing harems.

Anyway, that was my quick rant. I know I didn't say anything important, but I wanted to get that off my chest.

I hate that on Webnovel a lot of fan fics, from what I've seen (I don't read actual stories on here anymore), have just become A.I. Every time I see a new book with an interesting concept; 1-2 paragraphs in, I can tell it's A.I. and instantly know it's going to be shit. Which really sucks. Anyway, rant over.

I'm going to get to pumping out these chapters.

Let me know in the comments (share an opinion 🤷‍♂️).

Lowk gonna be busy for a while so I probably wont be working on this for a few days

Heres a Sneak peak of Chapter 1:

A sigh echoed in the room.

Today was shit, as all days seem to be becoming lately. Nothing was working to get him out of the endless dopamine hell he'd seem to have found himself in. He played game after game, scrolled Instagram, and watched TV shows. His dopamine receptors were so fired that he seemed to only gain pleasure from them when he was doing it all at the same time. A gaming laptop on his bed showing him idle in Warframe, his phone lying beside it with a muted Instagram video he wasn't paying attention to, and a tablet on a stand to his left with a paused YouTube video. And him, he was lying on his bed, truly exhausted, tired of life's endless boredom. He felt like Earth was a one-star world with no vampires, no magic, and not even aliens. This place was truly lame.

Suddenly in the silent room, 3 distinct Discord notifications came from 3 different devices. He sat up on his bed and looked at his tablet. Message from Big D@ddy All Father. Smiling at the dumb name, he opened it up. "Wanna go somewhere interesting?" it said. Pulling his tablet off its stand, he began typing, "What does that mean?" Before he even sent it, he got a second message: "I feel like it's pretty self-explanatory." Looking at the message, he was confused. He deleted what he had typed and put "How did you do that?". Again, before he sent the question, he received a reply: "You ask a lot of questions. All I want is an answer. Please don't make this longer than it needs to be." Staring at the message he just received, he looked around his room as if he were on some reality television show, trying to find the hidden camera. In his mind he was either hacked, or there was a camera; those were the only things that would make sense. After finding nothing, he stared at the last message he received before deciding, "Fuck it." "Sure, where?" With that, everything went black as he felt the feeling of falling.

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Please let me know your thoughts and area's for improvement i would like to get better at writing

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