NARRATOR :
In the year 3111,the world was consumed by darkness. Everyone was shocked, confused,and desperately trying to understand what was happening. Life was collapsing untill... The gods finally revealed themselves.
In 3002 a God appears before humanity and told us about a ancient war between GODS and DEMONS.
He said humanity was chosen because we possess free will--and potential to surpass even Gods themselves.
But someone raised his hand
"I have a question... Which powers ami supposed to have? I don't have any powers at all."
The God looked at him and replied calmly:
"That is because untill the year 3005, the Gods placed a Divine seal on humans.untill 3304 only a few humans reached planetary level power. Some remained normal and other awakened magical ability."
As more people awakened powers magical institutions and schools were created.
High-Schools trained young fighters and ranked them.
Low Class Fighters : G,F,E,D
Middle Class Fighters:C,B,A
HIGH CLASS FIGHTERS:S,SS,SSS
And a few rare become DEMONIC FIGHTERS with special titles
REFLEXO
"Hey Zento! WASSUP bro?why are giving me that serious look."
But Zento didn't smile back.
NARRATOR
Absolutely — I can rewrite and improve your entire Chapter 1 while keeping your story, characters, and events exactly the same.
I will make it cleaner, clearer, more emotional, and more like a real novel, but nothing will be changed in the plot.
Here is the improved Chapter 1 (rewritten in proper story form):
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Chapter 1 – The Awakening of Gods
Narrator:
In the year 3111, the world was consumed by darkness. Everyone was shocked, confused, and desperately trying to understand what was happening. Life was collapsing… until the gods finally revealed themselves.
In 3002, a god appeared before humanity and told us about the ancient war between Gods and Demons.
He said that humanity was chosen because we possess free will — and the potential to surpass even the gods themselves.
But someone raised a hand.
"I have a question… which powers am I supposed to have? I don't have any powers at all."
The god looked at him and replied calmly:
"That is because until the year 3005, the gods placed a divine seal on humans.
Until 3304, only a few humans reached planetary level power. Some remained normal, others awakened magical abilities."
As more people awakened powers, magical institutions and schools were created. High-schools trained young fighters and ranked them:
Low-class fighters: G, F, E, D
Mid-class fighters: C, B, A
High-class fighters: S, SS, SSS
And a rare few became Demonic Fighters with special titles.
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Reflexo:
"Hey Zento! Wassup bro? Why are you giving me that serious look?"
But Zento didn't smile back.
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Narrator:
A girl suddenly collapsed. Blood poured from her body. Everyone screamed and backed away in fear.
A boy — the one who had just died — lay beside her.
Then chaos exploded.
Reflexo froze. His eyes filled with rage.
Because the person who killed the girl…
was Zento.
And the girl who died was Reflexo's sister.
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Reflexo:
"WHY?! Why did you do that?!"
A golden aura burst from his body, blazing like fire.
Narrator:
Zento stepped back, shocked.
Reflexo punched so hard that the air exploded.
Zento couldn't dodge — the punch sent him crashing into a wall.
Zento:
"You need to understand—"
Reflexo:
"Understand WHAT?! You killed my sister, and you want me to understand?!"
Reflexo charged again, moving so fast he was almost invisible.
Zento braced himself—
but Reflexo's power was too much.
Reflexo collapsed. His energy was overflowing beyond his limits.
He fainted on the floor.
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END