Well, where do I start? Besides the beginning, obviously (laugh, I have no friends). I've been reading a ton of fanfics for Naruto and other works, and honestly, I feel like something is missing beyond "fast progress and collecting women like they're Hentai version Pokémon." I mean, there's no personality, no critical thinking, and rationality is more missing than an honest politician. I literally read one where girls fell in love just by LOOKING at the MC. What the heck is that?
And don't even get me started on the side characters with Windows XP brains. Kakashi, with years of experience, loses to the MC in, like, Chapter 2. Seriously?
But, well, "maybe the author explains it later, right?" Nope... He has a system that gave him the powers of Broly God SSJ Phase 4, the 10 Tailed Beasts, Gojo's Infinity, and the National Health Insurance. Brother... Please.
My point is, I got tired. I put some constructive criticism on a random fic like that, and someone jumped me with: "Bro, if it bothers you that much, write your own." And I thought: Why not? How bad can it go? (Spoiler: probably really bad, but let me cook).
The truth is, this is my first fic, and I don't want to create inconsistencies or forget something important. But you know: we're human, and sometimes our brains delete stuff, so...
Obviously, I'm not going to change my story to satisfy troll2932 about adding a female Kakashi... (I see you, bro), but if I mess up "there," "their," or "they're" etc. And it can be fixed without the universe imploding, then that's cool.
About the girls in the harem and how many there will be... you'll just have to read to find out. Suspense, mystery, soap opera stuff, you know? That will come later, as right now, even I am getting lost with all this rambling.
FYI: I'm using Grammarly to translate this fic. English isn't my first language, so I'm working on leveling up my skills there.
Anyway, this is just the ramblings and comments of an author in the process of perfection (Cell reference). The actual story... that will come in the next auxiliary volume.
Ciao~