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Chapter 1 - Prologue: The Price of Kindness

The Riven Hamlet, five years ago. A small, wood-smoke filled cottage.

Kael's hands shook, bathed in the sickly yellow lamplight. He wasn't holding a knife or a sword, but life itself. His sister, Elara, lay still on the cot. At ten years old, she looked impossibly small, the relentless mountain fever having burned away her small, freckled face and left her skin translucent.

The Theocracy doctor, a man whose faith was stronger than his medicine, had left an hour ago, muttering prayers for her soul and citing the dreaded Purity Edicts—Thou Shalt Not Interfere with God's Will.

God's Will is letting her die, Kael thought, his mouth tasting of ash. I won't accept it.

He closed his eyes, his will focusing not on a prayer, but a profound violation. He reached past the physical—past the sweat, the cotton sheets, the biting cold of the mountain air—and found it: the Soul-Code.

It pulsed around Elara like an intricate, luminous spiderweb of pure magical potential. It was the intrinsic blueprint that defined her existence, beautiful in its geometric, cosmic precision. He was a Weaver, though untrained, and his mind's eye could trace every strand. He sought the section labeled [Illness-Binding], a knot of corrupted, gray-flecked threads that were throttling her life force.

With a gasp of effort—a searing pain that felt like pulling iron from his own lungs, leaving a raw, aching vacuum in his chest—he began to pull the corrupted threads out, replacing them with a clean, stronger thread of his own making, drawn from the well of his own will, his Anima. He was creating a magical antibiotic, a rewrite of the code that demanded perfect, unyielding concentration. His nose began to bleed, the price of spiritual exertion leaking onto his lip.

The Glitch.

A single, critical thread snapped like a plucked harp string. The sound was a high-pitched scream of reality fracturing.

The light of the Code flared white-hot, scalding Kael's inner vision before rushing back into his sister with terrifying speed. He cried out, instinctively pulling his consciousness back. The energy rebounded off Elara, striking Kael with a wave of psychic pressure that left him paralyzed, pinned against the wall.

Elara's eyes flew open. They were no longer the soft hazel of their mother, but a deep, unsettling indigo, radiating raw, unstable energy. The color wasn't paint; it was a swirling, starless vortex that seemed to absorb the lamplight. The fever was gone, yes, but something more had changed. She looked at him, not with the warm recognition of a sister, but with a sudden, devastating understanding—an awareness that ripped through Kael's mind like a physical scream, laying bare his desperation and fear.

He had succeeded. He had saved her life. But he hadn't just fixed her. He had rewritten her into something fundamentally unknown, unstable, and marked. That night, Kael Lynder learned that the greatest sin was not disobedience, but amateur kindness.

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