Yo, Aldric_ here.
Wanted leave this here for context.
This is my actual first attempt at a full blown villain oriented character. I like my other works.
So if you see my writing for the MC slip a bit from his character archetype I have given him, don't hesitate to call it out and comment it. It helps a lot!
Also, again this is my first attempt at an actual villain—or, irredeemable character. I had a lot of time to write and see for myself if I was good enough tot write one, but results of my own show I need an actual audience to help provide additional feedback.
Again. I thank you for taking the time for reading this. It means a lot.
Feel free to add this story to your library or share it if you feel as though someone you know may enjoy it.
Thanks again.
-Aldric_