[A/N: I would appreciate more reviews :) It truly doesn't matter if the criticism is good or bad... It would just help me become a better writer and deliver a better story!]
After playfully dancing with a beauty, Ash reappeared in his room given by Archie and Layla. He smiled as he floated cross-legged over the bed. He then waved his hand as a mirror appeared, showing him his new appearance.
Honestly, not much changed for him—his skin was still alabaster, hair long and ethereal white. Eyes remained two different blood drops: one white, the other void black. But on his back, twelve wings now unfurled—mix of phoenix flames, seraphim radiance, and Nosferatu void, rose-pink veins threading through all.
All in all, he looked more… difficult to describe. Ethereal, balanced, terrifyingly beautiful.
"Alright, show me exactly what these two races changed?"
