CHAPTER 2 – THE GIRL WHO RETURNED FROM THE DEAD
(Part 1 of 3)
Snow wrapped the Lin estate in silence. Beneath that stillness, Lian Yue's pulse beat like a muffled drum. Each throb whispered the same promise: I am alive—and they will pay.
Her hands ached from scrubbing marble floors, yet the pain steadied her. The life of a servant was humiliation, but it offered camouflage. While the other maids gossiped and stole moments of warmth by the fire, she studied corridors, keys, faces. A map of vengeance began to take shape inside her mind.
That morning the phoenix mark on her wrist pulsed faintly, a heat that shimmered beneath the skin. She ducked behind a column and pressed her palm to the chill stone. The warmth subsided, leaving a faint scent of ash.
> "You're restless too," she murmured to the spirit coiled inside her.
"Wait. Let me build the pyre first."
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The Servant's World
The inner courtyard smelled of wet cedar and soap. Servants bowed to overseers; overseers bowed to stewards; everyone bowed to fear. Lian Yue learned their rhythms quickly—when the kitchens were unguarded, which corridor the Duke's messengers used, which maids were cruel for sport.
She rarely spoke, earning a reputation as "the quiet one." That suited her. Silence made people careless. They spoke of Duke Lin's temper, of his son's return from the border wars, of the banquet that had ended in whispers of an imperial summons.
At dusk, when she carried trays to the storage house, she listened through thin walls as soldiers recounted blood-soaked rumors.
> "The Emperor suspects Duke Lin of hoarding tax silver," one guard muttered.
"If that's true, the whole household's finished."
Her lips curved. Perfect. The gods are impatient for my revenge.
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A Spark in the Frost
Later that night, Lian Yue sneaked into the garden. The moon glazed the frozen pond; her breath rose in white spirals. She extended her hand and thought of betrayal—Mei's sweet smile, the Emperor's indifferent eyes, the executioner's blade.
A thin line of fire slithered from her fingertips. It danced across the snow without melting it, then vanished. The phoenix power was awakening, still shy, still hungry.
"Not yet," she whispered. "Grow with me."
A voice startled her. "Who's there?"
She turned. Lin Jian stood at the garden's archway, his cloak dusted with frost. He looked younger than the soldier she remembered—less armor, more uncertainty—but his eyes were the same: sharp as winter steel.
She dropped to her knees. "Forgive me, my lord. I—I was sent to clear the path."
He approached slowly, boots crunching over ice. The moon cast his face in pale silver. "Clear it at midnight?"
"I could not sleep."
He studied her. For a moment she feared the phoenix's heat would betray her, that he would see the faint glow beneath her skin. But he only frowned, as if chasing a memory.
"What is your name?"
"Yue."
He nodded once. "Go inside before you freeze."
When he turned away, the mark on her wrist burned like a brand. You once held the sword that killed me, she thought. Now you protect me without knowing why.
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Threads of Deceit
Over the next days she moved like a shadow through the estate, collecting whispers. She learned that the Duke's steward, Chen Wei, managed bribes disguised as "gifts." She learned that Lady Mei corresponded secretly with palace officials.
One evening, while scrubbing the steward's floor, she noticed a locked drawer behind his desk. The key hung on his belt. When he dozed over wine later that night, she slipped it free and opened the drawer.
Inside lay several sealed scrolls bearing the imperial crest. She unrolled one and read:
> "By decree of His Majesty Zhao Shen, the Ministry of Revenue is to investigate irregularities in the accounts of Duke Lin of the Eastern Province…"
Her pulse quickened. The Emperor was indeed circling his former ally.
She copied names and figures onto scraps of linen, memorizing them before feeding them to the brazier. Information is a blade sharper than any dagger, she reminded herself.
As she prepared to leave, the door creaked.
Lin Jian again.
He stepped inside, gaze flicking from her to the open drawer. "You enjoy working late, Yue."
She bowed deeply. "The steward spilled wine. I was cleaning."
He approached until their shadows merged. The candlelight caught the edge of his jaw, the faint scar that ran to his temple—the scar she remembered giving him in her final struggle as Empress.
> "Your hands are trembling," he said.
"It's cold, my lord."
He reached past her, shut the drawer, and locked it. "Be careful whose mess you clean. Some stains never wash away."
When he left, her knees nearly buckled. She hated that his voice could still reach something soft inside her.
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Fire and Memory
That night she dreamed of flames consuming the imperial palace. Amid the smoke, a phoenix rose—wings vast, eyes like molten gold. It circled once and dived into her chest. She woke gasping, the mark on her wrist glowing.
Heat flooded her veins. She staggered outside before the fire could burst free and alert the house. In the snow-covered courtyard she let it blaze. Red-gold feathers unfurled around her, each one a wisp of light.
For an instant she felt weightless, limitless. The world bent to her will. Then the power collapsed, leaving her shivering and drained.
"Emotion feeds you," she whispered, clutching her chest. "But too much, and you devour me."
From the shadows came quiet applause.
Lin Jian again—of course.
He had followed the faint glow through the fog. Now he stared at the ring of melted snow around her.
"What did you do?"
"Salt," she lied quickly. "To melt the ice."
His brow furrowed. He didn't believe her, yet something held him back from pressing further. Instead he said softly, "You remind me of someone. Someone I can't forget."
Her breath caught. Because you killed her, she thought. But aloud she said, "Perhaps a ghost, my lord."
He gave a humorless smile. "Perhaps." Then he turned away.
When he was gone, she sank to her knees. "Fate," she muttered, "you are crueler than any tyrant."
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The Poisoned Wine
Days passed. The steward's arrogance grew unbearable. He shouted, struck servants, and pocketed coin meant for repairs. Lian Yue watched, patient as a spider.
Finally she slipped a measured drop of apothecary draught into his nightly wine. Not enough to kill—yet enough to still his senses. When he collapsed snoring across his desk, she searched the room again.
This time she found more than letters. Hidden beneath false ledgers was a list of names—allies who funded the Duke's private army. Some were generals, others wealthy merchants. With this, she could ruin them all.
But footsteps echoed outside. She barely had time to hide behind a screen as Lin Jian entered.
"Still drunk," he muttered, seeing the steward sprawled over the desk. He approached, then hesitated, glancing around the room. "Strange. I smell smoke."
Lian Yue's heart pounded. A wisp of phoenix heat still clung to her fingers.
He moved closer to the screen. She gripped a letter opener, ready to strike if he discovered her. But instead he sighed, tugged the steward upright, and muttered, "Foolish old man. You'll hang us all."
When he left, she exhaled shakily. Too close.
Still, she had what she needed. By morning the steward's corruption would become her weapon.
(Part 2 of 3)
The next morning, the estate buzzed with whispers. The steward had been found unconscious, drooling over forged ledgers. The Duke's fury thundered through the halls; servants scattered like frightened birds.
Lian Yue kept her head bowed while polishing brass. She didn't need to witness the punishment—she could hear it. A single cry, a crack of wood against flesh, then silence. When the doors reopened, Chen Wei was dismissed, his post handed to a younger clerk who feared his own shadow.
One piece removed from the board. The game had begun.
She spent the rest of the day in the garden, pretending to prune dead branches. Snowflakes clung to her hair; the cold kept her thoughts sharp. For each enemy she destroyed, she would gather the ashes and build a ladder to reach the palace.
But something inside her trembled—not with fear, but with awareness. Lin Jian had been watching her. Not openly, yet she could feel it, like heat against her back.
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A Soldier's Gaze
That evening he found her again by the frozen pond. She didn't bow this time.
"My lord," she said evenly.
He circled her slowly, eyes searching her face. "The steward's downfall was convenient. You wouldn't know anything about that, would you?"
She let out a quiet laugh. "I'm a servant, my lord. Servants know nothing. We only listen."
"That's the dangerous part."
He stepped closer until she could see the reflection of her faint red wrist-mark in his pupils. "When I was a soldier," he continued, "I saw spies who smiled just like you before a knife slipped between a man's ribs."
Lian Yue tilted her head. "Did they deserve it?"
His lips twitched—half a smile, half a warning. "Most did."
Their silence stretched taut between them. For a heartbeat she wondered if he might draw the sword at his hip. Instead he turned away.
"I should report you," he said. "But I won't. Not yet."
When he left, she felt the phoenix stir. He spares me out of curiosity. I'll use that.
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Letters from the Capital
A week later, imperial messengers arrived through blinding snow. The Duke received them in his grand hall, his face pale beneath its mask of pride. Lian Yue, pretending to serve tea, listened carefully as the letter was read aloud.
> "His Majesty commands that Duke Lin present himself at the Spring Tribunal to account for discrepancies in the Eastern taxes."
Gasps rippled through the court. The Duke crushed the letter in his fist. "Lies!" he thundered. "My loyalty is beyond question!"
Lian Yue bowed to hide her smile. The Emperor devours his hounds when they grow too fat.
That night, panic infected the household. Servants whispered of soldiers to be sent, of estates to be seized. Amid the chaos, Lian Yue slipped quietly into the Duke's study. She left a single folded note on his desk—anonymous, written in a hand he wouldn't recognize:
> The Emperor's gaze is not the only danger. There are ghosts in your walls.
When he read it at dawn, suspicion would turn inward. The household would devour itself long before imperial judgment arrived.
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The Phoenix's Hunger
Power answered her faster now. When anger flared, the air around her rippled. Flames coiled along her wrist like living bracelets. At first she feared discovery; soon she relished it.
One night she stood alone in the servant courtyard, eyes closed, summoning that inner blaze. The heat shaped itself into a pair of translucent wings, each feather edged in gold.
She lifted her hands, and snow evaporated in a perfect circle around her.
Then pain struck—a spear through her ribs. The light burst outward, shattering her control. She bit her lip to keep from screaming.
The fire obeyed emotion, but emotion was a storm. Too much grief, and it raged without mercy.
Through the haze she heard footsteps.
"Yue!"
Lin Jian rushed toward her. She dropped to her knees, forcing the fire to die before he reached her. Steam curled from the ground.
He grabbed her shoulders. "You're burning up!"
"I—fell," she lied breathlessly. "The brazier tipped—"
He touched her wrist; the mark pulsed beneath his thumb. His eyes widened. "You're injured—what is this?"
She jerked free. "Nothing, my lord. Just a scar."
He stared a moment longer, then stepped back, expression unreadable. "You're hiding something. I can feel it."
When he left, she collapsed against the wall, chest heaving. He feels the bond, the phoenix whispered inside her mind. He killed you once. That link will never fade.
Lian Yue pressed her palm to her heart. "Then I'll make him remember everything—when it's time."
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The Banquet of Ashes
Two days later the Duke hosted a feast to display his innocence before his allies. Lian Yue volunteered for serving duty; few noticed the quiet maid who moved like a shadow between nobles.
From her vantage near the wine table she watched Lin Jian standing beside his father, speaking with calm restraint. He looked weary, disillusioned. Perhaps even ashamed.
When she poured his cup, their hands brushed. He looked up sharply. "Yue."
Her breath caught. "My lord."
Something unspoken flickered between them—a recognition neither could name. Then a shout erupted across the hall.
"The Duke's documents—missing!"
Panic exploded. Ministers accused one another; guards stormed the corridors. In the confusion, Lian Yue slipped away, carrying the true records she'd stolen days earlier. She hid them in a hollow behind the stables, safe from discovery.
When she returned, the feast was in ruins. The Duke roared for order, Lin Jian barked commands, and amid the chaos, she felt the phoenix purr in satisfaction.
Let them burn themselves alive.
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Moonlight Confession
That night, after the hall emptied, she found Lin Jian waiting in the corridor. His voice was quiet but edged.
"You knew this would happen."
She didn't feign ignorance. "And if I did?"
"Then you're playing a dangerous game."
She met his eyes. "And you, my lord, are fighting for a man the Emperor has already decided to destroy."
He froze. "How would a servant know that?"
"Because servants listen."
He took a slow step toward her. "You speak like someone who's seen the palace."
The air thickened with tension—anger, curiosity, and something warmer. She could have lied, deflected, but some reckless part of her wanted him to see her.
"I've seen many things," she said softly. "Including the cost of loyalty."
For a heartbeat, neither moved. The torches flickered, throwing light between them like trembling gold threads.
Then he whispered, "Who are you, Yue?"
Her pulse raced. "Someone you wouldn't believe."
Before he could reply, she slipped away into the shadows.
(Part 3 of 3)
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The Fire Trial
The storm broke at midnight.
A messenger galloped into the courtyard, screaming that imperial soldiers were on their way. Within hours, panic spread through every corner of the Lin estate. Servants fled with their wages, ministers sealed trunks of silver, and Duke Lin shouted until his throat bled.
Through it all, Lian Yue moved calmly. Her revenge was no longer a whisper—it was unfolding, vast and inevitable.
She entered the armory under the pretext of fetching lantern oil. The air smelled of rust and fear. On the table lay the Duke's seal and the family records, hastily gathered for destruction. She dipped the edge of her sleeve in oil and let it drip onto the parchment. One spark from her wrist was enough.
Flames leapt high, devouring the documents that had hidden his crimes. She watched until the fire traced the dragon insignia and turned it black.
Behind her, boots struck stone.
"What have you done?"
Lin Jian stood in the doorway, sword half-drawn.
"The truth," she answered. "It burns easily."
He crossed the distance in two strides, grabbing her arm. "You'll kill us all!"
"The Emperor already decided that," she said quietly. "I'm only hastening what's due."
Her phoenix mark glowed crimson, heat radiating between them. Lin Jian's grip faltered as the temperature surged.
"What are you?" he demanded.
She looked up at him—eyes blazing gold for the first time. "I am what your father and your Emperor made me."
Recognition struck like lightning. He staggered back, horror and disbelief warring across his face.
"No… you can't be—she's dead."
"She was," Lian Yue said, voice rising above the roar of fire. "You made sure of it."
The flames reflected in her tears as memories flooded him—the Empress's final scream, the order he'd obeyed without question, the execution ground bathed in red dawn.
"I didn't know," he whispered. "I didn't—"
"You didn't care."
The phoenix burst from her skin—a halo of scarlet light that sent heat crashing against the walls. Swords warped, banners ignited. Lin Jian shielded his eyes, his cloak catching fire at the edges.
"Run," she said. "Before I forget that mercy exists."
He hesitated, then dropped his sword and fled.
When he was gone, she released the full fury she'd restrained since her rebirth. The blaze consumed the armory, leapt to the outer walls, and clawed toward the night sky like a living creature.
For a moment she stood at its center, untouchable, radiant, terrible.
Then exhaustion crushed her. She collapsed to her knees as the phoenix's power dimmed, leaving behind a crater of ash and silence.
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Ashes and Chains
By dawn the estate was a ruin. Soldiers swarmed through the smoke, arresting survivors. Duke Lin was dragged from his chambers, raving about betrayal. His son—disheveled, burned, eyes hollow—did not speak.
Lian Yue hid among the servants again, her face streaked with soot. The imperial officers questioned everyone, but none suspected the quiet maid whose hands still trembled from wielding divine fire.
When they marched the Duke away, she watched from the crowd. Their gazes met for a single heartbeat. He did not recognize her, but some instinct made him flinch.
For now, she thought. The Emperor's turn will come next.
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The Road North
Days later, snow still fell over the ruins. The soldiers had gone; the estate stood hollow. Lian Yue packed what little she owned—a spare cloak, a dagger, a strip of parchment bearing names of the Emperor's loyalists.
As she left the gates, a figure appeared from the shadows.
Lin Jian.
He looked older already, guilt carving lines into his face. His arm was bandaged; his sword hung limp at his side.
"Yue—no, that's not your name, is it?" he said softly.
She didn't answer.
"I remember now," he continued. "The execution. The fire. Your eyes."
"Then you know why I can't stop."
He nodded slowly. "Revenge won't bring peace."
"Neither will repentance."
He stepped closer. "If you go after the Emperor, you'll die again."
She met his gaze, calm and resolute. "Then let him face the same death he gave me."
He flinched as if struck, then reached into his cloak and handed her a scroll.
"This is a list of the Emperor's inner circle—names, routes, guards. Take it. If you must burn something, start there."
She accepted it silently.
"Why help me?" she asked.
"Because I owe a ghost a debt I can never repay."
Their eyes met one last time. For the first time since her rebirth, she felt no hatred—only the ache of something once human.
"Farewell, Lin Jian," she said.
He bowed his head. "May your fire find justice."
She turned and walked into the snow. Behind her, the ruins of the Lin estate smoldered, black smoke rising like wings against the pale sky.
The phoenix mark on her wrist pulsed once more, and in its glow she saw the path ahead: north, toward the imperial capital. Toward the throne that awaited its reckoning.
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Epilogue: The Whisper of Wings
That night, she camped beside a frozen river. The stars shone bright and cold. She stared into the flames of her small fire, listening to the faint echo of wings in the wind.
You've taken the first step, the phoenix murmured within her. Will you burn the world, or rebuild it?
Lian Yue closed her eyes. "Both."
The fire flared brighter, as though the heavens themselves had heard her vow.
And far away, in the golden heart of the imperial city, Emperor Zhao Shen woke from a dream of fire and blood, whispering a single name he thought long erased from history.
> "Lian Yue."
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CHAPTER 2 SYNOPSIS
In Chapter 2 of Crimson Phoenix, Lian Yue fully awakens her reborn power and begins dismantling the Lin household from within. She poisons the steward, uncovers imperial secrets, and orchestrates the destruction of the Duke's estate as soldiers close in. Two confrontations with Lin Jian force buried memories to surface, revealing to him that the quiet servant is the Empress he once executed. When her phoenix fire finally erupts, the estate burns to ash, the Duke is arrested, and Lin Jian—torn between guilt and fascination—helps her escape. The chapter ends with Lian Yue setting out for the imperial capital, her vengeance widening from one noble house to the throne itself.
(Part 4 – The Road to the Capital)
The snow thickened as Lian Yue followed the frozen river north. Days bled into nights. Her steps left faint imprints that the wind quickly devoured, as if the world itself wished to erase her path. The scroll Lin Jian had given her lay tucked against her chest, the parchment warm from the pulse of her phoenix mark.
Each name written there burned like a promise.
The first was Minister Han Zuo, the Emperor's keeper of secrets. A man who had whispered in Zhao Shen's ear when the Empress was condemned. If she could reach him, she could learn how deep the rot in the court went.
By the fifth day, the river valley gave way to forest. Pines towered black against the snow; frost hung from the branches like glass daggers. Lian Yue built a small fire beneath an overhang and roasted what little she'd trapped—half-frozen hare, bitter berries. The air smelled of smoke and memory.
As she ate, the phoenix stirred within her.
You hesitate, the voice murmured. Why?
"I've already burned a house," she whispered. "Do I now burn an empire?"
Rebirth always demands fire.
She closed her eyes. Behind her lids, visions flickered—cities aflame, wings of light cutting through darkness, the Emperor kneeling in ashes. Yet in those same flames, she saw Lin Jian's face, not hateful but hollow, lost.
The phoenix's voice softened. Even fire can choose what it spares.
When she opened her eyes, the night had deepened. A faint sound drifted through the trees—hooves, distant but drawing near. She doused the fire with snow, crouching low.
A caravan appeared between the pines: five riders escorting a lacquered carriage bearing the insignia of the Han Ministry. Fate, it seemed, had answered too soon.
Lian Yue moved like a shadow.
She waited until the riders halted to rest at the river bend. Then she circled behind, silent as falling ash. With a flick of her wrist, a spark from her fingertip ignited a patch of dry moss. The smell of burning pine sent the horses into panic.
As the guards rushed to contain them, she slipped to the carriage. One guard remained—a woman in a half-mask, spear drawn.
Their eyes met. The guard lunged. Lian Yue sidestepped, catching the shaft and twisting. The woman fell hard, but her movement was precise, disciplined. This wasn't a mere escort—it was a personal protector.
"Who sent you?" Lian Yue asked.
The guard spat blood, smiling faintly. "Han Zuo doesn't travel unguarded."
That was all the answer she needed.
She pressed two fingers against the guard's temple, channeling a thread of heat—not enough to kill, but enough to unravel the mind's grip on wakefulness. The woman slumped unconscious.
Lian Yue opened the carriage door. Inside, amid silk cushions, sat a thin man in scholar's robes, his beard trembling as he recognized her silhouette.
"You… you're—"
"The dead don't answer to titles," she said. "You wrote lies that killed an Empress. Tell me why."
Han Zuo's eyes darted to the burning trees outside. "The Emperor ordered it. He said the omen demanded blood—he said the Empire would crumble unless the phoenix was sacrificed!"
Her pulse thundered. "So it was never treason. Only superstition."
"Yes—yes! He feared your power, feared the court's whispers that the Empress's light would outshine his throne!"
Lian Yue's hands trembled with rage. For years she had believed the accusations: betrayal, conspiracy, corruption. All false, spun from fear of the divine flame she carried.
"Then you will write again," she said coldly. "You will tell the truth this time."
"I can't—he'll kill me!"
"He already has."
The fire outside roared louder, reflecting in her eyes. Han Zuo's protest died on his tongue. He seized a brush and parchment, hands shaking, as she dictated every word: the Emperor's plot, the falsified decree, the bribes paid to witnesses. When he finished, she sealed the scroll with a drop of her blood.
"Deliver this to the capital archives," she ordered. "If you survive the journey, perhaps the gods will forgive you."
Then she vanished into the forest before his guards could regroup.
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By dawn, she reached a mountain pass overlooking the outer ring of the capital. The city shimmered below—a sea of rooftops glazed with snow, the golden spire of the Imperial Palace piercing the clouds. The sight twisted her heart; this had once been home.
Her hand brushed the mark on her wrist. The phoenix pulsed faintly, sensing her turmoil.
You return to your ashes, it whispered. Will you rise or burn again?
Lian Yue drew her cloak tighter. "That depends on who still remembers me."
She descended through the merchant quarter as the city awakened. Vendors shouted, wheels creaked, incense smoke rose from temples. No one looked twice at the cloaked traveler whose eyes held embers beneath the frost.
At a tea stall, she paused. Across the street stood a posting board plastered with decrees. One bore her likeness—the Empress's painted portrait, bordered in gold, captioned 'In Eternal Reverence: Her Sacrifice for the Empire.'
Her sacrifice.
Lian Yue tore the paper down and folded it carefully, sliding it into her satchel. "You'll see what sacrifice truly means," she murmured.
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That night she rented a small attic above a herbalist's shop. The old owner, blind in one eye, asked no questions. She lit a single candle and spread Lin Jian's scroll beside Han Zuo's confession. Two paths of vengeance lay before her: the Emperor's court and the web of ministers that upheld it.
Her breath fogged the air as she whispered, "Tomorrow, I begin."
The candle guttered—and flared brighter. Within the flame, a shape formed: a bird of fire, tiny and fierce, perched atop the wick.
"You grow stronger," the phoenix said. "Each truth uncovered feeds the flame."
"Then I'll uncover them all."
The bird tilted its head. Even the truth inside you?
She froze. For the first time, she saw her reflection in the window: not the maid or the Empress, but something in-between—a creature reborn yet burdened by grief.
"I'll face it," she said finally. "But not tonight."
The phoenix gave a low trill and vanished into sparks.
Outside, the bells of the palace tolled midnight. Far away, Emperor Zhao Shen stood at his balcony, staring into the same stars. His dreams had been haunted for nights—visions of crimson wings and a voice whispering his name.
He turned to his general. "Double the guards. There's a storm coming."
And in the city below, hidden among commoners and shadows, the storm was already waiting.