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the Nocturne King's Eclipse

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A human reborn as a vampiric Alicorn prince discovers his kind were sealed away by Princess Celestia. Believing her a tyrant who condemned his people to die, he vows revenge. Disguising himself, he ventures into Equestria to reclaim his tribe's stolen power source, aiming to eclipse her sun and force her to acknowledge the kingdom she tried to erase.
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Chapter 1 - chapter 1

Alex Drake had never thought much about death. Not in a philosophical, life-is-fragile way, nor in a "what if my time is up?" way. He was an average man in an average city, with an average apartment, an average job, and an average set of worries: bills, deadlines, the creeping sense that life was slipping past him too fast. He liked his routine. It was safe. It was predictable. 

On that Tuesday, the day began like any other. The alarm clock buzzed at 6:30 a.m., a tinny, insistent sound that made him groan. He rolled over, smacking the snooze button, and let himself linger in the warmth of his bed for a few precious minutes. Outside, the sky was a pale gray, clouds stretched thin across the city. Coffee smelled faintly bitter but welcome. The faint hum of traffic seeped through the closed window. 

He dressed quickly—jeans, T-shirt, hoodie—grabbed his briefcase, and headed out. The streets smelled of exhaust, wet asphalt, and the faint tang of bread from a corner bakery. Nothing seemed out of the ordinary. 

The office was the same as ever: fluorescent lights that buzzed faintly, computers humming, the dull drone of office chatter. Alex sat at his cubicle, opened his laptop, and logged into the day's endless emails. A spreadsheet here, a report there, a phone call to a client who didn't care. It was tedious, but it was life. And Alex had always been good at enduring the ordinary. 

By mid-morning, a faint tightness had begun to coil around his chest. He ignored it at first. Coffee? Stress? Maybe he'd slept wrong. He rubbed his temple and tried to focus, trying to convince himself it was nothing. But the tightness did not fade. It clenched. It tightened. And then came the dizziness, subtle at first, then terrifyingly sharp. 

"Alex?" A coworker's voice. He blinked, and the office seemed to tilt. Colors bled into one another, the humming of computers became a roar, and the world narrowed to a single, suffocating point of pressure in his chest. 

Then it happened. 

The heart, that steady, silent engine of life, faltered. A misfire. A stop. Everything that had seemed so ordinary, so manageable, unraveled in an instant. 

He gasped—no, he tried to gasp, but the air would not come. A scream formed in his throat, but nothing emerged. His vision swam. He saw faces—blurred, panicked—leaning over him. Hands grasped him, shook him. Someone shouted. Someone called his name. 

"Alex! Stay with me!" 

The floor rushed up to meet him. Pain, like he'd never known, erupted through every nerve. Not sharp. Not fiery. Just… crushing. His senses fragmented. A final burst of thought: I wasn't ready. I wasn't ready for this. And then, nothing. 

Nothing was absolute. 

The world as he knew it ceased to exist. No light, no sound, no air, no touch. Not peace. Not sleep. Just the infinite, cold emptiness of void. His body was gone. His mind was gone. Or at least, what he recognized as mind was gone. There was only… awareness, raw and unshaped. 

And yet, even in the void, something reached for him. Something ancient and desperate, stretching across incomprehensible distance. It was not a sound, not even a vibration in the normal sense, but a tug—a call that wound itself through the fibers of his consciousness, stirring what remained of him. 

It resonated with loss. With longing. With hunger. 

The Amethyst Moon Stone had been taken. Its theft fractured the ancient spells that held it. Its final, dying pulse of magic called out into the void, seeking a vessel. Alex's soul, fragile and human, severed from his mortal coil, was the spark it needed. 

He was pulled. Twisted. Torn. Remade. 

Pain returned—not human pain, not the pain of a heart attack, but something worse: the tearing of essence itself, the stretching of identity beyond what his mind could comprehend. Memories, emotions, the mundane things that had defined Alex Drake—friends, coffee, city streets, the sound of rain against a window—they were scraped away. He did not lose them; they were remade into something else. Something more. 

He became a conduit. 

Awareness returned in jagged, terrifying bursts. First, it was weight—immense, unnatural weight pressing on every limb, every joint, every inch of his chest. Panic surged, raw and unfiltered. He tried to lift his arms. Nothing obeyed. Not hands, not arms… something else entirely. 

He looked down—or thought he did—and froze. Where his fingers should have been, there was a single, solid, midnight-blue hoof. The texture was smooth and hard, impossibly heavy, a strange, alien perfection. He tried to lift it again. It obeyed in some sense, but awkwardly, like a limb that didn't belong to him at all. A strangled sound escaped his throat. It was deep, resonant, guttural. Not his voice. Something inhuman. He gagged at it. 

"Wh-what…?" he croaked in his own mind. Words formed, but no lips, no tongue, no teeth were there to shape them. Only instinctual sound, raw and terrible. Fear curled in his gut. 

He tried to sit up. The weight of his chest pinned him. He could feel bones shifting, muscles straining, growing. His ribcage expanded, his spine stretched. Panic turned into nausea as he realized the full scope: this was not an illusion, not a dream. His body was being rebuilt from the inside out. 

Something slick and strange grew along his back—wings. Massive wings, leathery and folded against him, scraping against the cavern floor. He tried to move them. They flared, huge and powerful, knocking him sideways. He landed with a heavy thud, moss cushioning the impact. The sound reverberated like thunder in the cavern. 

He looked at his arms, or what were now legs, and they had changed too. Muscles rippled in ways that felt wrong. The skin, if it could be called that, shimmered dark, almost cosmic blue. Veins of silver light traced along them faintly, like lightning frozen under the surface. Every movement was alien, uncoordinated. Every breath was a struggle against a chest that now felt like a solid, alien cage. 

Then his head. His skull reshaped itself in ways that made his brain scream. His jaw elongated slightly, teeth shifted. His ears moved, reshaping, stretching upward. And then—horror of horrors—he felt it: the solid, spiraled weight of a horn pushing through his forehead. His hands—or hooves—clenched, trying to fight it, but the horn simply erupted, unstoppable. The tip glimmered, sharp, iridescent, and impossibly alive. 

He screamed inside. I am dying. I am dying. I am not human anymore. 

Yet part of him—some buried fragment of Alex Drake—observed with clinical horror. This was no mere transformation. It was a violent rewriting of his existence. Memories, emotions, sensations—they were being refitted to a frame beyond comprehension. A mind forged for a body it could never have anticipated. 

He tried to move again. Legs, wings, hooves… all betrayed him at first. Every attempt to rise sent him toppling onto the moss, scraping his new body against the cold, crystalline floor. Panic clawed higher. The cavern seemed impossibly large, every echo of his flailing limbs magnifying his terror. 

And then—the senses. Overloaded, raw, unbearable. He could feel the air flowing past every surface of his new body. He could taste the metal tang of minerals in the cavern. He could smell everything: damp earth, wet stone, crystal, flowers, the faint lingering scent of magic that hummed in the walls. Light was no longer just light. It pulsed, almost sentient, ultraviolet and violet, bouncing off the crystals and making his newly formed eyes ache with the intensity. 

He staggered to his hooves, trying again. Balance… slowly returned. The wings responded. A tentative flick. The horn tingled faintly, buzzing with latent energy. The cavern itself seemed to acknowledge him, silent and watchful. 

And then he saw himself fully. A mirror-like pool of crystal water reflected the enormity of his form. Midnight-blue coat, silver-gray iridescent mane, bat-like wings folded against his sides, horn gleaming. Colossal. Unrecognizable. He was not Alex Drake anymore. 

A thought pierced the panic, cold and sharp: I'm… beautiful. But I'm a monster. 

The cavern itself was alive with light and shadow. Crystals jutted from walls like frozen lightning, pulsing faintly in rhythm with the heartbeat he no longer had. Moss glimmered with soft bioluminescence, tracing constellations on ceilings lost in darkness. Pools of water reflected the violet glow, and somewhere deep in the shadows, he thought he glimpsed movement—shapes watching, waiting. 

His heart—or whatever remained of it—hammered in instinctive terror. What am I? he thought. Why am I here? What is this place? 

Then a voice. Low, grinding, undeniable. 

"Finally. You are awake." 

The sound shattered his terror into jagged pieces. Shadow moved in the cavern. A figure emerged: tall, imposing, polished obsidian coat, magenta eyes glinting like sharp gemstones. Bat-like wings folded neatly. She studied him as one would a weapon newly forged in fire. 

"I am Captain Umbra of the Nocturne Guard," she said. "State your name for the record." 

He tried. Words formed, but all he could manage was the resonance of his new form. "…Nox… Aeterna." 

Her eyes, sharp and unyielding, met his. "Prince Nox Aeterna," she corrected, voice firm. "The Heartstone's last breath called you forth. Prophecies spoke of a savior reborn from the void. They did not say he would be… disoriented." 

Prince? Savior? Void? The thoughts tumbled over themselves in panic and disbelief. He lifted a leg, tested the weight. He flinched. I'm not ready. I'm not ready for this. 

But the cavern seemed to pulse around him, humming with power, with expectation, with judgment. The moss beneath his hooves seemed to shift as if alive, the crystals above shivered faintly, the air vibrating. He could feel it all—not just the stone and the plants—but the magic itself, singing through him, binding him, demanding he rise. 

The realization came, slow and horrifying: this was not optional. He had died. The world he knew was gone. And in its place… this. 

He staggered forward, wings trembling, horn flickering. Moss crunched beneath him, water rippled at his touch. The cavern seemed vast, impossibly so, and yet intimate, like it had been waiting for him, like it knew him already. Panic clashed with awe. I am not human. I am… I am something else. 

A shiver ran down his spine, his new spine, and he pressed his hoof against the floor. Balance. Movement. Control—not yet complete, but possible. He inhaled—or whatever passed for it—and thought, I can stand. I have to. 

Because the cavern waited. 

And in the shadows, he knew, something else waited too.