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Chapter 9 - Chapter 8: The Quiet MVP (Part 1)

Madrid, Spain – Late February 2015

The gym was cold.

Not broken. Just early.

Eli Mercer stood alone at the free throw line.

Ball in hand.

Eyes closed.

Inhale.

Hold.

Exhale.

Bounce.

Catch.

Lift.

Swish.

He didn't count makes.

He counted breath.

Later That Morning – School

Spanish. Math. History.

Eli sat in the back.

Took notes.

Breathed.

He didn't yawn.

Didn't snack.

Didn't fade.

No one noticed.

Except her.

She leaned over during break.

"You never eat."

Eli smiled.

"I'm full."

She didn't ask again.

Afternoon Practice – No Luis

Spacing was off.

Voices clashed.

Too many captains.

Eli didn't speak.

He moved.

Cut early.

Passed late.

Rotated first.

The others followed.

Not because he told them.

Because he showed them.

Evening – Recovery Room

Eli sat in the ice tub.

Breath steady.

Eyes closed.

Luis limped in, crutches clicking.

"You're different now."

Eli opened one eye.

"No. Just quieter."

Luis smiled.

"They're listening."

Eli didn't answer.

He just breathed.

Midnight – Private Gym Entry

Lights off.

No staff.

Just silence.

Eli walked the court.

Touched every line.

Every arc.

Every zone.

Then began.

Shooting Circuit

36 zones

50 makes per zone

No rebounder

No reset allowed

Handle Flow

Fingertip taps

Wall passes

Blind dribbles

Breath-synced ladder

Free Throws

25 makes

Eyes closed

Bounce → breath → lift → swish

Advance Drills (Hidden)

Micro-lift burst

Low-rim contact finish

Intercept timing

Logged in "B-Side" journal

Next Morning – Tournament Game vs. Oslo North

Eli didn't warm up with dunks.

He shot from the elbow.

Then the corner.

Then the logo.

Swish.

Swish.

Swish.

The crowd was louder now.

Signs in the stands:

#TheMap

Captain Without Words

100%

Eli didn't look.

He just bounced the ball.

Once.

Twice.

Game time.

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