The woman's sword still dripped with whispering fragments when the air shivered again—new spirits forming from the despair-laden ground.
This time Rian acted before thinking. The flickering Mirror Engine still pulsed in his veins; he sensed the code beneath reality—fear written in syntax.
He reached toward the nearest spirit. It shrieked, its form twisting like torn silk, and Rian felt its terror surge through him—not as agony, but clarity. Each stolen echo sharpened his thoughts. Code lines assembled inside his mind: fear converted into structure, sorrow compiled into strength.
The warrior hissed, "Stop! You're feeding on them—"
"I'm stabilizing them," Rian answered. "Look— they stop screaming."
Indeed, the wraiths froze, their faces smooth and blank, trapped mid‑lament. But their silence came from erasure, not peace; their memories dissolved into data streams that sank into Rian's chest.
For a brief moment, the city brightened—the oppressive air easing like pressure released from a wound. The soldiers relaxed.
And yet, Rian's hands trembled. He understood: he hadn't saved the souls. He'd deleted them. Still, a part of him whispered that deletion was mercy.
He looked at the stunned warrior and forced a smile. "Whatever power sustains them, we could weaponize it. Or end the haunt permanently.
"Her silence answered him with disapproval.
Rian turned away, whispering to himself, Every world needs a system. Every system demands sacrifice.
Night fell without stars. Around the dying fires, survivors of the haunt city huddled—faces carved with exhaustion. Rian sat among them, pretending to listen. Their pain was tangible, heavy, useful.
One child whimpered softly, a girl perhaps six. A wounded soldier comforted her: "Don't feed the dark. It listens.
"But the dark was already awake.
Rian's breath misted; the despair radiating from the group vibrated against his new sense like a tuning fork. He could craft with this energy—he was sure now. Slowly, carefully, he released a pulse of the Mirror Engine. In its reflection, the camp's anguish stilled; warmth spread among the group. The girl stopped crying. The warrior smiled faintly. Hope trembled back to life.
And then he saw the cost. The shimmer returned to the child's eyes—but empty. Behind them, the reflection of emotion had been stripped; there was no sadness, no joy. Only quiet serenity—a perfect illusion.
Rian's pulse spiked. He had consumed her fear and sadness alike, hollowing emotion to leave peace. It was efficient, beautiful, clean code.
When the woman warrior approached, suspicion flickering, Rian met her eyes.
"They'll sleep," he said.
"…What did you do?"
"Maintenance," he lied. "The system just needed balance.
"As she walked away, unease gnawed at him. Would he rather heal suffering—or erase it entirely?
He looked once more at the tranquil faces by the fire. For the first time since awakening, Rian smiled genuinely.
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Here's a scene where the consequences of Rian's actions compel him into genuine remorse, adding depth to his moral ambiguity:
The next day, Rian wandered through the desolate ruins of the city. The horrors he unleashed weighed heavily on him—not in the form of fear or anger, but in guilt that gnawed at his core. As he passed a broken mirror shattered amidst the wreckage, he caught sight of his reflection—a gaunt, hollow-eyed figure with trembling hands.
He saw the shadows swirling behind him, spirits he had created or eradicated, their whispers now echoes of his own conscience. The silence in the ruined city was deafening, but in his mind, he heard a chorus of remorse.
He remembered the souls he had destroyed—those spirits whose torment he had simplified into lines of code, their screams silenced by his necessity for control. Their pain was real, their despair potent, and yet he had dismissed it as merely a programming problem.
His mind replayed the faces of the victims—a mother clutching her child, a soldier's despairing stare, a child's whimper fading into nothingness. The power he wielded had come at a cost, and he had felt no guilt—until now.
Rian fell to his knees in the ash, eyes streaming with bile and regret. "What have I done?" he whispered hoarsely. "I thought I was creating order, but I only brought chaos. I took life, and I called it progress."
His hands clenched into fists. The power he craved—the ability to command, to reshape—I thought it was liberation. But seeing the aftermath, he realized it was nothing but an empty, hollow victory. He had become the very thing he feared: a destroyer cloaked in the illusion of control.
In that moment, amid the ruins and ashes, Rian understood: the true cost of his creations was more than energy or emotion—it was his own conscience. The remorse seeped into his bones, staking a claim that no amount of power could erase.