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DOORS TO HELL

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Chapter 1 - WHAT IS REAL

A man of age 82 took he's last breath and got taken by death But when he gets to the after life It's not hell or heaven .It was a hallway with doors and there down on the floor is a tiny white bunny but the man was not walking with wonder with thoughts on hes mind he was walking with anger he speaks : What the hell is this place I need more time not yet !! .Then he saw the bunny a small white one justing sitting there not moving not speaking just sitting there then ; BANG !! like a bat getting a ball he kicks the bunny it flies across the hallway bouncing off the floors then it stops falls fat then he hears a vioce : Why so angry you lived a long life 82 most people dont even make it passed 70 yet you pass that and lived 12 years more ?

He looks around yet he didn't find it but then he speaks back : long life ? How ? no there are people who live too 120 I worked so hard to stay alive didn't smoke didn't drink didn't do danger things yet i go out once then I dead God must hate me why kill me .

Then the small bunny gets up and with a vioce that cuts through the distance like it was sitting on hes shoulder its says : I hate non of my children .

His eye's jumped wide in realization this bunny he just kicked is no bunny it is GOD

fear fall on to him and he fall to he's knees and asked : Please god give me one more life please give me other change a long one this time please !!

Bunny : I'll give you other one I'll give you life all life a long life that will last as long as the univers pick a door any door and go in and give the gift of the longest life .

He shows he's middle finger to God and jumps in .

But once he was in the world

I could not move i could not see I could not hear no i can move i can see i can hear because I have not become one I have become many no ALL but one I m everywhere and no where I m everyone yet no one .

Yet all I can do is watch I have no control over those billions of life's that are now mine . All I can do is watch and all I do is watch him . He's a nobody no he is a loser all he does everyday is bag for help he lays at the street cursing everyone out but then turns to bagging he's weird . He walks into stores eats the food runs away goes to prison get out he sad , happy and depressed he moods is never the same way never .

He says his in hell he hates the world yet his suffering didn't compare to mine .I m the one the he the them the everyone but one I feel all know all yet I can't do anything about it there's no pain that compares to this . I see the thoughts of the mind of the people he judge the people whos suffering i feel yet he didn't know i have only been here a second. Yet i feel like i have allways been here . That i have allways lived those lives i have only lived a second of my universe long life yet i die every second and are born every second i want to feel what he feels get a chance to not feel the suffering of others and just be one yet with this low level of suffering he had he hanged himself off a bridge .

Yet he was just hanging there like a landton . Yet he's light didn't go out he was just hanging there for days on end .He was just looking at he's hands swinging the rope gave in and he fall down to the water yet . he didn't fall in he landed on top like a leaf blowed by the wind landing on the sea .

He just standed there he walked around then screamed in anger " WHY THE FUCK I M STILL ALIVE !!! " but then he looks down again he jumps back it's like he just realized his standing on water then that anger changed to happiness: HAAHAHAHA !!

He walks to the street still in shock but at the same time .He notice a car crush that was about too happen and just as the cars are about top hit he saves them holding it up in the air .

The people inside thank him

Yet he just stood there in the air not saying anything in deep thought like he once again come to a realization .The people in the car starts to worrey and they ask him to put them down .

Then he's face changes and so does he's mood and he asked

: Why should I save you when you could not save me why should i put you down when no one put me down when i was hanging why why why why why why ?

One of the people in the car replied : What's going on ?? Please put us down your scaring us please don't kill us we have families .

Him : and I don't ?? God may have not killed me but ill do him or the thing one and kill you .

Don't worry I'll make your death very very slow ill make you feel one second as 1000 years

Then he throws the car into the ground so force fully and so fast

It felt like 0.23 second and 230 years at the same time I felt the crushing pain slow and long at the same time .

Then he holds he's head and laughed and that's when I knew this was only the beginning .

I felt true fear my suffering was nothing too the suffer that's about to come .

He's no man he's a God of suffering a human with the power of a God a true Is terrifying embodiment of God's powers in the wrong hands .

He jumped down doing a small dance . Then he spoke again and says the lines :

That's was not enough I should bless more people just like god bless me with power so I'll bless you

My blessing is too the first people with in 400 KM from me from all angles from today on you can't die but your allergic to air .

He walked up to everyone asking if they need help knowing they can't move they can't speak they're suffer yet he just said the line of a true evil man : I can't hear you do you need help just say if you need help ?

Then as he sees them laying there no reply he goes : yea you clearly don't need help let me make it better for you

Then pulls a gass canister out of he's pocket . Then throw it on everybody and with a smile of joy on he's face .He lights them up Then he sits down pulled a stick and marshmallo out of he's pockets and just set there as the people are burning and choking on they're smoke yet .And i felt it all i felt all there suffering it is truly hell and he just set there using the fire too heat up hes marshmallo and telling them/me stories .

I didn't realise it but he stopped time outside the 400km I only notice because I could not feel from the other side yet . I was happy that a percentage of me was not suffering this was truly hell yet I wished to stay here .

Then he said something that shocked me

: I don't know why I don't know how yet I can feel someone watching me is that you God is that you watching me enjoying the show .

Then he let one of the humans stop burning and breath and they run to him baging him to stop this. This man was burn soo bad I could see and feel he's bones everything I felt he was suffering he's lungs on fire he's feet burned off he could not see yet he knew where he was but he didn't he's body was laying motionless and he's head was getting hold by human I didn't know what was real what was a realistic he made yet I didn't know WHAT IS REAL .The head could still speak and it says : God will make you pay and he replied or What is real replied

; God will make me pay who do you think is watching this if God didn't want me to have this or do this then why not kill me when he had the change why not end me why give me powers ??

Then he stabs the head with the stick and handed it over the fire and W.I.R said

: you must be thinking my skin burned away I can't feel pain.Nah ill make you feel pain intell your ashes and even then you won't turn to that I won't allow it .

Then he just throws the head into the fire and W.I.R said

: boring

Then he stopped stood there for what felt like years and it was like he realized something Then clicked he's fingers .

And walked back picked the stick up with the head and went back to just sitting there .

Then he speaked

: You know boredness is a bad thing I hate it I hate it so much I esared the concept of it of course not for you only for me so now you know I'll never stop if you think I'll take everything back and realize what I m doing is wrong I eared that too it didn't matter what love ,sadness , anything that could stop me from letting you suffer no longer exist in my head there is only hate .

Now then I can't just let you enjoy the suffering

As he said those words the fear i felt was too a ungodly level after years of sitting there he got up and it was terrifying the whole world all of me will now feel he's suffering and the hate of WHAT IS REAL and I won't know what is real .