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Chapter 2 - The general

The bell above the temple did not ring so much as pronounce itself. It rolled across the city like a verdict and settled in Serane's bones. She did not need to glance at the priests' faces to know what the sound meant; the way their knuckles whitened on the ledger, the sudden hush that flattened the chapel like a hand—those were answers. The gods had noticed missing beads.

Serane knelt on stone that had been worn smooth by ten thousand knees. Her palms lay flat, not in supplication but in readiness. Prayer for her was not a begging; it was a set of instructions. She learned its grammar as a child: name the debt, find the face, collect the payment, close the wound. The gods liked procedures. Men who kept to procedure made their lives easier.

"General," Father Mael called from the shadow of the altar, voice thin with age and something like fear. "They count eleven thousand short."

She felt the number like a cold wind. Eleven thousand was not a number you misplace; it was a massacre of accounting. "How can they be gone without a scream?" she asked.

He shrugged as if the shrug would somehow make the world less strange. "Someone stole what the gods mark as owed. We can only tally the absence."

Serane's hands curled into fists. She had never warmed to metaphors—she preferred the clean, hard edges of facts. The gods' rosary was a fact; priests kept inventories like salt. If beads were missing, someone had cut them out. Someone with a blade. Someone patient and horrible enough to hide a ledger from the gods.

She stood. The chapel's light made the priests' robes look like pale shells. Outside, the city went on breathing, ignorant or resigned. People will not notice a theft until the counting bell rings at the corners of their lives. Children go hungry in dull increments until a famine is named; lovers forget until a funeral writes the name back into town gossip. But eleven thousand? That made the crime a war.

"You will go," Father Mael said before she could volunteer. His eyes were kind in a way that could not lie. "You know how to get into places the Light forbids us to look."

Serane had been the Light's blade for fifteen years. She'd learned how to be a weapon for a cause without thinking herself holy. People called her favorite of the Light because it suited them to love someone who made their cruelty efficient. She loved the Light the way soldiers love discipline: it kept the world from toppling in a pleasingly theatrical way. She would do this job because the gods asked; she would do it because the thought of missing souls made her teeth ache.

Outside the temple, the city smelled of wet stone and bread. She had been born where fields met the river, where the first washing of the morning left the air clean and obstinate. Her mother taught her patience; her father taught her steel. When Serane looked in the mirror of her armor she saw both. People had told her she did not look like a leader—too sharp, too narrow—but men made allowances for the way she moved. Charisma is the last refuge of men who cannot fight; she needed none of it. She carried a blade in a way that made crowds hush, and that was enough.

The roster of who would answer the bell was long and ugly. Priests would advise, scribes would count, the Light would deputize soldiers to scour the countryside for signs of ritual disruption. Serane delegated like an efficient machine. She chose a handful of riders and a cart for sacred instruments, lest the thieves use religious paraphernalia for desecration. She wanted the ledger returned whole and intact and for the theft to have a face nailed like a wanted poster.

Before she left, she went to the lesser chapel, where a half-light always pooled like patience. She knelt, touching the stone with fingers that smelled faintly of iron. Her prayer was not words so much as a list: return the missing, punish the thief, spare the innocent. The gods, in return, expected obedience. That the world's moral arithmetic often required violence was a calculation the Light had never quite plainspoken.

A boy from the temple ran toward her, breath stuttering in a way that meant he had been running from bad news. "General!" he cried. "A watchman from the north gate—he heard something. A horn that was not a holy horn."

Serane's jaw tightened. A horn of thieves is one thing; a horn that pretends to be a ledger-bell and lies? That was something else. "Where?" she said.

"At the fortress," he panted. "At Lord Aras' castle. They say—" the boy stumbled over his own breath, "—they say he stood there as if daring the Light to be offended."

Every shadow from the chapel seemed to step back a little. Aras. The name tasted like smoke and perfume. He was trouble fashioned into a man: handsome, terrible, and blessed with a grin that made women write poems and men forget grudges. He had the indulgence of being so charismatic that the world forgave him a long list of crimes. That the thief might be Aras was either a coincidence or a provocation.

"You will go," she told the boy, and he fled like a sparrow set loose. She moved the way a woman moves who knows what must be done; there was no theater in her motions, only the efficiency of someone who had seen too many things end without ceremony.

Her riders lined up as if the world had been asked to prepare a modest funeral. The river, that indifferent mirror, glinted as they rode past. The fortress walls rose like a jaw; within them Aras had made a habit of rearranging stories and people like furniture. She thought of him not as a villain or hero but as a man who had learned how to use people's narratives as tools. That, she thought grudgingly, made him dangerous.

The gate was as Aras had been: casual arrogance leaned against the portcullis. He stood there like a joke turned human, sword in hand, surrounded by soldiers who loved him because he gave them the stories they wanted. When Serane rode into the courtyard with her escort, the clouds dropped a whisper of rain, as if the sky were taking notes.

Aras didn't look surprised to see her—he made a point of acting surprised at everything, which made people forgive him for crimes that would have hanged another. His hair was tied back; his smile was a weapon folded neatly away. The girls in the courtyard watched from behind their laughing; the soldiers tried to look bored. He greeted her with a bow that was more flirtation than courtesy.

"General," he said, voice warm and dangerous. "To what do I owe the honor? Did you miss me already?"

Her horse snorted. "There are eleven thousand missing beads on the Light's rosary," she said, direct as an arrow. "Do you know anything of this?"

Aras's grin did not crack but his eyes did: a flicker, small and quick. "Stories have a habit of becoming complicated," he said. "Sometimes characters switch scenes. Would you like tea before we adjudicate?"

She had been tempted, for a heartbeat that felt like a betrayal, to hear what he meant. She had always been human; men who smiled at trouble were charming, and charm was a kind of weapon in itself. But eleven thousand was not an invitation to flirt. It was a summons.

"You have things because you steal them," she said. "You take what people cannot afford to lose and save it as if that makes you noble."

"You're getting moral," Aras teased. "It's unbecoming on you."

She did not smile. "Return them."

He tilted his head. The way he looked at her made the air between them electric—neither of them naïve about the danger of looking too long. "Which souls?" he asked. "Do you want the ones with the most dutiful prayers or the ones who like poetry too much?"

"Stop the games," she said. "If the gods find their count short and their beads missing, they will come with teeth."

"They have teeth," Aras agreed. "I've met a few. They are not as polite as you might wish."

"How many?" she asked, because if one wanted to bargain with a thief, one needed to know whether one could afford to bargain at all.

He gestured beyond him, toward the lower chambers. "We found them. Shall we let them be counted as stolen publicly, or do you prefer to name them a rescue?"

Her hand instinctively went to the hilt at her waist. That was the only answer the world respected without negotiation. But there was another creature in the courtyard—one who never smiled for long. Father Mael's eyes were wide as bread; the boy from the temple had returned and was silent. People waited on the precipice of action.

"You stole them," she said. The words were flat but true. "You bring them to a prison, call them returns, and call it charity."

Aras's face softened as if he were rearranging the world to make a better fit. "We'll have that argument later," he said. "For tonight—truce?"

Serane felt the word like a blade against her ribs. Truce between a general of Light and a man who inconvenienced the gods? It sounded like lunacy. But war wears on people; treaties between hungry men are the only way to avoid slaughter until the slaughter becomes interesting.

"No truce," she said. "You return them. Or I take them back with force."

Aras's grin widened into mischief. "You always make me think of better meals," he said. "Very well. Let us see which of us enjoys being hungry more."

The horn sounded then—low, old, and full of grief. It wasn't the temple's bell. It was another voice entirely, and it made the skin on Serane's forearms rise. The priests' ledger shivered like wind through grass; the city seemed to hold its breath.

Something moved in the lower rooms of the fortress—shadows rearranging themselves like people waking. Aras's expression changed. For the first time she saw a man who had practiced jokes enough to forget how to look serious, looking very serious indeed.

He turned toward the stair that led to the hidden halls. "If they wake," he said, softer now, "we will have to tell the gods we are keeping a feast. They will not like being left out."

She should have forced a bargain then, or forced a fight, or seized the prisoners and marched them back to Light custody. Instead, curiosity—narrow, precise—slid into her like a command. The world had started a story without offering her the first line. That usually meant someone intended to change the ending.

"Show me," she said.

Aras inclined his head as if she had given him the instruction he had been waiting for. "You're braver than you look, Serane." His fingers closed around the sword at his side. "Or at least less sentimental."

She gave him neither praise nor insult. She followed him down the stairs, the stone going cold beneath her boots. The air below tasted of old iron and something like sleep. The hall that uncurled beneath the fortress was not made for godly eyes. It was carved for the hands of men who had practice hiding things from those who count and judge.

At the end of the hall, where darkness pooled like a secret, there stood a crystal coffin the size of a cradle. Inside a girl lay sleeping, hair like spilled ink, small breathing that made the crystal fog at the edges.

Serane looked at the girl and then at Aras. He watched her the way someone watches a map of future tragedies. "Who is she?" Serane asked.

Aras met her gaze, and for the first time in a long while his grin was stripped of performative charm. It was only a man's face, honest as a wound. "She is the beginning," he said. "She is a life someone borrowed and neglected."

Serane felt something unclench in her. The priest's ledger may have called them beads; to her they were people. If eleven thousand people had been taken, then a thousand households had been robbed of memory. A thousand mothers would wake and call their children names that would not answer.

"You will not take her prayers," she said, because as much as duty called her to collect, a new voice had entered her head—one that belonged to the child she had once sworn to protect as a young recruit. She felt the old promise flare, that dangerous, private thing that sometimes made a soldier do the wrong mercy.

Aras's eyes found hers. In them she saw a thousand stories—arson, kindnesses, vows kept and broken—and behind them, that rarest thing: someone who had been tired of polite deaths for a long time.

"You will choose," he said quietly. "You can take the chapel's ledger and make sure the gods know where the beads went. Or you can stand in a doorway and watch people walk back into the world, claiming the right to be messy and human."

The bell in the temple rang again, more insistent this time—a counting not yet complete. Serane's hand tightened on her sword.

"You will tell me one honest thing," she said. "When they wake, who will you make us be?"

Aras's voice was small and sharp, like a coin dropped on stone. "We will be whatever keeps the world from pretending nothing is at stake."

Serane considered the words, the girl, the horn, the ledger, and felt the ancient machinery of duty grind. She had sworn to the Light to collect its debts. But she had also sworn, years ago and private, to protect people whose stories were interrupted.

She thought of the faces on the chapel's walls and of the teacher whose laugh had been the last thing someone heard in another life. She thought of how thin the line is between an order and an excuse, between a blade that saves and one that kills.

"Then choose," she said at last, not to him but to herself. "Choose well."

Aras's hand closed around the crystal's rim and the room held its breath. Above, the priests counted with fingers that shook.

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