Currently in the middle of storyboards for each chapter. This volume is gonna be a bit longer than the previous one.
I'm also taking some advice some of you have given me.
1. Show more emotion with character interactions.
That's something I'm currently working on with a different fic I'm writing, so i think it'll be better in this fic.
2. Slow down, it's too fast paced.
The first volume was supposed to feel like that because everything took place in one week. But this volume will be more slow paced, but I'll warn you now. After the Raid of Genosha, a lot of kingdom building will happen, so it'll probably speed up a bit.
3. Better fights
This was something I took from it when I read the chapters. The fights were good, but I do think they could be better. I tend to rush through the fights. Like the Tomura Vs Selene fight. I felt like it could've been longer, and I wanted to show Tomura struggling a bit more.
You'll see in the third volume(Superhero Era) that he'll struggle a bit.
Anyways, thanks for your patience, I just wanted to update yall.
This will be deleted when the volume is finished. Which may be October, but it could be longer. I tend to delete chapters and restart a lot.
Thank you!