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Chapter 1 - Rush Hour Reckoning

# Rush Hour Reckoning

The sun hung over Accra like a vindictive god, turning the city into a concrete furnace at precisely 5:30 PM. Because apparently, even celestial bodies had a sense of timing when it came to making everyone's commute absolutely miserable.

Ivan wiped the sweat from his brow as he sat in his decade-old Honda Civic, which had seen better days—specifically, the day it rolled off the assembly line. The air conditioning had given up the ghost somewhere around 2019, leaving him to rely on the ancient art of rolling down windows. Not that it helped much when you were trapped in a metallic sardine can surrounded by thousands of other metallic sardine cans, all belching exhaust into the already suffocating air.

The traffic on the Accra-Tema Motorway stretched endlessly ahead, a river of brake lights and frustrated honking that would make Dante weep. Cars, tro-tros, motorcycles, and the occasional donkey cart—because why not add medieval transportation to this modern nightmare—all moved at the breakneck speed of continental drift.

To Ivan's left, a woman in an SUV that cost more than most people's annual salary was gesticulating wildly at her phone, probably explaining to someone why she'd be late. Again. Her vehicle was pristine, air-conditioned, and equipped with enough technology to launch a small satellite. The irony wasn't lost on Ivan that she was stuck in the same traffic as everyone else, democracy in its most beautiful and frustrating form.

A motorcycle weaved between the cars with the kind of reckless confidence that suggested its rider had made peace with mortality. The bike's engine roared like an angry wasp, and Ivan couldn't help but admire the audacity. Here was someone who had looked at traffic laws and decided they were more like suggestions—gentle recommendations from people who clearly didn't understand the urgency of getting somewhere five minutes faster.

The tro-tro beside him was packed tighter than a can of sardines, passengers hanging out of windows and doorways with the casual acceptance of people who had long ago given up on personal space. The conductor, a wiry man with the lung capacity of an opera singer, bellowed destinations with religious fervor: "Circle! Circle! Madina! Madina!" As if chanting these place names would somehow part the traffic like the Red Sea.

Ivan checked his watch—a gift from his ex-girlfriend who had possessed the remarkable ability to be punctual and insufferable simultaneously. 5:45 PM. He was supposed to meet his friend at 6:30, which, given the current pace of traffic, meant he'd arrive sometime around the next ice age.

A horn blared behind him, sharp and accusatory. Ivan glanced in his rearview mirror to see a taxi driver whose patience had apparently evaporated along with his will to live. The man's face was a masterpiece of exasperation, the kind of expression that suggested he was reconsidering every life choice that had led him to this moment. Ivan raised his hand in a gesture that was half-apology, half-resignation. We're all suffering here, buddy.

The heat was becoming unbearable. Ivan's shirt clung to his back like a desperate lover, and he could feel sweat pooling in places that were definitely not mentioned in polite company. Around him, other drivers fanned themselves with newspapers, documents, or whatever flat object they could find. One enterprising woman had fashioned a fan from what appeared to be a court summons—at least it was finally serving a useful purpose.

A street hawker appeared at his window, as if summoned by the sheer force of consumer desperation. She carried a tray of bottled water that glistened like liquid diamonds in the oppressive heat. "Water! Pure water!" she called out, her voice cutting through the cacophony of engines and horns. Ivan dug into his pocket, grateful for small mercies in this automotive purgatory.

As he handed over his coins, the woman smiled—a genuine expression that seemed almost surreal in this context of universal frustration. It was remarkable how human kindness could flourish even in the most hostile environments, like a flower growing through concrete. Though in this case, it was more like kindness growing through exhaust fumes and collective rage.

The traffic inched forward another few meters, and Ivan felt a brief surge of optimism. Maybe, just maybe, he'd make it to his destination before the heat death of the universe. But then, as if the traffic gods had sensed his hope and decided to crush it for sport, everything ground to a complete halt.

Ahead, he could see the source of the latest delay: a massive truck had broken down in the middle lane, because apparently even vehicles had given up on this commute. Its driver stood beside it, phone pressed to his ear, probably explaining to his boss why delivering that load of concrete blocks was going to take until next Thursday.

The man in the pickup truck to Ivan's right had his head back, eyes closed, achieving a zen-like state that Ivan both envied and found mildly concerning. Was this enlightenment or a minor nervous breakdown? At this point, the distinction seemed irrelevant.

A group of children had gathered on the roadside, pointing and laughing at the trapped drivers. Their amusement was both infectious and infuriating—the pure joy of youth observing the absurdity of adult life from the safety of the sidewalk. Ivan wanted to be annoyed, but found himself smiling instead. At least someone was finding entertainment in this disaster.

The radio crackled to life, and a traffic reporter's voice filled the car with updates that were about as useful as a chocolate teapot. "Heavy traffic on the motorway," the voice announced cheerfully, as if this were breaking news rather than the daily reality of urban existence. Ivan switched it off. Some truths didn't need to be spoken aloud.

A businessman in the lane beside him was frantically typing on his laptop, balanced precariously on his steering wheel. The modern professional, adapting to circumstances with the determination of a survivor. Though Ivan couldn't help but wonder what kind of email was so urgent it couldn't wait until the man wasn't piloting a potentially lethal machine through traffic.

The sun was beginning its descent, painting the sky in shades of orange and pink that would have been beautiful if viewed from anywhere other than the inside of a sweltering car in stationary traffic. Nature's daily reminder that beauty and suffering often occupied the same space, like unwelcome roommates who couldn't agree on the thermostat.

Ivan's phone buzzed with a text from his friend: "Where are you?" The question struck him as almost philosophical. Where was he, really? Physically, somewhere between point A and point B. Spiritually, in a circle of automotive hell that Dante had forgotten to include in his famous work.

He typed back: "Stuck in traffic. Welcome to Accra." Because what else was there to say?

The motorcycle from earlier zipped past again, now going in the opposite direction. Either the rider had completed his journey with supernatural speed, or he'd decided to abandon his destination entirely and was now fleeing the scene. Both options seemed equally reasonable.

A woman in a nearby car was applying makeup with the concentration of a surgeon, using her rearview mirror as her operating theater. Ivan had to admire her multitasking skills—if you were going to be trapped in traffic, you might as well emerge looking fabulous. Though he did wonder about the logic of beautifying oneself in a metal box filled with exhaust fumes and despair.

The temperature gauge on his dashboard was creeping upward, and Ivan felt a familiar knot of anxiety in his stomach. His car had a tendency to overheat in traffic, as if it shared his frustration with the situation and expressed it through mechanical rebellion. He said a small prayer to whatever deity governed automotive reliability.

Finally, miraculously, the traffic began to move. Not quickly—this wasn't a miracle of biblical proportions—but with enough momentum to suggest that maybe, possibly, eventually, he might reach his destination before the next calendar year. Ivan pressed the accelerator gently, afraid that too much enthusiasm might jinx this fragile progress.

The broken-down truck was being pushed to the roadside by a small army of good Samaritans who had emerged from the traffic like helpful spirits. It was one of those moments that restored your faith in humanity—people interrupting their own journeys to help a stranger, united in the common cause of getting everyone moving again.

As Ivan's car picked up speed, he felt a surge of freedom that was probably disproportionate to moving at 20 kilometers per hour, but context was everything. After thirty minutes of near-complete stillness, this felt like flying.

The wind through his windows carried the familiar scents of Accra: cooking food, car exhaust, and that indefinable smell of a city that never quite sleeps. It wasn't pleasant, exactly, but it was home. This chaotic, frustrating, beautiful mess of a city that tested your patience daily and somehow made you love it anyway.

Ivan was reaching for his water bottle when he saw the truck running the red light. Time seemed to slow, as it supposedly does in moments of crisis, though Ivan found this temporal stretching more inconvenient than helpful. He had just enough time to think that this was a particularly absurd way to end a particularly ordinary day, and to wonder if anyone would remember to cancel his dinner plans.

The impact came with a sound like thunder, if thunder were made of crushing metal and shattering glass. Ivan's last coherent thought was that dying in traffic was almost too perfect a metaphor for life in Accra—you spent so much time trying to get somewhere that you forgot to pay attention to where you actually were.

The city continued its evening rush around the wreckage, as cities do. Traffic rerouted, ambulances arrived, and within hours, the intersection would be clear again, ready for tomorrow's symphony of horns and exhaust fumes. Because in Accra, as in life, the show must go on, even when the performers don't make it to the final act.

After all, rush hour waits for no one—not even the dead.