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Chapter 3 - Eyes on S

PAGE 1 – OPENING: NATIONAL YOUTH CAMP INVITATION

Panel 1:

Early morning. Riku opens his locker at school and finds a sealed envelope with a gold logo:

> JAPAN YOUTH DEVELOPMENT CAMP

Panel 2:

Letter content (voiceover style):

> "Congratulations. You've been selected for a one-week trial at the National Youth Basketball Camp.

Location: Shizuoka Sports Arena.

Attendance: Optional. Evaluation: Elite."

Panel 3:

Riku stares at it, stunned.

Riku (thinking):

> "This is where the real monsters show up."

Panel 4:

A whisper from the system glows faintly at the corner of his vision.

> High-Rank Talent Possibility Detected within upcoming location.

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PAGE 2 – ARRIVAL AT THE YOUTH CAMP

Panel 1:

The giant sports complex looms. Banners hang:

> "Japan Youth Development Camp – Invite-Only."

Panel 2:

Boys from all over the country warm up on multiple courts — some tall, some muscular, some lightning quick.

Panel 3:

Riku walks in wearing a plain hoodie and beat-up sneakers, a duffel bag over his shoulder.

> System Ping:

Scanning...

Multiple A-tier talents detected.

Riku (thinking):

> "No cooldown active. I can still copy."

"But I won't waste my slot on anything less than S."

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PAGE 3 – FIRST PRACTICE MATCHES

Panel 1:

Coach splits the court into several 5v5 matchups. Riku is placed on the "unranked" team with players nobody knows.

Panel 2:

Opposing team captain (cocky):

> "Yo, we're against the no-name squad. Easy buckets."

Panel 3:

Whistle blows. First play. Riku steals the ball instantly, using "Defensive Instinct – A".

Panel 4:

Fast break. He breaks ankles with "Street Handle King – A" and finishes with a smooth layup.

Panel 5:

Coaches watching raise their eyebrows.

Coach 1 (whispering):

> "That kid… who is he?"

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PAGE 4 – RUMORS OF A PRODIGY

Panel 1:

Later, players sit in the bleachers. Riku hears whispers.

Player 1 (whispering):

> "Hey, did you hear about the 'One-Shot Prodigy'?"

Player 2:

> "You mean Takashi Rindo? The kid who scored 81 points in a middle school game?"

Panel 2:

Riku's system pings HARD.

> High-Rank Talent Detected Nearby

Target: Takashi Rindo – Talent Grade: UNKNOWN

Panel 3:

Riku jolts a little, eyes wide.

Riku (thinking):

> "...That might be it. The first S."

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PAGE 5 – ENTER: TAKASHI RINDO

Panel 1:

Door opens. A lean but focused kid with sharp eyes enters the gym in silence. Everyone turns. No smile. No flash. Pure calm.

Panel 2:

He walks past the others straight to the shooting machine and starts hitting flawless jumpers.

Panel 3:

System UI zooms in with a sharp beep.

> Talent Identified:

"Zone Efficiency – S"

Cooldown if copied: 24h

Warning: No other copying allowed during cooldown.

Panel 4:

Riku's breathing grows heavier.

Riku (thinking):

> "If I take it… I'll be locked out. But this is a real S-tier."

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PAGE 6 – THE DECISION

Panel 1:

Riku closes his eyes.

Riku (thinking):

> "No hesitation. I said I'd chase greatness."

"Let's start here."

Panel 2:

He mentally presses [COPY].

> ✅ Talent Acquired: "Zone Efficiency – S"

⏳ System Cooldown: 24 hours – Copy Locked

Panel 3:

Immediately, his mind clears. The court feels "slower." Everything — angles, passes, shots — flows like water.

Panel 4:

Riku walks back to the court. Calm, steady… changed.

Coach:

> "You're up, Riku."

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PAGE 7 – ZONE ACTIVATION

Panel 1:

Riku brings the ball up.

Panel 2:

Everything sharpens. Player positions. Defensive gaps. Passing lanes.

He's in the zone.

Panel 3:

He drives. A perfect behind-the-back bounce pass. Bucket.

Panel 4:

Three plays later — another assist. Then a midrange jumper.

He looks untouchable.

Panel 5:

Takashi Rindo, watching silently from the sideline, squints.

Takashi (thinking):

> "...Someone else sees the court like me?"

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PAGE 8 – THE COACHES WHISPER

Panel 1:

Head Coach turns to Assistant.

Head Coach:

> "That Takeda kid… what school did he say he came from?"

Assistant:

> "He didn't. No records on him before this year."

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PAGE 9 – CLOSING TEASER

Panel 1:

Riku, now sweaty and smiling, walks off the court as the buzzer sounds.

Panel 2:

System glows faintly again.

> System Cooldown Remaining: 23h 44m

Panel 3:

Riku (smirking):

> "This is only the beginning."

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✅ End of Chapter 3

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