This chapter marks a narrative shift—we step into Nicolas's point of view for the first time, and it's a game-changer. His voice is sharp, unapologetic, and laced with the cold logic of a man who's lived too long in the shadows of power.
He reflects on how Elena Abelli first came onto his radar—not as a woman, but as a name. A name that annoyed him, thanks to his cousins' constant chatter. He never cared to meet her, especially after her father deemed her "unfit for marriage." He signed the contract to marry her sister without a second thought.
But then he saw her. At church. And everything changed.
Nicolas's internal monologue is raw and visceral. He's visibly shaken by Elena's beauty, her presence, and the way she carries herself like royalty. He's annoyed by how much she affects him—how her soft expression and designer heels get under his skin. He tells himself she's shallow, spoiled, and stuck-up. But the truth is, she's unforgettable.
We also get a glimpse of Nicolas's ruthlessness. He's not just a Made Man—he's a boss. He thinks in terms of alliances, profits, and bullets. His upcoming marriage is a business deal, not a love story. But Elena? She's a complication he didn't plan for—and complications in his world are dangerous.
By the end of the chapter, Nicolas admits something he doesn't want to: Elena Abelli is a problem. One he can't ignore. One he doesn't want to want. And yet, he does.
Want to keep going with Chapter 11? Or maybe explore how this shift in perspective changes the stakes for both of them? I've got more mafia secrets and slow-burn chaos ready to unravel. 🔥📚