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Chapter 10 - Chapter 10: The Echo That Would Not Die.

The door dissolved without a sound.

No lock. No trigger. No runes.

It simply ceased to be, as though the chamber beyond had forgotten how to be separate from the world outside.

Kier stepped through.

The air shifted instantly—warm, thick, dense with unspoken grief. It wasn't just heat that pressed against his skin.

It was recognition.

This part of the ruin didn't need guardians. It didn't need traps.

It had memory.

And memory was the cruelest gatekeeper of all.

The path curved inward like a spiral womb. Walls of jagged white roots pulsed faintly with glyph-light. From time to time, soft voices leaked from the stone — fragmented phrases, sobs, moments of madness caught between death and remembrance.

"Do you know what you are?" the Guardian hissed in his mind.

Kier didn't answer.

He gripped the obsidian tooth tightly. Its surface had gone cold, despite the heat. Almost… reluctant.

"This place remembers those who tried to forget. The deeper you go, the more likely it is to remember you."

Still, he walked.

He had to.

Not for power. Not for revenge.

Not even for the Spiral Seals.

He needed to know what had been buried here — what he had buried, and why it refused to stay forgotten.

Then, ahead, the corridor widened.

A vast chamber unfolded — circular, domed, and ringed with towering monoliths etched in spirals. Each stood like a silent mourner around a raised platform at the center.

Upon the platform…

A figure.

Human.

Male.

Kneeling. Hands folded, as though in prayer.

He wore no armor. No robes. Just layered cloth, worn and faded, like someone who had walked too far without knowing where they began.

And when Kier stepped into the room, the man raised his head.

Kier froze.

The face was his.

A younger version. Paler. Eyes dimmer. No glyph-scar on the neck. No soul-thread burns.

Just him, before the ruin.

Before the unraveling.

"Ah," the echo said softly. "So you made it this far."

Kier's grip tightened.

"What is this trick?"

"No trick," the echo smiled. "Just… the part of you that never got up after the fire."

"I buried that."

"No," the echo stood, rising slow, graceful. "You left it behind. And this place? It never forgets the left behind."

Kier circled slowly, analyzing. It wasn't a true doppelgänger. The aura was fractured, like a memory bleeding at the seams. But the structure was strong — too strong to be a simple echo.

"You're not a construct," Kier said.

"No."

"You're not me."

"I was. The part that cried for days after they burned them. The part that begged to stop digging. The part that didn't want to become this."

"And yet here we are."

"Because you killed me."

Kier lunged.

Fast. Clean. The tooth sliced through the air like a thought too sharp to suppress.

But the echo moved with the same precision.

It caught the blade with bare fingers.

"You're faster now," the echo whispered. "But not stronger."

They collided.

Obsidian clashed with memory. Glyphs flared and snapped. The chamber trembled.

The echo slammed a palm into Kier's chest — and time faltered.

Kier was thrown back. Not physically. Not exactly.

He saw—

—a young girl laughing beside him, showing him her first glyph—

—a mentor coughing blood as he shoved a spiral tablet into Kier's hands—

—fire. So much fire. Then silence. Then nothing.

Kier staggered.

"You don't get to forget them," the echo said.

"I already did."

"No," the echo smiled sadly. "You replaced them. With power. With purpose. With silence."

Kier stood, rage boiling.

"Then let silence speak."

He raised the tooth again.

This time, he didn't slash.

He cut through the glyph beneath the echo's feet.

The memory flared.

And for a moment—the echo screamed.

Not in pain.

But in grief.

The scream wasn't a sound. It was a name.

Kier knew it.

Not from his mind.

From his bones.

It was the name of the first person he buried in the ruin. The name he sacrificed to gain entrance to the Spiral.

And it broke something in him.

He didn't weep.

He didn't hesitate.

He plunged the tooth into the echo's chest and whispered the name aloud.

The chamber went still.

The echo blinked once.

"You remembered her…"

Then it smiled.

And turned to ash.

Kier stood in the silence.

He didn't move.

Didn't speak.

But in the air behind him, a new spiral began to form.

It glowed softly.

Then burned.

And within it: a single glyph.

Not of power.

Not of memory.

Of regret.

Far away, in a chamber of bone mirrors, the Nine Echo Disciples stirred.

"He claimed his regret," one whispered.

"Then he is ready to ascend."

"Or collapse."

"Both," said the first.

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