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Chapter 4 - Echoes and Agreements

The drive away from the house was silent, but it wasn't peaceful. The tires hummed against the road, a steady rhythm that couldn't drown out the noise inside their heads. No one spoke. Not Mia, not Daniel, not Leah. They just stared ahead, eyes fixed on the winding road as the house faded behind them—faded, but not forgotten. It sat like a weight on their backs, that place. A childhood home that had become a graveyard of memories. A trap. A secret buried too deep for too long. And now? Now it was open. But even with the road stretching out in front of them, their minds stayed back there—where the walls whispered and a brother once waited in the shadows. Inside each of them, thoughts crashed like thunder. Grief. Guilt. Relief. Love. None of it made sense yet. Maybe it never would. But they were driving forward. And for now, that was enough. Daniel's knuckles were bone-white on the steering wheel, his grip so tight it looked like he might snap it in two. His jaw was locked, muscles twitching under the strain, his eyes fixed on the road with the kind of intensity that said he couldn't afford to blink—like if he looked away for even a second, the past might catch up to them. Leah sat in the passenger seat, folded in on herself, arms wrapped around her legs like she was trying to disappear. She stared out the window, not really seeing anything. Every few moments, her lips moved—quiet, small movements like she was whispering to someone who wasn't there. But no sound came out. Just a string of silent confessions. To the dark. To herself. To Elliot. In the back seat, Mia sat perfectly still, the old music box resting quietly on her lap. It no longer played its haunting tune—its key unwound, its gears still. But in her head, she could still hear it. A soft, echoing hum like a lullaby turned wrong. "One for sorrow… Two for debt…" The rhyme looped in her mind, over and over, as if the box had planted it somewhere deeper than memory. She reached into her jacket pocket and pulled out the crumpled note—the one she had found in their father's study. The paper felt rough against her fingers, fragile at the edges. She unfolded it slowly and read it again, even though she already knew the words. Each line sank heavier now. No longer just ink. Now a confession. A curse. A warning. "I was never meant to survive the debt. If you are home... the collector has come for me."vMia stared at the words, her fingers trembling just slightly as she held the note. It wasn't just a warning. It never had been. It was a confession—quiet, final. The truth he hadn't been brave enough to say aloud. Not to them. Not to anyone. A truth buried under years of silence, old smiles, and locked doors. Their father had known what he'd done. He'd lived with it. And he'd died with it. But not before trying—however imperfectly—to make it right. Mia folded the note slowly, pressing it against her chest as the car carried them farther from the house… And deeper into everything that had been left behind. Back in her apartment that night, Mia didn't bother with the lights. She sat on the floor of her bedroom, legs crossed, knees aching on the hardwood. The crumpled note lay spread out in front of her, its creases catching the faint orange glow from the streetlight outside. The music box sat quietly beside it, lid closed, still. She hadn't touched it since the drive. But its silence felt louder here, in this room where everything else was still. The blinds cast long, broken shadows across the walls—pale orange stripes that looked too much like prison bars. She stared through them, into nothing. Her chest felt tight. Not the kind of tight that made you cry.vThe kind that made you feel. Like a dam holding back too much water. Too many memories. Too many things she hadn't known she lost. Too many things she wasn't sure she had the right to grieve. The house had let them go. Elliot had forgiven them. The deal was broken. But Mia still felt it—that hollow echo inside her chest. Like something had been left behind. Something more than the creaking floors and dusty rooms. When she blinked, she saw his face again—Elliot's soft smile, his voice full of quiet understanding. The way his form had unraveled into nothing, like mist caught in morning light. Like he was finally free.vBut that wasn't what kept her awake. What haunted her wasn't the goodbye. It was what stood behind him in the attic. Still. Silent.The Collector. CNo face.No voice.VNo soul. Just presence. A weight in the air. A shadow that didn't belong to anything human. It hadn't fought. Hadn't screamed. It had simply watched. And now… Mia couldn't stop feeling like maybe it still was. A presence that hadn't followed them… Yet hadn't vanished either. It was like smoke after a fire—nothing you could hold, nothing solid, but still thick enough to breathe in. And then, as she sat motionless in the half-dark, another line from her father's letter surfaced: "He gave me time. But time isn't payment." Mia swallowed hard. It had never been about survival. It had been about delay. She pushed herself up from the floor, every joint stiff, her whole body feeling older than it was. At her desk, she opened her laptop. The screen lit the room in a soft, ghostly blue. She typed slowly, her fingers barely grazing the keys: "Collector folklore." The search bar pulsed, then exploded with results—thousands of them. Most were nonsense. Urban legends, half-baked ghost stories, grainy YouTube videos of cold basements and flickering lights. She scrolled past the obvious fakes. Past the horror podcasts and cheap clickbait. Then she began to notice it. Patterns. Different cultures. Different words. But one idea linked them all. A figure that waits. A deal that demands balance. A debt paid in flesh, memory, or time. Always time. The Collector had many names. But always the same ending. It comes to collect what was borrowed. And it never forgets. A presence that hadn't followed them… Yet hadn't vanished either. It lingered in the back of her thoughts, like a shadow at the edge of a dream. Not near, but not gone. Watching. And then her father's words came back, clearer now in the stillness of her apartment— "He gave me time. But time isn't payment." Mia rose from the floor slowly, her body stiff like she'd aged in a matter of hours. Every joint ached, not from movement, but from weight. The weight of remembering. Of knowing. She crossed to her desk and opened her laptop. The screen glowed to life, the cursor blinking like it was waiting for her. She typed one word: "Collector folklore." The results came in a rush—thousands of pages. Stories. Myths. Warnings. Some were strange and unbelievable. Others felt too familiar. She scrolled through articles written by amateur occultists, forums filled with panicked posts, grainy blogs cataloging entities that traded protection for silence. Every region had its version. Every culture gave it a name. But the shape was always the same— A being that offered something in exchange for forgetting. For peace. But the debt always came due. And it never accepted money. Thousands of results exploded onto the screen. Mia leaned in, her eyes scanning quickly. Most of it was nonsense—overly dramatic blogs, clickbait articles with titles like "10 Demons You Should Never Speak To" and forums full of people claiming their closets whispered at night. But she kept going. Amateur demonologists. Ghost hunters with shaky camera footage. Obscure religious sites full of warnings and cryptic scripture. Different places. Different names. Different gods, demons, spirits. But beneath all the noise, something pulsed. A thread that tied them all together. Debts. Memories. Exchange. Not always in that order. Not always with the same rules. But always a trade. Something taken. Something owed. Something coming back to collect. And it always found a way.The Collector wasn't a ghost. Wasn't a demon. It was older than that. Older than names. Older than belief. An ancient force, carved out of the universe's need for balance. It didn't crave souls. It craved equity. Something owed had to be paid. Always. And if the deal was broken—if the terms were bent or buried—it didn't just return. It multiplied. The debt spread like a sickness. From father to child. From memory to memory. Generation after generation. Until someone remembered. Until someone chose. Mia stared at the screen for a long moment. Then she shut the laptop. Leaned back in her chair. Let the silence settle over her like dust. She had chosen. That's what freed Elliot. Not the apology. Not the sacrifice. The choice. And now… she wondered what else might begin to heal.If remembering could free one ghost— Could it free others, too? It was like smoke after a fire— nothing to hold, nothing to see, but still thick enough to breathe in. It clung to her skin, sat heavy in her chest. Mia didn't move. The room was still, but her thoughts weren't. They curled and twisted around one sentence, pulling it from the back of her mind like a thread unraveling a sweater— "He gave me time. But time isn't payment." Her father's voice, etched into ink. She swallowed hard. It had never been about survival. Not for him. Not for Elliot. Not for any of them. It had always been about delay— buying time, stalling the inevitable. He hadn't escaped the Collector. He'd only hit pause. And now the clock had run out.She pushed herself up from the floor, limbs aching with a weight that wasn't just physical. Every joint felt stiff, like she'd been carrying the past on her back for years without knowing it. She moved to her desk, sat down slowly, and opened her laptop. The screen flared to life, casting a soft, ghostly blue across her face, washing the room in quiet light. Her fingers hovered above the keyboard. Then, carefully, deliberately, she typed: "Collector folklore." The cursor blinked once. Then the page flooded— a surge of links, articles, blogs, forums, videos. Thousands of results. She scrolled. Most were noise. Conspiracy threads. Bad horror fiction. Rambling posts on paranormal forums. Talk of shadow men, reapers, devils in disguise. Nonsense. But buried beneath it all— something kept repeating. A pattern. A rhythm. A trade. A cost. A balance. She leaned closer. The deeper she dug, the colder the air around her felt. Urban legends. Half-baked ghost stories. Grainy YouTube videos of cold basements and flickering lights, narrated by shaky voices and shaky hands. Mia scrolled past all of it. Past the horror podcasts with dramatic music. Past the cheap clickbait that promised "REAL FOOTAGE OF THE GRIM REAPER". She wasn't looking for scares. She was looking for truth. And then— she saw it. Not in one post, but in the spaces between them. Patterns. Different countries. Different names. Different symbols scratched into old walls or whispered across late-night radio shows. But the shape was always the same. A figure that waits. A deal that demands balance. A debt that comes due. Sometimes it took memory. Sometimes flesh. Sometimes years. But most often time. Borrowed time. And when the clock ran out, it came. To collect what was promised.t To restore the weight of what had been lost. The Collector. It had many names. But always the same ending. it comes to collect what was borrowed. And it never forgets. Debts. Memories. Exchange. The words looped through Mia's mind like a quiet chant, threading themselves through the silence of her apartment, soft but unshakable. The Collector wasn't a myth. It was something older. Older than religion. Older than firelight stories told to scare children. It didn't haunt. Didn't chase. Didn't scream. It waited. Because it didn't steal souls— it restored balance. And balance, by design, is never kind. It doesn't care who you are. It doesn't care if the debt was yours to begin with. If something was borrowed, it must be returned. Something owed had to be paid. Always. And if the terms were broken— if the promise was tucked away under guilt or grief or a desperate hope that maybe, just maybe, it wouldn't matter anymore— It didn't forgive. It didn't forget. It multiplied. Quiet as rot in the floorboards. Spreading. Deepening. Until someone remembered. Until someone chose. And now Mia had. Spreading from generation to generation. Quiet. Slow. Inevitable. Like a story passed down with no words. Like a wound that never scabbed over. Until someone remembered. Until someone chose. Mia had chosen. She'd remembered. Pulled Elliot out of the dark with nothing more than a name and the weight of love that had never truly left. She had seen him. Spoken his name. Loved him like he'd never been erased. And that— that was what set him free. That was what should've ended it. She closed the laptop gently, the screen folding into silence. Leaned back in the chair. The hum of the night returned, soft and steady—like the world exhaling again. Outside, a car passed. A dog barked two streets away. Normal sounds. Safe sounds. But Mia didn't move. Because deep in her chest. beneath the quiet, a truth remained: The Collector never forgets. She should've felt relief. She should've felt peace. But instead, she sat still, eyes fixed on the wall across from her bed like it might move. Wide awake. No tears left to cry. No fear left to name. Just that low, constant hum in her chest— the kind that comes after the storm, when nothing feels safe even though everything looks still. If it was really over… why couldn't she sleep? The next morning, Mia drove out before the sun had fully risen. The air was cool and damp, thick with morning fog. She didn't leave a note. Didn't call Daniel or Leah. They were trying to forget again. Trying to go back to normal, to bury what had surfaced. And maybe they had that right. Maybe forgetting was a kind of mercy. But Mia couldn't. Not after what she'd seen. Not after what she'd remembered. So she went alone— to the place where silence was expected, where the dead didn't need forgiveness, and the living could whisper the truth out loud. The cemetery. She followed the winding path up the hill, her shoes crunching softly over gravel and dry leaves. The morning mist clung to the ground, curling around her ankles like smoke. At the top, beneath a crooked old tree that leaned like it had grown tired of holding itself up, she found it— the grave with no name. Just a symbol. Etched deep into the stone. The same one from the attic. The same one that had glowed under their feet. It hadn't faded. Not even with time. Mia knelt beside it. The air was colder here, heavier somehow. Like the ground still remembered the weight of what had been taken. She placed her hand gently over the carved mark, her fingers tracing the grooves. "I remember you," she whispered. Her voice didn't echo. It didn't need to. It sank into the earth. "I will always remember you." The wind stirred through the branches above, rustling the leaves like an answer. And for just a second, Mia thought she heard it— the faintest sound of a music box, carrying a lullaby into the morning light.There was no wind. No voice. No sign. The world didn't shift. The sky didn't open. The earth didn't tremble. But something in the silence felt softer. Not like an answer-more like an understanding. Mia stayed where she was, the cold stone beneath her hand, the weight of it all finally catching up to her. She didn't speak again. Didn't move. She just sat there, knees drawn up, eyes unfocused, heart wide open. Letting herself feel everything. The guilt that had crept in slowly, like a shadow at her back. The sadness—sharp, but dull at the edges now. A grief that wasn't just for Elliot, but for what they lost when they forgot him. And the helplessness. That terrible ache of not being able to go back. Not being able to change it. She didn't fight it. Didn't shove it down. Didn't run. She let it settle. All of it. Like dust on old furniture. Like breath in still air. Like a memory that wasn't going anywhere. But just as she stood—brushing the dirt from her jeans, her palm still warm from the stone— she caught movement. A flicker. At the edge of the tree line. Mia turned. And there it was. Tall. Cloaked in black. Face hidden behind a veil of shadow. Still. Silent. Present. Her breath caught. The Collector. Watching. Always watching. But it didn't move. Didn't reach for her. Didn't speak. It just stood there. Like it always had. Like it always would. Because balance may be restored— but the ledger is never empty. Mia's heartbeat thudded in her ears. But she didn't run. She didn't hide. She simply looked back. And nodded once. Not in surrender. Not in fear. In understanding. Because now she knew: Some debts never disappear. They're just… remembered. And remembering? That was its own kind of payment. "You got what you came for," Mia said quietly, the windless air carrying her words like a promise more than a question. "He forgave us. The deal is broken." The figure didn't move. Didn't speak. Didn't vanish. Just stood there. Mia took a step forward, the grass crunching beneath her shoe. Her voice was steadier now, though her heart wasn't. "You're still here. Why?" No answer. Just that thick, pressing silence again— but this time it didn't feel cruel. It felt like presence. And then— a blink. The space where it had stood was empty. Like it had never been there at all. Like it had never needed to be. Over the next few days, things returned to something like normal. Daniel went back to work. He didn't talk about the house, not even once. But he called Mia more often than he used to. Leah stopped wearing her headphones at night. She even laughed once at something dumb on TV, and Mia saw a flicker of peace behind her eyes. Mia cleaned her apartment. She ate real food again. Sat in the sun. But the music box stayed on her shelf. And the photo—the one with four children now—hung above her bed. No one else could see the fourth face. Only her. Only them. And that was enough. Because some stories don't need to be told to everyone. Just remembered. Daniel went back to work. He stopped answering Mia's texts after the second day. Not even a thumbs-up or a "busy, call later." Just silence. She didn't push. She figured he was trying to bury it, the way he always did—with distraction and noise. Leah, though, sent her a single message late one night. Just one line, but it stayed with Mia longer than it should have: "I dreamed about the attic again. The circle was still glowing. Are we really free?" Mia stared at the screen for a long time. She started typing, stopped, started again. Then finally just set the phone down. Because she didn't know how to answer. Not truthfully. Not gently. Not without admitting the part that kept her up too— The part where she wasn't sure either. Instead, Mia threw herself into the one thing that gave her even the illusion of control—research. She dug deep. Old land records. Probate documents. News clippings no one had digitized. Scribbled notes in library margins from people long forgotten. Anything that might tell her what her father never had. She even found hospital archives. Obscure mentions of her mother's admission after Elliot's "disappearance." It hadn't been in the obituary, or the funeral details. No one had ever talked about it. Not once. But there it was. A single, line-item entry. Psychiatric facility. Six months. No diagnosis. No notes. Just a date in. And a date out. The file was sealed. Restricted access. Family only. Court order needed. Mia stared at the login screen for a long time. She thought about lawyers. About forged documents. About whether she was really ready to know the things no one wanted her to find. But something in her gut told her this wasn't over. Not yet.That night, Mia stood in the narrow hallway of her apartment, facing the mirror. The light above her flickered—just once—but enough to cast everything in strange shadows. Her own reflection stared back, tired eyes, hollowed cheeks, the weight of everything still clinging to her. But it wasn't her reflection that caught her attention. Just behind her, in the glass— A silhouette. Still. Tall. Watching. She didn't breathe. Didn't blink. She turned quickly, heart hammering. The hallway was empty. Silence stretched around her. She turned back to the mirror. Normal. Just her. No silhouette. No shadow. But the light above her flickered again. Just once. But her pulse didn't settle. Even after the mirror showed nothing. Even after she told herself it was stress. A trick of the light. A lingering shadow in her mind. Still, sleep didn't come easy. And when it did, it was thin and restless, full of echoes she couldn't explain. Three days later, the letter arrived. It was slipped beneath her door—she hadn't heard footsteps, hadn't heard the knock. It was just there, waiting for her when she came back from the grocery store. No envelope. No postage. No return address. Just thick, black card stock. Gold lettering. Embossed. Clean. Quiet. It felt expensive. Like something meant for a wedding. But when she turned it over, the words weren't a celebration. They were a warning. "A debt remembered is not the same as a debt repaid." Mia stared at it for a long time. She didn't drop it. Didn't fold it. Just read it again. And again. "Debts are never destroyed. Only transferred. You chose. Now you are marked." Mia's throat dried as she read the words. Her fingers gripped the edge of the card, but she couldn't tear it. Something about the paper felt… wrong. Not just thick—but old. Heavy in a way that had nothing to do with weight. She looked down. At the bottom, beneath the gold script, was a new symbol. It wasn't the soft, looping sigil carved into Elliot's grave. This one was sharp. Angular. More violent than sacred. It looked like it had been burned into the card, not printed. A brand. It pulsed. Only once. But it was enough. Her skin prickled. Like something inside her had been touched. Named. Marked. There it was. Faint at first—just a shadow under the skin. But as she stared, it darkened. Sharpened. Lines forming. Curving. Bending into shape. That same angular symbol from the card. Etched into her flesh like it had always been there, waiting just beneath the surface for permission to appear. Her breath caught. She touched it. It was warm. Not like a burn. Not like a bruise. But like something alive. Something recent. "No," she whispered. But her reflection didn't argue. It just watched her. And behind her eyes, she felt it—the weight of the choice she made. The debt hadn't vanished. It had simply… changed hands. Mia hit the floor hard, the air rushing from her lungs. The ceiling spun above her, the corners of the room warping like they were breathing. Her heartbeat thundered, not just in her chest, but in the mark itself—pulsing like it had found a rhythm of its own. She stared at the ceiling, cold floor beneath her, heat blooming beneath her skin where the symbol burned. All this time, she thought remembering Elliot would break the cycle. That forgiveness was enough. But the house hadn't let them go out of mercy. It had let them go because it had her now. The debt didn't die with her father. It didn't disappear with Elliot's forgiveness. It passed on. Quietly. Permanently. She was the vessel now. And deep in her bones, Mia understood the one thing no book or folklore had told her— The collector never leaves empty-handed. The windows let in warm sunlight. The walls were freshly painted. Laughter echoed from somewhere deep within—childish, light, and familiar. Mia walked barefoot across the smooth floor, drawn toward the sound. Her fingers grazed the banister as she climbed the stairs. There were no creaks this time. No dust. No darkness. Just rooms filled with memories that hadn't happened yet. She opened a door and found herself in the attic. But it wasn't the cold, haunted attic she remembered. It was a nursery. A real one. Soft blankets, shelves of toys, the faint scent of powder in the air. In the corner stood a crib. And inside it, a baby—sleeping peacefully, wrapped in blue. Mia stepped closer. Her heart pounded in her ears. The baby stirred, then opened his eyes. Not Elliot's. Hers. She backed away. Then she heard the voice. Not Elliot's. Not the collector's. Her own father's. "The debt never leaves the bloodline." She turned— And the house was burning. Then her mother turned. And Mia's smile faded. There was no light in her mother's eyes. Just hollowness. Her hands kept stirring the pot, but the spoon clinked against an empty pan. Nothing was inside. Daniel and Leah weren't speaking anymore. Their movements were stiff, robotic, like dolls being pulled by invisible strings. They didn't blink. Didn't breathe. Elliot looked up from his coloring. He smiled. But there was sadness behind it.v"Mia," he said softly. "This isn't real." The crayons in his hand melted into ash. The walls of the kitchen pulsed—like a heart. Then she saw it again. In the window. The collector. Watching. Waiting. Mia's breath caught. She stumbled backward, knocking over a chair. Elliot stood. "You have to wake up," he whispered. "It's starting again." Mia shook her head slowly, backing away as her father stepped into the room. His clothes were damp with something darker than rain, his footsteps leaving faint red prints on the tile. "No," she whispered. "I didn't agree to anything." Her father's mouth twitched, somewhere between a smile and a grimace. "Deals don't need words. Only choices." The room darkened around them, the edges of everything blurring like wet ink bleeding across paper. "You remembered Elliot," he continued, voice low and breaking. "That was love. That was sacrifice." His eyes lifted—empty, but burning. "But love doesn't erase the cost. It only moves it forward." The shadows thickened. The walls of the house moaned. Mia's hands trembled. "Then what now? What do I owe?"cHer father stepped aside, revealing the open door behind him. Through it, a field of endless dark stretched, pulsing with soft, red light. Shapes moved in the distance—too large to be human, too quiet to be beasts. "You carry the mark now," he said. "You'll know when it's time to collect." The door slammed shut. Mia woke up screaming. She stumbled backward, her breath catching as the floor seemed to ripple beneath her feet. The mark on her chest burned—sharp and searing—like it was being etched into her over and over again. The kitchen faded. No walls. No ceiling. Just endless dark, pulsing with a heartbeat that wasn't hers. The collector towered behind her father now, its veil fluttering like smoke underwater. Silent. Still. Inevitable. "You can't run," her father said, voice calmer now, like it had always known this moment would come. "You didn't end the debt. You rewrote it." Mia's fists clenched. "I saved them. I remembered Elliot. I chose." "And now the choice is yours again," the collector finally spoke—not in words, but in thought. Inside her head. A voice like rusted chains dragging across stone. "A vessel serves… until it is full. Then it spills. Choose who carries the weight next." Mia gasped. "No… no, I won't do that to anyone." The collector stepped closer, its shadow swallowing hers. "Then it remains with you. Until time ends. Until memory fails. Until the weight breaks the spine." The mark on her chest glowed brighter, burning like coal under skin. And Mia understood. This wasn't the end. It was just the beginning of what it meant to remember. She started avoiding mirrors. Avoiding sleep. Avoiding herself. The music box sat unopened on her dresser. She couldn't bring herself to touch it—not since the dream. Not since she'd heard it humming again in the silence, even though it hadn't been wound in days. By the fourth night, Mia had stopped eating. The mark pulsed with a life of its own now. Hot some hours, ice-cold the next. It moved—sometimes visibly. Like something inside her was shifting, trying to root deeper. The dreams didn't stop. She didn't have to be asleep anymore to see them. Elliot's voice in the hallway. Her father standing in the corner of her bedroom. The collector watching from windows she knew she'd locked. She stopped answering Leah's calls. Daniel hadn't reached out again. And every time she passed another person—on the street, in a store, on a crowded bus—they flinched. Like they were brushing up against something wrong. One old woman on the sidewalk crossed herself and whispered, "Shadow vessel." Mia didn't ask what it meant. She already knew. "You carry it now. Not to die with it… But to deliver it." Beneath the message was the same angular symbol as before—but this time, it bled. Actual red smeared across the parchment like a thumbprint. Not ink. Not paint. Blood. Mia's hands trembled as she held the paper. Her heart thudded painfully—each beat slower than the last, like her body was beginning to forget how to be alive. She turned the letter over. On the back, in faint, almost invisible ink, a single name had been written: Leah. Mia stared at it, horror unfurling in her gut like smoke. This wasn't about her anymore. She hadn't broken the curse. She'd passed it on. She dropped the letter like it burned. Her breath hitched, chest rising in panicked gasps. The words etched into her mind like carvings on stone. "Three forget what you regret. One remembers. One replaces. One must collect." Not prophecy. Not warning. Instructions. The collector wasn't watching her. It was becoming her. She thought she'd ended the cycle when Elliot vanished. She thought forgiveness was the cure. But some debts weren't about sorrow. Some debts were jobs. And now she understood why her father had lived in silence. Why the house had locked itself. Why the mirror never showed her reflection quite right anymore. She hadn't survived. She'd transformed. She was the vessel now. And somewhere in the back of her mind, beneath her human thoughts and memories, something ancient began to stir— Counting names. Measuring regrets. Remembering debts owed. And preparing to collect..

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