Hey guys, so I've seen a lot of authors hyping up their own novels but I'm gonna do the opposite.
Instead of praising mine, let me tell you what people might call its "negatives":
—MC yaps a lot.
—-He's shameless, narcissistic and painfully self-aware. (He calls fate, death and all that "exes" because it's his way of coping in a cruel world.)
—His voice dominates most of the chapters.
—The pacing might seem slow but that's how I like it. I enjoy showing his thoughts, personality and every little detail.
Some people see these as flaws and that's fine because everyone's got their preferences.
But if you want a story where,
—The MC is chaotic,
—The academy setting is different,
—Life is actually hard,
—World is actually cruel,
—MC is smart and doesn't make brain-dead choices
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—The plot isn't completely brain-rotting, you might enjoy this.
If you hate slow pacing or talkative characters with lots of personality then no hard feelings but you should maybe skip it.
I welcome criticism but I don't appreciate people badmouthing characters I put my soul into.
Spoilers Below, Read with caution.
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His voice drives most of the story and the pacing looks slow only because I show his thoughts, reactions, and the messy detail but trust me, the plot itself moves fast. In just 100 chapters we've had:
• Orc battle
• Second layer
• Death
• Divine negotiation
• Resurrection
• Revenge kill
• Evolution
• First layer return
• Transmigrator fight
• Leaving the forest
• Demon King capture → successor arc
• Political negotiation
• Academy misadventures
• Bully discipline
• Home visit
• Skill testing
• Another god encounter
• Escape arc
These things happened within mere 100 chapters 😭 and I can't imagine anyone calling this slow paced.
It's just my writing style, I make sure that even with fast pacing… readers aren't overwhelmed and that's why pacing feels even when itself actually not.
And about the romance part, yeah, I haven't really planned much. It's a minor thing, so please don't ask about it 😅 Just read and see how it goes. You can always drop anytime if it's not your cup of tea.