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Chapter 9 - Chapter 8: The Price of Memory

Ashen didn't sleep.

He hadn't in days.

But that wasn't what rattled Riven when she found him again by the fireless pit, a shallow hollow they'd carved into the forest floor and circled with bone ash from the temple's outer sentries. What unsettled her more was how still he sat—like a statue too heavy for grief.

The Lens of Recall hadn't just dredged up the past.

It had rooted something in him.

"You carved your name into a divine tree," she said, softly, but not without warning. "That's heresy in half the Empire."

Ashen stirred only slightly. "Good."

She crouched beside him, cloak brushing the scattered pine needles. "Do you want to die?"

"No," he said. "That's the problem."

He turned to look at her. The hollows under his eyes weren't just exhaustion—they were erosion. The weight of knowledge pressing inward until the skull became a prison.

"I remember everything," he said quietly. "And now the System remembers that I do."

Riven shook her head. "You're being cryptic again."

He took a breath. Not to calm himself—but to anchor something.

"Do you know what happens when a god dies?" he asked.

She raised an eyebrow. "No. I tend to avoid omnipotent entities."

Ashen gave the barest twitch of a smile. Then:

"Their influence doesn't vanish. It stains the world. Their will, their memory, it echoes—changes the rules. The System was built not just to enforce law—but to filter which gods' echoes mattered."

Riven frowned. "You're saying... it's censorship?"

Ashen nodded. "Divine historiography. The System isn't neutral—it picks winners. Deletes the rest."

"And what are you, then?" she asked.

He met her gaze, and for a moment, the moonlight behind him dimmed.

"I'm what got deleted."

They left the temple grounds before first light. Ashen didn't trust the absence of monsters—it was too clean. Like the island was breathing in before a scream.

They moved east, toward the Whispering Vale—a fog-shrouded pass that once served as a minor quest route for early-stage Chosen. In the past, it had been a filler zone. Now, it was glowing faintly with instability.

Temporal seams shimmered along the cliff edges.

Riven noticed them first. "That's not normal fog."

Ashen stopped. "No. It's static bleed."

The world was glitching.

In the early days of the first timeline, Ashen had fought corrupted beasts—monsters driven mad by mana storms or divine infection. But this was different. This was preference decay.

The System didn't know which version of history to commit.

And so, it began to collapse the differences.

They found the first corpse halfway through the vale. Or rather, they found corpses.

Multiple versions of the same person.

All of them were Eira.

Some in golden paladin armor, sword shattered at her side. Others in corrupted vestments, tears still gleaming in frozen eyes. One version wore a blindfold and no mouth—clearly punished by divine judgment.

Riven fell to her knees beside one.

"She... these are all her?"

Ashen nodded slowly.

"The system is purging timeline variants. Versions of her that broke canon."

Riven looked sick. "You've seen this before?"

Ashen's voice was hollow. "I was this before."

Further in, the fog grew thick with screaming.

Not human.

Not beast.

Just raw narrative collapse—the world failing to decide which truth was true.

Ashen paused by a crooked altar half-swallowed in mist.

It showed carvings of a Hero.

But every time Riven blinked, the Hero changed.

Kaleid.

Ashen.

Someone she didn't recognize.

A child.

Then nothing at all.

Ashen stepped forward and touched it. The altar flared with hostile recognition.

"Anathema Detected. Purging Narrative Contradiction."

Riven drew her staff. "Ashen—"

He spun, shoving her back as the altar exploded into light.

From it, a creature spilled forth.

Not a monster.

Not a man.

Something between.

It had Ashen's face.

But its eyes were sockets of code, and its mouth moved out of sync with its words.

"YOU WERE NOT CHOSEN."

The mimic struck first, blade lashing out in a crescent of corrupted light.

Ashen parried with a grunt, his palm glowing not with divine blessing—but rejection. The Anathema flared.

The mimic screamed.

"YOU REJECTED SALVATION."

Ashen growled. "No. I earned it, and then you gave it to someone else."

Their blades met in a shockwave that split the fog.

Riven circled behind the mimic and chanted a spell—pure disruption, not elemental. Her magic wasn't designed to destroy, only unbind.

The mimic roared and turned—Ashen took the opportunity.

He drove his blade into the mimic's heart and whispered:

"You were never me."

The creature collapsed, not into blood, but into error messages. Red strings of rejected code and memory fragments.

Then silence.

Afterward, Ashen and Riven sat beneath a weeping cedar, its branches heavy with temporal residue.

"You fought like you've killed yourself before," she said quietly.

He didn't answer immediately.

Then: "More times than I can count."

She looked at him, eyes sharp. "I want to understand. But I also want to help."

"You already are," he said.

And this time, he meant it.

The Whispering Vale opened into a field of broken statues.

Not marble. Not stone.

People.

Frozen in poses of agony, mouths open in screams. Ashen knew them. Early testers. Those who had failed during the beta run of the Trial System, before the official "first" summoning ever took place.

Wiped from record.

Buried in the margins.

He walked among them, reverent.

"They were here first," he said.

Riven shivered. "What happened to them?"

"The System changed the canon. It didn't like their endings."

And for a moment, they stood surrounded by the ghosts of erased lives.

Ashen reached the center of the field, where a pedestal held a relic—a cracked mirror, no reflection visible.

He touched it.

A memory poured into him.

Not his.

Someone else's.

A boy. Pale. Fragile. Chosen as the Hero but collapsed on the first day. Laughed at by the instructors. Rewritten out of the logs. Died nameless, sobbing.

Ashen fell to his knees.

"This... this wasn't supposed to be seen."

Riven held him as he shook.

But the mirror did not fade.

It etched a message into the stone.

"Let him be remembered."

Ashen stood, eyes burning.

He turned to Riven.

"We're not just fighting gods," he said. "We're fighting history."

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