Hey, notH3ntaiTeddy here. After Scene 5 I re-read the entirety of OTC and noticed a major problem: Scene 1 and 2 are written as if I was drunk. Thus, I and CatsDragon decided to rewrite those 2 scenes after I've finished writing Scene 6. Originally I planned to rewrite the entire story once I've finished "Volume 1: The Emperor's Desires" but I am content enough with the quality of scenes 3 through 5 at the moment. Scene 1 and 2 being shitty enough to scare away potential readers( thanks StarShine_Xx_HD) made me decide to pull the revision forward. Hope you're not too disgusted with my style of writing in those scenes and push through or put it on halt until I've finished it.
PS: I am currently working on an OTC Roblox game on the side with CatsDragon as my ideas-guy( as he is here). So join our Roblox Community ("Telinge", ID: 33495840) if you're interested.
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THE STORY SPLIT INTO SCENES( BY notH3ntaiTeddy) AND VOLUMES
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VOLUME 1: The Emperor's Desires
Scene 0: INTRODUCTION -> Chapters 1 through 4
Scene 1: [UPDATE] -> Chapters 5 through 9
Scene 2: FACTORY -> Chapters 10 through 17
Scene 3: MAGIC AND COUNCIL -> Chapters 18 through 27
Scene 4: REMEMBRANCE -> 28 through 37
Scene 5: THE DEVIL -> Chapters 38 through 47
Scene 6: FALSE ABILITY -> Chapters 48 through []
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VOLUME 2: [] (Yes, there are concepts being thrown around already)