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Chapter 5 - Chapter 5: Beneath the Hollow Sky

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[Panel 1]

Wide shot of the burning village. Flames rise into the sky. Dead silence except for crackling fire.

Narration: "Wraithcall Atoll wept that night. The monster they sheltered… had awakened."

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[Panel 2]

Kael stands over the trembling boy. His claws raised. His eyes — glowing and lifeless.

Narration: "But somewhere, deep inside the beast… something stirred."

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[Panel 3]

Close-up of Kael's eyes. One glowing white. The other — flickering, as if resisting.

Kael (internal): "Stop… not him… not the boy…"

SFX: Thump. Thump. (heartbeat rising)

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[Panel 4]

[Inner Realm Panel]

Kael stands in darkness, surrounded by writhing ghostly forms.

Spirits (in chorus): "You are one of us! Unleash the howl! BURY THEM!"

Kael: "NO!!"

Kuro (emerging from shadows): "You're weak. Soft. That boy would have left you to die."

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[Panel 5]

Flashbacks appear around Kael — the boy offering him soup, smiling.

Kael (tears in his dream-eyes): "He didn't fear me… he was kind…"

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[Panel 6]

Back in reality — Kael's claw trembles mid-air. The boy squeezes his eyes shut.

Narration: "Kael fought… for control. For that boy's smile."

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[Panel 7]

Suddenly —

SFX: CLAAAAANG!!

A trident smashes into Kael's side, sending him crashing through a burning hut.

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[Panel 8]

Maelis stands, body bloodied, barely standing. Breathing hard.

Maelis: "Back… off…"

Villager (off-panel): "Maelis?! He's alive!"

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[Panel 9]

Maelis picks up his trident again, this time with resolve.

Maelis: "You were never the enemy… I see it now. You were just drowning."

[Panel shows Kael roaring, bursting out of rubble.]

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[Panel 10]

Maelis (thinking): "Then let me throw you a damn rope."

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[Panel 11]

Maelis charges. Trident glows faintly with light.

Maelis: "Tidebreaker Style — FINAL FORM…"

Maelis (yelling): "LAST SURGE: DROWN THE DEMON!!"

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[Panel 12]

Full-page panel. Maelis leaps and drives his trident into the earth — a shockwave sends Kael flying toward the seashore.

SFX: THUUUUUUMMMMM!!

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[Panel 13]

Kael hits the shoreline. Sea water touches his body. Instantly, steam rises. His berserk form begins to melt away.

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[Panel 14]

Kael's body thrashes, screaming in agony as Kuro is pulled back.

Kael (internal): "NO! Let me—LET ME STAY!!"

Kuro (fading): "You'll never be rid of me…"

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[Panel 15]

Kael's body convulses — then falls limp on the wet sand. His claws vanish. His eyes roll back.

SFX: Silence.

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[Panel 16]

Maelis stumbles, falls to his knees, then collapses face-first beside Kael.

Both are unconscious. The tide washes over them.

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[Panel 17]

Villagers slowly approach, trembling. The boy runs toward Kael.

Boy: "He's not bad! He saved me! He stopped!"

Villager 1: "He… he cried while he rampaged… like he was begging someone…"

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[Panel 18]

Later. The two lie in a hut, bandaged. Maelis wakes first. Looks at Kael's sleeping form.

Maelis (softly): "You weren't the monster, huh… just the cage."

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[Panel 19]

Maelis steps outside. The villagers gather.

Old Man: "You're leaving, aren't you?"

Maelis: "…I have to. He needs someone to walk with him."

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[Panel 20]

The boy tugs Maelis' cloak.

Boy: "Will you keep him safe?"

Maelis (kneeling, smiling): "I will. We'll both keep each other safe."

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[Final Panel]

Kael opens his eyes for the first time since the battle.

Kael (weakly): "…Why… help me?"

Maelis (off-panel): "Because pain like yours doesn't deserve to be alone."

Narration: "From the ashes of blood and sorrow… the Revenant Pirates were born."

TO BE CONTINUED.

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