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Reborn as a kid with a broken system

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A ordinary office worker died due to the poison given by a jealous co-worker and died miserable with heart full of grievance. when he opened his eyes again he was is a hands of a strange man beside another baby and found out he was reborn when he was in a deep contemplation a cold mechanical voice chimed in his ears. ding upgrade failed ding upgrading 948th time upgrade failed ding upgrading 10000th time ding congratulations for the host on winning 10000 consecutive sign ins.......read the story to know more
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Chapter 1 - REBIRTH AND SYSTEM

imperial capital,

The sky was pitch black while lights illuminating the city were the roads were filled with bustling pedestrians.

In the 18th floor of ting Xia office building two men in their 20's sat in the office working diligently the whole building was empty where only the light near their desktop were illuminating. The man named Bai jingting turned off his computer and stood up as he leaned in on the side of the desk.

Bai jingting taped on Zhang Yunlong's desk asking

"Zhang Yunlong aren't you going back today and celebrate your promotion to permanent employee with Lu Yuxiao" 

Zhang Yunlong lifted his head and look at jingting and repli9ed

"No, Lu Yuxiao had to work overtime today. we planed to celebrate on the weekend"

Bai Jing Ting face turned cold with a grievance and he immediately covered it up with a friendly smile as he walked towards his desk and took on unopened bottle saying

"Come on Xiao long just relax and take a break you have to start new from tomorrow. Here have a drink first" 

Zhang Yunlong took the bottle with a graceful demeanour and took a sip before setting it aside and continued him work saying

"thanks Jing"

Bai Jing ting wore a smug smile as he exclaimed 

"I heard you guys are planning to hold a wedding reception soon" 

"It's not confirmed yet, let's not talk about it. what about you aren't you packing your things we both become the permanent workers from tomorrow on"

saying that Zhang rubbed his throat he was about to reach out towards the bottle. Zhang Yunlong was about to open the lid only to feel immense pain in his abdomen as instinctively reach ed out for his stomach clenching it tightly as he fell to the ground mooning in pain. Gathering his energy he called out for help as he look into Bai Jing Ting with a pleading look muttering 

"help"

Bai Jingting calmly crouched down as he look at Zhang Yun Long with a cold eyes devoid of any panic as he was thoroughly prepared for everything stating 

"oh, Yun long my Yun long this is what get for getting in my way. I will make sure to treat YuXiao well"

Zhang Yun Long's eyes widened in disbelief as his eyes turn red gathering his last bit of energy and asking 

"why.. ugh"

Zhang Yunlong was about to say something but spat a mount full of blood on to Jing Ting's face and succumb to his last breath and fell onto the floor motionless.

Zhang Yunlong and Bai Jing Ting were close friends since their freshmen year during their college day and Joined the software company together non other than Bai Jingting's best friend, he and Zhang Yunlong joined the company at a same time, During their freshman year Bai Jing Ting had a crush on a school beauty Lu Yu Xiao and planned to confess to her after the military Training only to found out that she and Zhang Yun Long to be in the relationship since their high school days. 

From then on Bai Jing Ting started feeling inferior to Zhang Yunlong in every aspect neither family status or studies. His Inferiority gradually turned into hatred, Later they joined one of the top 500 company in the country with a internship pay of 10,000. But out of 4 interns company only intended to make only two as a permanent employees'.

Due to Zhang Yun Long's exceptional talent he ranked first among four followed by Bai Jing Ting who secured second place due to exceptional talent in making friends with higher ups but due to his lousy coding skills he was placed him in the marketing department.

Eventually he was Once again placed behind Zhang Yun Long Bai Jing Ting patients shattered and completely filled with hatred. Bai Jing Ting started contemplating a way to take down Zhang Yun Long, The director of team one called him to the room for a cup of tea. At last Bai Ting found a chance to pent-up his grievance.

According to director he had a crush on a most beautiful girl in the department how much he pursued she always reject him with a cold and frost in her through. But the moment Zhang Yun long entered the office her frosty demeanour collapsed and started to get close to Zhang Yun Long.

Upon hearing to Directors words Bai Jing Ting was dumbfounded Because he the only one in the whole company know that the girl director was talking about was non other than Zhang Yun Long's cousin. Bai Jing Ting's quickly formed a plan in his head and agreed to help him and left the room 

Bai Jing Ting decided to completely erase Zhang Yun Long from this world and push the whole blame onto department Director. So with the help of director Bai Jing Ting procured a poison that can kill a person without being detected and injected it into The bottle before head. 

IN Xiangcheng

The Xiangcheng No.1 People's Hospital out patient ward, the man in his 20's was walking toe and foe outside the operation room the cries of a women can be heard through out the floor. in the operating room the women with a pale face and delicate features was lying their devoid of any strength with doctors and nurses pursuing her not to give up. With the encouragement of people around her she successfully gave birth to a baby.

"wahhhhwahhhh"

the room was filled with a soft and melodious cry of a baby a radiant smile adorned everyone's face as they clapped in joy, the leading doctor picked up the pair of scissors and separated a baby from mother by cutting Umbilical-core. the Nurse raped the baby in a warm towel and took the baby out side.

out side the ward Su Qian was standing in front of the operating room and gazed at the door with a hint of joy and worry. seeing Nurse coming out of the operating room he hastily walked forward and took the baby from the nurses hand. 

the moment was interrupted by a scream from the operating room immediately another nurse ran out informed Su Qian,

"their was another baby in the wombs"

Upon hearing this Qian was momentarily stunned in place trying to grasp the situation the head nurse placed the baby into Qian's arms and ran back inside. Once inside Jiao was trying hard to push the baby gathering her every last bit of strength. After a prolong effort doctors successfully lifted the baby up, Jiao's eyes shined with joy but due to excessive push of her limit she fell into unconsciousness. Lead doctor immediately came to Jiao's sit and examined her pulse seeing that she was just exhausted doctor sighed inb relief as he walked out of the room before separating Umbilical-core.

Su Meng(Zhang Yun Long) look around the room and found he was surrounded by doctors as a hint of relief wash over him yet he found that some thing was a miss and tried to lift his body while looking gazing down. A Baby no i was in a body of a baby, Wait no way did i just reborn into a body of a baby with a brain and soul of an adult. A curios and smug smile appeared on Zhang Yun Long's face. As, Meng was contemplating how to take revenge a cold and mechanical voice rang in Zhang Yun Long's ears causing him to close one eye.

"congrats on your rebirth host, you have awakened a system upon your successful rebirth"

Zhang Yun Long surveyed the surroundings trying to discern the source of the sound. when the sound rang once again saying

"Would you like to bint"

Zhang Yun Long was stunned at first and then broke into a smile as a thought stuck him. Zhang Yun Long thought to himself *i actually awakened my golden figure composing himself Zhang Yun Long swiftly thought in his mind saying *bind* started Binding, Binding in progress 10% 15% 19% 26% 29% 34% 38%43% 47%51%56%62%69%74%80%84%90%99%

"Ding Binding successful" 

Mean while The Leading Nurse Walked towards Su Qian and handed Zhang Yun Long to Qian and said

"Congratulations sir, you had twin boys"

Qian was dumbfounded and then broke into smile with joy and happiness after few seconds of joy he promptly enquired with the Nurse asking with a solum expression

"How is my wife doctor"

Nurse smiled reassuringly saying

"She was fine, just lost consciousness due out of tiredness"

"i see"

Qian said as he exhaled in relief, Zhang Yun Long was looking at the system interface when a gentle hand nuzzling along his cheeks Raising his head His small and round eyes meat with Qian's Su Qian smiled lightly at Zhang Yun Long before retreating his hand.

Zhang Yun Long look at Qian's face thinking*is he my father in this life* before focusing his gaze towards the system when the system started emitting red light suddenly followed by system prompts.

"Ding due to the limited energy on the blue planet, the energy in the system demolishing"

"Ding, the system was being initialization emergency upgrade"

"Ding, upgrading for the 2nd time upgrade failed"

"Ding, upgrading for the 3rd time upgrade failed" 

"Ding, upgrading for the 4th time upgrade failed"

"Ding, upgrading for the 5th time upgrade failed"

"Ding, upgrading for the 6th time upgrade failed" 

"Ding, upgrading for the 7th time upgrade failed"

"Ding upgrading for the 73th time upgrade failed"

"Ding upgrading for the 73th time upgrade failed"

"Ding upgrading for the 73th time upgrade failed"

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"Ding upgrading for the 84th time upgrade failed"

"Ding upgrading for the 85th time upgrade failed"

Ding, upgrading for the 3rd time upgrade failed hang Yun Long's ears were buzzed with the systems voice. Zhang Yun Long's cursed it under his breath as he drifter into deep sleep 

"Damn did it broke already"

The Next Day, In one patient ward

Xu Jiao was sitting on the bed beside her two baby cradle were placed on either sides while Su Qian was sitting on the stool feeding soup to Xu Jiao. after finishing Su Qian placed the bowl aside enquiring

"honey did you decided on the names"

Xu Jiao pondered for a minute while looking at the two babies on the side before saying

"what about naming eldest as Su Ming and Youngest as Su Meng"

Qian thought for a moment before saying

"That sound's great"

beside them Zhang Yun Long woke up due to Systems excessive ringing

"Ding, upgrading for the 10,000 time upgrade successful"

"congratulations for won a chance to sign in 10000 consecutive times"

Zhang Yun Long was shock upon seeing the last notification, Composing himself SU Meng quietly echoed in his mind 

"System Sign-In" 

"Ding, sign in successful you won 10 trillion US $"

"Ding, sign in successful you won the skill card"

"Ding, sign in successful you won Pagani Huayra BC roadster"

"Ding, sign in successful you won one box gold bars"

"Ding, sign in successful you won Ferrari F80" 

"Ding, sign in successful you draw 100000 spies"

"Ding, sign in successful you draw body strengthening pills"

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"Ding, sign in successful you draw Bugatti Chiron"

"Ding, sign in successful you won Cessna citation Mustang"

"Ding, congratulations you won 100000 drivers"

As the system started issuing rewards SU Meng look at his parents up who were being lovey dovely, feeling SU Meng's gaze both of them look at Su Meng Qian smiled lightly. seeing how harmonious Su Meng started to remember the memories of his parents as how good they have been to him flood back the care and love there show the more he think about them the more his hatred towards Bai Jingting intensified. The drops of tears started cascaded through the corners of his eyes due to the dept of memories SU Meng lost control over his emotions and cried out loud.

Jiao and Qian both exchanged glances. As Su Qian stood up and walked towards the cradle and lifted Su Meng as he hugged him into his hands while saying

"chuuu....chuuu....chuuu...., why is our little meng crying, is our meng hungry"

After few minutes, Su meng gradually stop crying and fell asleep Su Qian slowly placed Meng back into the cuddle before sitting back onto the chair. Lowering their voice Su Qian and Xu Jiao started talking about future plans'. As the conversed a piercing cry broke the tranquillity. Su Qian raised his head only to see Su Ming crying this time

"ahhhhhhh"

hearing this Su meng next to him woke up and look at Su Ming. Su Qian waked and pick up SU Ming up seeing Su Meng woke up he smiled sweetly at Su Meng asking

"are you hungry"

Su meng lowered his head and look at his stomach and nodded his head

"oh my you can understand what i'm saying"

saying that Su Qian stock Su meng head and walked towards the desk and flipped two bottles on the table and opened the milk powder scoop up the powder into the bottle pored water from the kettle beside placed it back on. stirred them up, checked the temperature and closed the lid.

picking up one of the bottle he walked towards Su meng and said while leaning in

"can you drink yourself"

Su meng nodded in astonishment and hold the bottle and gulped it down. Su Qian smiled slightly with a proud face left towards the table, picked up another bottle on the table and brought it towards Su Ming's mouth. Su Ming dragged it into his mouth while gulped it down.

Su Qing placed the bottle back onto the table while slowly placing Su Ming into the cradle he walked towards Su Meng seeing Su Meng sleeping while hugging the bottle he smiled gently and while leaning in he lifted Su Meng's right hand up and took the bottle away.

At committee district third floor 302,

The door to the room opened Su Qian and Xu Jiao walked in holding baby in each hands. Su Qian gently helped Xu Jiao to the sofa and placed Su Ming and Su Meng into the prepared cradle and sat in the sofa beside Xu Jiao. embracing her he gently said

"take rest from work, i will go back to work today"

Jiao look into his eyes as she tenderly asking

"Can't you stay at home and spend some more time with our son's"

Su Qian planted a sweet kiss on Jiao's forehead saying

"I actually intended to take three more days off from work but our Savings for the past few years have already depleted due to exorbitant hospital fees"

upon hearing this Xu Jiao's face turn pale and sorrow seeing this Su Qian agitated enquired

"Are you alright, did you feel unwell any where"

hearing this the tears cascaded through as she exclaimed

"if it weren't for me you would have lived happily with your parents and family"

Su Qian interjected Jiao's thoughts saying

"you too gave up on your dream to come with me"

Su Meng who was listening to them closing his eyes thought to himself

*no, wonder no one came to see us when we are in the hospital i thought they are orphans it seems like there left the family for each other you have my respects my dear parents*

while he was in thinking the system notifications keep on ringing in his ears

"Ding sign in successful you won a skill card"

Note: upon opening you are assigned to the random skills 

"ding congratulations for winning energy crystals x 10"

"Ding, congratulations sign in successful you won 10 trillion US $" 

"Ding, congratulations sign in successful you own 100000 bodyguards"

"Ding, congratulations sign in successful you won Lamborghini Revuelto"

"Ding, congratulations sign in successful you won 100000 Assassins"

"Ding, wishing the host a pleasant days a head. The energy with in the system have been depleted and was shutting down. Please find a way to recharge to system" 

saying that the voice of the system was gradually faded

*eh, shutting down system how can i collect the items i won*

as the words fell A black screen with a golden letters appeared in front of Su Meng the screen shows

"name: Su Meng(Zhang Yunlong)

Age: 0 years

Race: Human

Title: None

Strength: 5/100

Agility: 2/100

Luck: 6/10 

Energy: 0/100

Strengthening pills: 100

Bank Balance: 100,000,000,000,000 US 

skills: None (10 skill cards)

personal:

Maids 1,000,000

Drivers 1,000,000

spies 1,000,000

Hackers 1,000,000

Body Guards 1,000,000

Assassins 1,000,000

Man servants 1,000,000

Doctors 1,000,000

professional managers 1,000,000

Butlers 1,000,000 

Biologists 1,000,000

scientists- medicine 1,000,000

scientists- Energy 1,000,000

scientists- Mech 1,000,000

energy crystals: 1000

Su Meng frozen in the place by seeing the things he won with joy and astonishment. looking through the panel he found a cart symbol on the right corner of the panel. SU Meng press the card with curiosity and expectation in his eyes.

the panel Infront of su Meng shifted the another panel it shows a the rows and columns each square was filled with a items and each panel was numbered on the right bottom,

energy crystals x 1000 

super cars x 100

Air planes x 20

bank cards x 100

changing the tab

skill cards x 20 

Gold Bars x100 boxes 

body strengthening pills x 100

in the next tab

the personals of different professionalism are placed categorized with age groups and citizenship. Su Meng opened the second panel and clicked on the skill cards followed by the message on the screen showing

"Ding, do you want to open the skill cards"

"yes"

Su Meng Clicked on yes button with his small and delicate arms. the bold and clear letters appeared on the screen Su Meng opened his eyes wide open with astonishment.

"damn system, what use does it do me" 

On 12 July 2010, In capital, funeral hall located in centre the photo was place on the middle of the hall, the funeral hall was filled with around 25 members who are family and few friends of deceased. Outside the room was plated with the name of the deceased "Zhang Yun Long" where the entrance is filled with large bouquet of flowers.

Infront of the photo offerings are placed where the guests entering offered incense in front of Zhang Yun Long before delivering their condolences to his parents Zhang Wei Long and Zhu Xiao Xiao beside them stood a fatigue girl who was around 17 years old she was Zhang Hui who was Zhang Yun Long's Biological sister opposite them stood a man and a girl they are now other than Lu Yu Xiao and Bai Jing Ting, Behind them stood few colleague from the company

a Couple adorn in the luxurious yet simple attire walked in followed by a a beautiful girl in her 20's it was non other than Lin Mei Zhe Zhang Yun Long's colleague and cousin. both elders paid their respects to Zhang Yun Long's portrait followed by Lin Mei Zhe, before sitting next to Zhang Wei Long and Zhu Xiao Xiao.

As soon as they saw her the colleague's standing Behind Bai Jing Ting started whispering 

"Isn't that the senior Lin what's her relationship with Zhang Yun Long"

"I Heard that Zhang Yun Long and Lin Mei Zhe were in a relationship"

"If she was his girl was Zhang Yun Long's girl friend what about the girl in front"

"No way is Zhang Yun Long maintaining two girl friends" 

Mean while Zhu Xiao Xiao called Lin Mei Zhe a side and said something as she pointed her finger towards Lu Yu Xiao, Lin Mei Zhe nodded and walked towards Lu Yu Xiao and others.

She greeted everyone and turned towards Lu Yu Xiao saying

"I Heard from aunt Zhu that you are Zhang Yun Long's girl friend"

as she extended her hand intended to shake hand's with Lu Yu Xiao 

"Yes"

Lu Yu Xiao shook hands with Lin Mei Zhe as she scrutinised Lin Mei Zhe . Lin Mei Zhe continued saying

"Since it's our first time meeting let me introduce myself i am Lin Mei Zhe Zhang Yun Long's cousin sister"

"Shock 1"

"shock 2"

"Shock 3 "

"Shock 4"

"Shock 5"

"Shock10"

Everyone in the room who didn't know about their relationship opened their mouths wide open in shock as they look at Lin Mei Zhe in a awe. One of the female colleague who had a close relationship with Lin Mei Zhe stepped forward asking

"Aren't you and Zhang Yun Long in a relationship"

"No, actually i already had a fiancée and was about to marry next month. "

"Then why didn't you clarify the rumours before"

"well Zhang Yun Long said me not to since it will help me avoid higher hierarchy from pursuing me especially Our Department director"

"Ah, Lin Mei you don't know how Zhang Yun Long died right

"No, i Only heard he died thin morning"

"Well Officials came by this morning and declared that Zhang Yun Long was poisoned by Director Song out of jealousy which lead to Yun Long's death"

Upon hearing to her colleagues words Lin Mei Zhe 's face turned pale filled with grievance and guilt she fell to the ground as tears stated falling through the corners of her eye lids. All gathered around with a hint of curiosity and pity.