The damp, suffocating alleyway smelled of decaying garbage, stagnant sewer water, and stale rain. Jagged, dark shadows stretched long and twisted beneath the pale, sickly light of the covered moon, masking Li-Wen's motionless form as he stepped beyond the sagging brick archway. His boots made no sound whatsoever against the uneven, slick cobblestones—not even the faintest scuff of worn leather. He moved not as a man of flesh and blood, but as an incorporeal phantom gliding through a forgotten tomb.
In front of him, deep within the filthy recess of the dead-end passage, two scar-faced enforcers belonging to the notorious Phantom Rat Gang remained completely oblivious to his presence. The larger guard—a hulking, bald brute with a pockmarked face and yellowed teeth—had his massive, calloused hand knotted tightly into the young girl's matted, soot-covered hair. With a cruel, casual flick of his wrist, he gave her small, fragile head another sharp yank backwards, forcing her to face the cold stone wall.
The little girl let out a choked, desperate whimper, her tiny, bare feet barely grazing the muddy ground as she struggled with all her remaining strength to keep her weight off her pulling scalp. She was impossibly thin, her collarbones jutting sharply beneath the filthy, oversized rags that hung off her frail frame like a wet shroud.
"You're a completely worthless little rat, aren't you?!" the bald guard barked, his hot, alcohol-laced breath puffing out into the freezing night air as a foul cloud. "Two copper coins? Two pathetic copper coins for a full day of standing at the southern gates?! That doesn't even cover the moldy crust of bread you chewed on yesterday morning! If you don't bring back useful intelligence on the new cultivator faces entering the city by tomorrow night, I'll personally break your arms and throw you into the river!"
"P-please, sir..." the little girl gasped out, her voice barely a thread of raspy sound, broken by severe dehydration and terror. Tears carved pale, clean tracks through the thick layer of dark chimney soot on her hollow, sunken cheeks. "I stayed at the gate all day... I swear I did... but the guards... the guards drove all us children away with heavy wooden clubs... no one... no one spoke to me..."
"Shut your filthy mouth!" the second guard snapped, stepping forward with an irritated growl as he uncoiled a heavy, iron-weighted leather whip from his belt. He pulled the thick weapon back, his arm tensing as he prepared to lash her thin, exposed shoulder. "A brutal beating is the only language a street brat's thick skull understands anyway. If we don't discipline you now, you'll get lazy and ruin the Boss's investment—"
He never finished the sentence, nor did the whip complete its arc.
The air in the narrow alleyway didn't shift with a loud gust of wind, nor did a flashy light illuminate the stone walls to signal an attack. Instead, an absolute, unnatural drop in temperature swept through the passage so rapidly that the ambient moisture on the brick walls instantly froze into microscopic crystals of white frost.
Before the second guard could bring the heavy leather whip down, a slender, pale hand materialized out of the dark shadows and clamped firmly around his wrist. The iron-like grip was so absolute, so immovably dense, that the guard felt the delicate bones beneath his skin creak violently under the pressure in a fraction of a second.
"What the—!" the whip-wielding guard grunted, his eyes widening in pure shock as he instinctively tried to yank his arm back.
He couldn't budge an inch. It felt as though his arm had been driven into a mountain of solid granite or clamped within a heavy industrial vice of forged steel. Panic spiked through his veins. He turned his head angrily, fully expecting to see a rival gang commander or an interfering city guard patrol.
Instead, he met a pair of cold, pitch-black eyes staring back at him from beneath the deep shade of a faded traveler's hood. There was no anger in those eyes, no righteous hatred, and no trace of human warmth—only a chilling, profound emptiness that sent a tidal wave of primal terror straight down his spine, freezing his blood solid.
"Who the hell are you?!" the guard yelled out, his voice cracking with sudden, uncontrollable panic. "Do you have any idea who we are?! We're from the Phantom Rat—"
Li-Wen offered no verbal response. He didn't even bother to glance at the man's face.
He simply flexed his fingers slightly. A microscopic, razor-thin thread of concentrated, sword-attribute spiritual energy shot directly from his fingertips into the guard's wrist joint. The destructive energy traveled up the man's arm like invisible lightning, instantly rupturing his meridians, shattering his spinal column into fine powder, and utterly obliterating his internal energy center in less than a single heartbeat.
The guard's jaw went slack. The terror in his eyes vanished instantly, replaced by an empty, glazed stare as his life force was quietly, surgically, and completely severed from his body. He collapsed straight down into the cold mud like a wooden puppet whose strings had been violently severed, making nothing more than a soft, douse thud.
The larger, bald guard froze completely. His dull mind struggled frantically to process the absurd sight playing out before him. One second his partner was shouting threats, and the next, he was lying dead on the cold cobblestones without a single drop of blood being spilled or a loud blow being struck.
"J-Jim?" the bald guard stammered out, his iron grip on the little girl's hair loosening slightly out of sheer, unadulterated disbelief. "Hey! Jim! What the hell is wrong with you?! Get up!"
Realization struck him an instant later like a bolt of thunder. His eyes darted toward Li-Wen, and a wave of raw, defensive fury instantly overwhelmed his fear. "You killed him! You crazy bastard, you're dead! The gang will skin you alive for this!"
He reached furiously for the heavy, rusty iron cleaver hanging at his waist with his free hand, opening his dirty mouth to scream at the top of his lungs for the rest of his patrol squad stationed at the end of the market street.
He never managed to draw the rusted blade, nor did a single note of his loud alarm escape his throat.
Li-Wen had already closed the distance between them without making a single sound. Moving with effortless, ghostly speed, his left hand shot forward through the dark, his thumb and forefinger clamping around the bald guard's throat with suffocating precision, instantly crushing his vocal cords into paste before the scream could form. Simultaneously, Li-Wen's right hand reached down and caught the little girl beneath her fragile arms, gently and smoothly prying her away from the dead man's loosening grip before her body could hit the filthy ground.
The bald guard thrashed wildly, his bloodshot eyes bulging out of his head as he clawed desperately at Li-Wen's forearm with both hands, his fingernails ripping against the tough fabric of Li-Wen's sleeve. But Li-Wen's arm remained utterly motionless, like an iron pillar anchored into the earth. With a subtle, barely visible twist of his wrist, a sharp, internal vibration snapped the guard's neck cleanly.
The entire struggle was over almost as soon as it had begun. Two ruthless, grown men—calculating predators who had terrorized the defenseless children of the slums for years—had been completely extinguished in under five seconds, without a single loud scream echoing out to alert the busy streets nearby.
Li-Wen casually tossed the second heavy corpse against the damp brick wall, letting it slide down into the dark shadows alongside the first body. He immediately leaned down and stripped their crude leather pouches with practiced efficiency, securing four low-grade spirit stones, a small handful of copper coins, and a crude iron key. He didn't care about the money for himself, but in a lawless, predatory city like Obsidian Pass, material resources were practical necessities for survival.
Having cleared the threat, he turned his full attention back toward the ground.
The little girl was curled into a tight, shivering ball against the base of the crumbling brick wall where Li-Wen had carefully placed her. She had her small, bruised arms wrapped firmly over her dirt-covered head, her thin shoulders shaking violently in rhythm with her gasping breaths. She had just witnessed the two terrifying men who had beaten and starved her for months die right in front of her eyes in complete, eerie silence. To a child who had known nothing but physical abuse and cruelty from powerful adults, her terrified mind convinced her that this silent, hooded figure standing in the gloom was an even worse monster who had come to end her miserable life.
"P-please..." she whimpered, her tiny voice muffled against her wet, filthy rags. She squeezed her eyes shut as tight as she could, waiting for the painful blow, the lash of a whip, or the cold edge of a blade to strike her frame. "Don't... don't hurt me... I'm sorry... I'm so sorry..."
Li-Wen stood tall above her, his hand resting quietly upon the hilt of his concealed blade. For a long, heavy moment, the dark alleyway was completely silent save for the howling winter wind sweeping through the rooftops above and the ragged, shallow breaths of the starving child at his feet.
Looking down at her impossibly fragile, shivering frame, Li-Wen felt a strange, unfamiliar ache tighten deep within his chest. He saw no threat in this broken creature, no hidden malice, no deceit, and absolute zero spiritual cultivation. She was simply an abandoned, forgotten soul, discarded by a cruel and unforgiving world that prioritized raw power above human dignity.
Li-Wen slowly knelt down on one knee, lowering his posture until he was at her eye level in the mud. He unclasped the thick, fleece-lined traveling cloak from his own shoulders—the dark, insulated cloak that had kept him warm through the freezing, lethal nights of the Abyssal Valley—and held it out gently.
"They won't hurt you anymore," Li-Wen said. His voice was low, deep, and perfectly steady, entirely devoid of the cold, lethal killing intent he had unleashed mere moments ago.
The little girl flinched violently at the sound of his voice, but when no painful strike followed, she slowly parted two of her small, soot-stained fingers and peeked out through the gloom.
Through her tear-filled, blurry vision, she saw a young man with sharp, clean, and striking features kneeling in the dirt before her. He wasn't sneering at her, he wasn't laughing at her misery, and his hands were not raised to strike her down. Instead, he was holding out a thick, clean, and incredibly warm cloak, using his own body to shield her small frame from the biting, icy draft blowing through the alley.
"C-you... you killed them?" she whispered out, her raspy voice trembling so severely that her small teeth chattered loudly in her mouth.
"They are gone," Li-Wen answered simply, his dark eyes meeting hers with absolute stillness. "They will never touch you again. Can you stand?"
The little girl tried to push herself up against the wet brick wall, her tiny hands pressing into the cold stone, but her small legs wobbled unsteadily under her weight. The deadly combination of prolonged starvation, severe bone bruises on her knees, and a burning, untreated fever caused her vision to go completely black. She stumbled forward, her frail body collapsing toward the muddy cobblestones.
Before she could strike the hard ground, Li-Wen reached out with effortless grace and caught her gently. The exact moment his bare hands made contact with her small back through her thin rags, he felt an alarming, intense heat radiating from her skin. Her skin felt as hot as burning coals, her pulse dangerously rapid, shallow, and weak. Her small body was on the absolute brink of total internal shutdown.
She won't survive the next two hours in this cold if her toxic fever stays at this level, Li-Wen realized, his brow furrowing tightly in silent concern.
Without a single second of hesitation, Li-Wen wrapped his heavy, fleece-lined cloak tightly around her frail, emaciated frame, bundling her up like a fragile piece of precious glass to protect her completely from the freezing night air. He carefully lifted her up into his arms, resting her small, filthy head securely against the solid juncture of his shoulder and chest.
The little girl was extraordinarily, tragically light—so light that she felt more like a bundle of dry straw than a living human child. As the heavy, warm fabric of the cloak enclosed her shivering body, and the steady, radiant warmth of Li-Wen's internal energy seeped gently through her frozen bones, her tense, terrified muscles slowly began to relax. She leaned her dirty, feverish face instinctively against his warm chest, her weak, bruised fingers clutching tightly onto a small corner of his inner tunic as if anchoring herself to life.
"Hold on tightly," Li-Wen murmured softly, adjusting his secure grip under her small legs.
Moving with swift, fluid precision, Li-Wen launched himself upward, leaping quietly onto the high roof of the adjacent brick building. He melted silently into the dark, foggy skyline of Obsidian Pass, leaving the silent, cold corpses of the two gang members far behind in the muddy alleyway below. His immediate destination was the quiet, isolated courtyard house he had scouted earlier near the northern cliffs—a place where he could finally tend to this broken, flickering spark of life in absolute peace.
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