At the hospital:
Doctor: "It's good news. The black mark hasn't appeared in the last six months. Even though we don't fully understand it, we'll continue monitoring and researching it, Mr. Devis." š
Jonathan: "Thank you, Doctor. We'll be leaving now."
Doctor: "Of course. Take care."
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On the way home, the car was unusually quiet.
Jonathan glanced at Justin. "Why so silent? Aren't you happy? The black mark is goneā¦ it shouldn't return." š
Justin's voice trembled slightly. "Does that meanā¦ she'll leave us? Amberā¦ she'll leave us?"
Jonathan's eyes darkened. Reality hit hard. š¶
Amber had always said: until the black mark disappears completely, she would stay. Once it was goneā¦ she could leave.
The silence in the car was heavy as they drove onā¦ until suddenly, the vehicle swerved.
A group of masked people appeared from the shadows, forcing the car to stop. Before Jonathan could react, they struck him down and dragged both him and Justin into the night.
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In an abandoned warehouse, dimly lit by a single swinging bulb, a figure stood, seething with years of rage.
He held a photograph in his hands, eyes burning with hatred.
Unknown figure (voice cold, venomous): "Finallyā¦ Mrs. Amber Devisā¦ you will feel the same pain I felt eleven years ago." š
The shadows shifted, echoing the promise of revenge.
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If you want, I can continue this with a tense Amber POV scene as she senses Jonathan and Justin are in danger, leading into a suspenseful rescue sequence.
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