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Chapter 15 - Chapter 15: The Eye Beyond the Code

The clouds above Konoha didn't just clear—they parted like curtains before a stage. Fractures of sky folded outward, revealing a cosmic void with that single, immense eye floating beyond the layers of space-time.

It wasn't the Rinnegan. It wasn't even a Sharingan in the traditional sense. It was older. Hungrier. Designed not to see, but to review.

Naruto stared back, standing firm despite the tremor racing down his spine. This was no hallucination. The eye didn't blink. It recorded. It judged.

Kai's voice came from behind him, small and tight. "That's the Observer…"

Sakura was already shielding her chakra pathways, closing herself off from the recursion field. "No. Worse. That's the Author's Witness Node."

Naruto clenched his fists. "You're saying it's the thing watching all the timelines?"

Sakura nodded grimly. "It logs divergences. Catalogs inconsistencies. It doesn't just observe—it flags anomalies for deletion. We just triggered its attention."

In the wake of the eye's appearance, the air around them buzzed. And then... something stepped through.

It wasn't human. Not really. But it wore a human's shape—like a mannequin cut from narrative cloth. Its skin shimmered like pages, its joints folding with editorial creaks. A black quill jutted from one forearm, and on the other, a red ledger flared open with moving text—live updates of the present.

"Designation: Protagonist exceeds narrative bounds," the thing intoned in a voice that echoed with static. "Correction protocol initiated."

Naruto stepped forward, wind chakra spiraling faintly around him. "You're the Author?"

"No," the creature replied. "I am the Draftkeeper. You are off-script."

The eye above dilated.

With a whisper of turning pages, four more figures dropped in—identical constructs, each bearing a different weapon: a seal, a pen, a blade, and a stopwatch.

Sasuke's remaining clone attempted to intercept—but was erased mid-movement. Not killed. Deleted.

Kai gasped. "Their weapons… they're powered by editorial commands."

"They're deleting actions before they happen," Sakura said. "We can't beat them with jutsu alone."

Naruto gritted his teeth. "Then we go off-page."

He closed his eyes, tapping the recursion engine now embedded in his soul. It wasn't just a power source—it was a manuscript. A corrupted version of every Naruto that had ever existed. With a thought, he flipped through timelines. Borrowed techniques. Summoned experience.

His hand glowed red.

A jutsu unfurled in his palm—a Rasengan layered with ink-stroke kanji around its shell. Not an explosion of chakra, but of concept.

"Chrono Rasengan," he whispered.

Sakura widened her eyes. "That's a banned form—"

"Too late."

Naruto hurled the technique straight into the Draftkeeper. The impact didn't destroy the figure—it rewound it. The construct folded backward, caught in a loop of its own creation, stuck reliving its first command.

But the others didn't pause. The stopwatch-bearer lunged, flicking time forward. Suddenly Naruto staggered—his body aged six minutes in six seconds. Muscles cramped. Sweat dripped. His clones burst into mist.

Kai intercepted with a warping seal, slashing her palm and dragging Naruto into a temporary compression dome. "Five seconds. That's all I can buy you."

Sakura joined them. "The only way to win is to disrupt their rewrite signal."

"They're pulling from the Master Draft," Naruto said. "So let's cut their tether."

Sakura reached into her scrolls and pulled out a blade—not metal, but code-forged. Her own creation. "This is a Refusal Blade. Designed to sever connections between authorial commands and narrative constructs."

Naruto raised an eyebrow. "You had that the whole time?"

"I built it while exiled."

"You're terrifying."

"Only to Editors."

They burst from the dome. Naruto surged left, drawing the attention of two constructs, while Sakura and Kai flanked the ones on the right. The moment one swung its quill, Kai blinked—teleporting mid-ink and replacing herself with a shadow copy. The draft's command hit the decoy, dissolving it instantly.

Sakura spun and slashed—her Refusal Blade cutting straight through the ledger-hand of one enemy. Its command stream cut off mid-sentence, it jittered, began to rewrite itself into nonsense, and vanished.

"One down!" she shouted.

But the eye above began to glow brighter.

Naruto felt a pressure build in his chest—like a vacuum pulling at his very identity. "It's not just watching anymore," he said. "It's… loading something."

He was right.

In a swirl of unreality, the sky tore open one more time—and a scroll larger than the Hokage Monument descended, unfurling like a divine decree.

The Master Script.

Kai turned pale. "That's the Absolute Narrative. The thing that dictates which version of you really exists."

And it had only one visible command:

[Naruto Uzumaki: Terminate Thread]

Naruto laughed bitterly. "Guess my character arc got too wild."

Sakura snarled. "We erase that line. Now."

As the script began to descend, Sakura, Kai, and Naruto combined their strength. Sakura flung her blade. Kai channeled a recursion field to slow the scroll's descent. Naruto formed a clone chain—thousands of versions anchoring the sky with chakra threads.

But it wasn't enough.

The command still glowed.

And then…

A hand caught the script.

Another Naruto.

But this one was from a timeline long dead. One where he'd become the Sage of All Paths. A version overwritten and forgotten. Yet here he was, smiling, radiant with celestial power.

"You forgot one thing," the Sage Naruto said.

The eye widened.

"We're not just stories," he said, holding up his hand. "We're rewrites waiting to happen."

He slammed his palm into the scroll.

The Absolute Narrative cracked.

And every Naruto ever born screamed in unison.

The sky shattered.

The constructs dissolved.

The eye blinked—and closed.

For now.

Sage Naruto faded, whispering as he vanished, "You bought time. Use it."

Naruto dropped to his knees, panting.

Kai steadied him.

Sakura sealed the remnants of the shattered scroll into a vault.

No alarms. No more enemies.

But the world… was still watching.

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