Chapter 12: The Grand Bestowal of Divine Boons
The sages' boon-giving ceremony continued as the divine aura in the royal chambers intensified.
First, Rishi Atri stepped forward, his wise eyes filled with reverence. "O child, you are destined to shake the very foundations of this world. Strength is the backbone of Dharma, and for the upholder of Dharma, I grant you unparalleled might. I, Atri, bless you with the boon of Strength!"
**[Ding! Boon detected: Strength! Boon amplification in process… 10000x boost applied!]
[Congratulations! Host has obtained Supreme Limitless Might!]**
A radiant glow enveloped Rudra as his body absorbed the divine power. Supreme Limitless Might ensured that his strength was boundless, surpassing even the mightiest of deities.
Next, Devi Anusuya, a motherly figure of immense compassion, stepped forward. "O divine child, Dharma needs a protector, one who ensures justice is upheld. For this reason, I bestow upon you the protection of Dharma itself!"
**[Ding! Boon detected: Dharma Protection! Boon amplification in process… 10000x boost applied!]
[Congratulations! Host has obtained Supreme Dharma Enforcer!]**
A golden divine energy merged into Rudra. Supreme Dharma Enforcer not only granted him the authority to uphold Dharma but also made him immune to all curses and debuffs while ensuring that Dharma itself shielded him from harm.
Then, Rishi Bharadwaj, the great sage of knowledge and medicine, came forth. "Life and vitality are sacred. The power to heal is one of the greatest gifts. I, Bharadwaj, grant you the boon of Divine Healing!"
**[Ding! Boon detected: Healing! Boon amplification in process… 10000x boost applied!]
[Congratulations! Host has obtained Supreme Divine Restoration!]**
A soothing energy merged into Rudra, granting him unparalleled mastery over healing, capable of restoring any injury, curing any disease, and even reversing death under certain circumstances.
Rishi Gautam followed next, his gaze calm and wise. "A mind that comprehends the universe is a mind that rules destiny. I, Gautam, bestow upon you the boon of Knowledge!"
**[Ding! Boon detected: Knowledge! Boon amplification in process… 10000x boost applied!]
[Congratulations! Host has obtained Supreme Enlightened Mind!]**
A celestial script glowed on Rudra's forehead, signifying that he now possessed boundless wisdom, capable of understanding the deepest mysteries of the cosmos.
Rishi Jamadagni then stepped forth, his aura carrying an ancient authority. "Prana is the source of all power. Without it, even the strongest warrior is nothing. I, Jamadagni, bless you with Prana Supremacy!"
**[Ding! Boon detected: Prana Supremacy! Boon amplification in process… 10000x boost applied!]
[Congratulations! Host has obtained Supreme Prana Sovereign!]**
A torrential force of Prana surged through Rudra's body. Supreme Prana Sovereign ensured that he would never exhaust his Prana, possessing unlimited reserves and the ability to control Prana like no other.
Rishi Kashyap, the father of many celestial and demonic beings, then approached. "Speed is the essence of battle, of life itself. I, Kashyap, bestow upon you the boon of unmatched swiftness!"
**[Ding! Boon detected: Speed! Boon amplification in process… 10000x boost applied!]
[Congratulations! Host has obtained Supreme Celestial Velocity!]**
A whirlwind of energy swirled around Rudra, enhancing his movement to unimaginable levels, surpassing even the swiftest deities.
Then, Asur Guru Shukracharya stepped forward, his gaze deep and knowing. "A true ruler, a true warrior, must never falter. Willpower is the foundation of victory. I, Shukracharya, grant you Indomitable Will!"
**[Ding! Boon detected: Indomitable Will! Boon amplification in process… 10000x boost applied!]
[Congratulations! Host has obtained Supreme Unyielding Spirit!]**
A surge of divine willpower reinforced Rudra's soul, ensuring that no force in existence could ever break his resolve.
Dev Guru Brihaspati then stepped forward, radiating a divine aura. "The elements of the world bow to the one who understands them. I, Brihaspati, grant you the boon of Elemental Affinity!"
**[Ding! Boon detected: Elemental Affinity! Boon amplification in process… 10000x boost applied!]
[Congratulations! Host has obtained Supreme Elemental Dominance!]**
Rudra's aura flickered with fire, water, wind, earth, lightning, and all elements, signifying his total mastery over nature's forces.
Then, Lord Hanuman himself stepped forward, his presence shaking the heavens. "Strength and Siddhis go hand in hand. I, Hanuman, grant you the boon of Ashta Siddhi!"
**[Ding! Boon detected: Ashta Siddhi! Boon amplification in process… 10000x boost applied!]
[Congratulations! Host has obtained Supreme Siddhi Creation!]**
A celestial glow surrounded Rudra, signifying his dominance over all mystical abilities known as Siddhis, granting him divine supernatural powers.
Lastly, the great sage Ved Vyas himself came forth, his voice calm yet commanding. "A body must be indestructible to uphold Dharma. I, Ved Vyas, grant you the boon that you can absorb sunrays to train your body"
**[Ding! Boon detected: Boon amplification in process… 10000x boost applied!]
[Congratulations! Host has obtained Supreme Absorption!]**
A golden light covered Rudra, solidifying his body immune to all harm and can absorb anything in existance to train your body!.
As the final boon was granted and all the sages took their seats, a sudden surge of divine energy erupted from Rudra's body. Golden-red radiance spread across the heavens, and then, a divine voice—an Akashvani—echoed across the cosmos:
THE DHARMA ENFORCER OF THIS ERA HAS BEEN BORN
A celestial tremor spread across the world as the divine proclamation signified the arrival of a supreme force, the one who would uphold the very balance of existence.
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