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Title: Road to a Ninja – Chapter 1: Awakening
Andrew's POV
Blinking awake, the first thing I heard was a robotic voice:
[Ding! System Functions Activated]
Chakra: Unlocked
Ninjutsu: Unlocked
Congratulations! You have unlocked the perk: Uchiha Blood
This gives you the potential to awaken the legendary Sharingan when you're ready.
Starter Pack Opening…
Uchiha Clan Shirt (Mask Optional)
Fire Style: Fireball Jutsu Scroll
Ninja Weapons: 60 Kunai & 60 Shuriken (Auto-restock every 4 days)
Basic Book of Sealing
Training Room Unlocked
(A space to train alone and grow stronger through simulations)
Uchiha Clan Taijutsu Unlocked
3 Basic Academy Jutsu Scrolls
Starter Mission: Road to a Ninja
Objective: Learn the 3 Basic Academy Jutsu
Reward: Title - Genin
Bonus: Item Shop Unlocks
"Alright," I muttered to myself, accepting the mission.
Opening my system menu, I selected the "Basic Training Room." Instantly, I was transported into a white space with two giant timers next to the exit doors.
"Huh… looks like I get two hours in here. Probably a four-hour cooldown after that?"
System: "Correct, Host. A clone of you will replace you in the real world while you train in here."
"Nice," I grinned, stretching. "Let's do this."
I opened up the scrolls and decided to start with the Transformation Jutsu.
"Ox… Rabbit… Ram… Transform!"
A puff of smoke exploded around me, and I stared into the mirror. First try: messy blonde hair, orange jumpsuit… no headband.
"Close, but not quite."
I ran through the hand seals again.
Poof!
There it was—whiskers, spiky blonde hair, the infamous orange jumpsuit… a perfect copy of Naruto Uzumaki.
Ding! Transformation Jutsu Learned!
"One down, two to go."
[Time Skip – 2 Hours Later]
[Ding! Host has completed their first training session.]
Mission Complete: Road to a Ninja
Reward: Shinobi Headband
Item Shop Unlocked!
Training Room Simulation Settings Unlocked
(You can now customize who and what appears in the training room.)
Two new scrolls appeared in my inventory: Wall Walking and Water Walking.
"Well, that went faster than I expected," I said, a little surprised. "But I can't go back in the training room until tomorrow. That sucks."
Still, not bad for a six-year-old. I'd need some serious stealth if I ever wanted to train outside. It's probably best to keep my abilities hidden until canon starts. Just existing here might mess things up more than I realize.
Scratching my head, I sighed.
"Well, no point dwelling on it. Might as well go meet my new 'family'… Ugh, that left a bad taste in my mouth." I cringed.
"Maybe… after some time here, I'll get used to it. I hope."