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Six months later, the apartment was almost empty.
The walls that had once held laughter, tears, and long silences were stripped bare — only the faint outlines of where picture frames used to hang remained, like quiet ghosts.
Mira stood in the doorway, holding a single cardboard box. Inside were the few things she'd decided to keep: a few books, a worn sweater she loved, the sunflower keychain from that street stall. Everything else was gone. It wasn't grief that filled her chest. It was space.
And for the first time, she didn't rush to fill it. The move had been her idea. Not because she needed to run away, but because she no longer needed to stay. The lease had ended, and so had the story. Her friends had offered to help pack, to celebrate her "fresh start."
But she'd politely declined. She wanted this last goodbye to be hers alone — quiet, clean, unremarkable. The new place was small, a sunlit studio on the other side of the city, close enough to the park but far enough from the memories. There was a balcony, a sliver of sky, and enough room for one person's peace. Ethan had called once after she blocked him, from a different number. She didn't answer.
He'd sent an email — long, apologetic, filled with nostalgia and all the right words, all too late. She read it only once, sitting by the window, her expression unmoved. The words didn't cut anymore. They just sounded like a man mourning a version of her that no longer existed. She didn't reply.
Not out of spite — but because silence was the most honest answer she could give. On her last day in the old apartment, Mira took one final walk through the rooms.
The kitchen — where she'd learned the taste of loneliness.
The living room — where they'd laughed once, before laughter turned brittle.
The bedroom — where she'd learned that a shared bed could still feel like solitude. She placed her keys on the counter, one last small sound echoing in the empty space.
Then she opened the door, stepped out, and didn't look back. The evening air outside was soft, tinted gold. She drove with the windows down, wind in her hair, city lights stretching ahead like a promise. Her favorite song played on the radio — a melody she hadn't listened to in years because it used to remind her of him. Now, it reminded her of herself.
She sang along quietly, her voice unsteady at first, then stronger. At her new apartment, the light was fading into dusk. She unpacked slowly — one box, one memory at a time. Books on the shelf. Mug on the counter. Sunflowers in a small glass vase. When everything was in place, she sat on the floor by the balcony door, legs crossed, watching the first stars appear.
She thought about the woman she used to be — the one who begged to be chosen, the one who thought love meant staying no matter how much it hurt. And then she thought about the woman she'd become — the one who walked away without apology. Mira smiled. A real smile this time, not a careful, practiced one.
There would still be lonely days, quiet mornings, old memories that flickered like static. But there would also be new days — days she hadn't yet lived, untainted by what was lost. She raised her cup of tea to the night sky. "To giving up," she whispered.
Then, after a pause, softer:
"To beginning again." The city hummed in the distance, and somewhere in that hum, life moved forward — quietly, naturally, beautifully. Mira closed her eyes, the breeze brushing against her face. She wasn't waiting anymore.
She wasn't explaining anymore.
She wasn't surviving anymore. She was simply living.